Reply to Anonymous - that was no subtle dig - it was just a subtle cream pie story
The author does tend to write cream pie stories about husbands sharing or watching wives - in this case - think about it - who got the better deal?
The wife who is now happier and is with a bigger cock that she loves or
the husband who is a losing whiner whose friends fucked his wife in front of him and who left him after that.
If the new couple has kids . They will need a substitute story as to how Mommy & Daddy met. He's a writer & she's a English teacher . So no problem. Five stars for droll to death wordsmithery . All I ask is that there be no sequel.
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Anonymous10/14/11
Laughable
this woman will be miserable when Tibor moves on to someone better. no matter how much everyone avoids bringing it up, women are cursed by biology, while men are blessed. men age like wine and women age like cars. this line that was in the story, "Being in your early 30s with a job is the best thing in the world." is 100% true. women who are still single in their mid-30's suddenly become desperate, since they fully know the abyss that waits for them when they hit 40, because every woman knows at least one other woman who is in their 40's, alone and miserable, and either divorced or never married. when they were young, they had the delusion that they had plenty of time, until reality finally set in. those years of "self-discovery" were years of youth wasted.
i know the story alluded to Diane ending up with Tibor, and Tibor to be a successful writer, but i find this highly improbable. men are by nature superficial creatures. and what exactly does she have to offer? and if Tibor is such a great catch, why does he have to settle for a woman who cheated on her husband with a group of men right in front of him, all because he watches football games once a week at the house? and why exactly are we supposed to sympathize with her? the male equivalent of this is a guy who's fed up with his wife's book reading club at their house, and then has a reverse gangbang with all the women. would this also be acceptable?
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Anonymous10/14/11
Well, if you put your "bros before hoes" then you better be prepared.
She's better off without her loser ex-husband. Any guy that would disrespect his wife and degrade her in front of his frineds doesn't deserve her. I don't blame her for fucking all of them, serves him right. Douchbag.
I may have been distracted by the character titles, and the way the dialogue was presented.
That's the only thing I can think of that my have been the distraction.
As far as the storyline goes, it was good, and I think I would have enjoyed the story more if it would have been presented in a more conventional manner.
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Anonymous10/15/11
didn't make any sense...
she's made at her husband so she becomes a complete degraded slut and ruins her life??? ummmm, yeah, ok misterstan. It's a shame you don't have any women in your life. Obviously the thought that your story is backwards and completely illogical didn't even enter your mind did it?
. . . and that's a good description for a fast read on a Friday afternoon.
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Anonymous12/08/11
Fun?
Wow, that's the understatement of the year. But, I guess, it takes all kinds, that's why authors like this survive.
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Anonymous12/08/11
RandomHardon
ate a creampie
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Anonymous12/08/11
Author self-aware?
Looks like the author chose to lampoon DWhuedogg, RandomHardon and the rest of the "want to be cucked" crew with this story. Guess he must read the comments and hate mail (which is fan mail from self-loathers) - well done
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Anonymous01/14/13
Do you ever write a story that is not trying to piss everyone except the cucks off???
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Anonymous11/09/15
Written by a horny teenager?
With an IQ of 10? I mean really. This was just awful.
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Anonymous03/04/16
Story arc
works with the format. Could have used a little more development but gave it 5
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Anonymous08/28/16
Just awful, couldn't finish, I mean, 'Connor' is talking ABOUT Dianne to DIANNE?
English
Excellent
Subtle dig at the wannabe cucks cruising the site looking for cuck stories to jerk to then comment negatively. Well done.
Conor epitomizes the 13 year old mindset of these wannabe cucks, the attitude, the language, you hit the nail on the head.
WBC4EVAH
Reply to Anonymous - that was no subtle dig - it was just a subtle cream pie story
The author does tend to write cream pie stories about husbands sharing or watching wives - in this case - think about it - who got the better deal?
The wife who is now happier and is with a bigger cock that she loves or
the husband who is a losing whiner whose friends fucked his wife in front of him and who left him after that.
BROs. HOs AND
family has to be 1st/ teasing is OK for closeness but you have to draw the line early/ TK U MLJ LV NV
Happy Endings for Everyone (Yah)
If the new couple has kids . They will need a substitute story as to how Mommy & Daddy met. He's a writer & she's a English teacher . So no problem. Five stars for droll to death wordsmithery . All I ask is that there be no sequel.
Laughable
this woman will be miserable when Tibor moves on to someone better. no matter how much everyone avoids bringing it up, women are cursed by biology, while men are blessed. men age like wine and women age like cars. this line that was in the story, "Being in your early 30s with a job is the best thing in the world." is 100% true. women who are still single in their mid-30's suddenly become desperate, since they fully know the abyss that waits for them when they hit 40, because every woman knows at least one other woman who is in their 40's, alone and miserable, and either divorced or never married. when they were young, they had the delusion that they had plenty of time, until reality finally set in. those years of "self-discovery" were years of youth wasted.
i know the story alluded to Diane ending up with Tibor, and Tibor to be a successful writer, but i find this highly improbable. men are by nature superficial creatures. and what exactly does she have to offer? and if Tibor is such a great catch, why does he have to settle for a woman who cheated on her husband with a group of men right in front of him, all because he watches football games once a week at the house? and why exactly are we supposed to sympathize with her? the male equivalent of this is a guy who's fed up with his wife's book reading club at their house, and then has a reverse gangbang with all the women. would this also be acceptable?
Well, if you put your "bros before hoes" then you better be prepared.
She's better off without her loser ex-husband. Any guy that would disrespect his wife and degrade her in front of his frineds doesn't deserve her. I don't blame her for fucking all of them, serves him right. Douchbag.
Comedy
It is either that or the author does not understand what the phrase means.
It didn't quite work for me
I may have been distracted by the character titles, and the way the dialogue was presented.
That's the only thing I can think of that my have been the distraction.
As far as the storyline goes, it was good, and I think I would have enjoyed the story more if it would have been presented in a more conventional manner.
didn't make any sense...
she's made at her husband so she becomes a complete degraded slut and ruins her life??? ummmm, yeah, ok misterstan. It's a shame you don't have any women in your life. Obviously the thought that your story is backwards and completely illogical didn't even enter your mind did it?
Fun . . .
. . . and that's a good description for a fast read on a Friday afternoon.
Fun?
Wow, that's the understatement of the year. But, I guess, it takes all kinds, that's why authors like this survive.
RandomHardon
ate a creampie
Author self-aware?
Looks like the author chose to lampoon DWhuedogg, RandomHardon and the rest of the "want to be cucked" crew with this story. Guess he must read the comments and hate mail (which is fan mail from self-loathers) - well done
Do you ever write a story that is not trying to piss everyone except the cucks off???
Written by a horny teenager?
With an IQ of 10? I mean really. This was just awful.
Story arc
works with the format. Could have used a little more development but gave it 5
Just awful, couldn't finish, I mean, 'Connor' is talking ABOUT Dianne to DIANNE?
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