by RonDen
Truly awful. If this story was edited I can only imagine how terrible it was originally.
"taunt" for taut? Confusing run-ons and mis-placed modifiers? The editor needs to be edited.
As to the story, can't improve on the previous comment.
I thought it was funny and entertaining. Having worked in a hospital with a bunch of attractive nurses, this scenario is hilarious. I've never been one to criticize over mistakes, I'm always more interested in story telling ability than grammar. So to me a 4/5.
yea fuck them. the story is what counts when i have my cock in my hand,not spelling