by Samuelx
yet more racist crap from the racist Literotica loves to support
Anonymous ought to get over him or herself because the comment is idiotic and not true!
It is very true. This is one of the most racist and offensive authors on any site.
A very good story outline. It reads well as it is, but I would have enjoyed it more if there had been more showing and less telling. More dialogue to let the reader experience the main character's situation and thoughts... more descriptions of sensory experiences as she is involved in the fight and then treated unfairly by the nursing staff and guards...
Can you get anymore contrived or mundane? For all your blather about not being racist, everything you wrote was as racist as it gets. The black guy was hot, nice, hung and the white guy was chubby, mean and presumbably unendowed. Thanks for ruining another story.