All Comments on 'The Coma Patient in Room 319'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I want the time I wasted reading this back

Truly awful. If this story was edited I can only imagine how terrible it was originally.

Pirate TregarePirate Tregareover 12 years ago
needs another edit

"taunt" for taut? Confusing run-ons and mis-placed modifiers? The editor needs to be edited.

As to the story, can't improve on the previous comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Funny

I thought it was funny and entertaining. Having worked in a hospital with a bunch of attractive nurses, this scenario is hilarious. I've never been one to criticize over mistakes, I'm always more interested in story telling ability than grammar. So to me a 4/5.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

yea fuck them. the story is what counts when i have my cock in my hand,not spelling

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