I Am Not A Slut

Thank you

Wonderful story will look for more from you.

Uncommon

And very good writing.

Didn't finish it. The good writing got me through it but the unrealistic plot distracted me. I know this writing is erotic, so shouldn't be held up to literary writing standards, but it was just so unrealistic and cheesy that it makes it hard to imagine. That just doesn't make for a good story. Sorry, but you have talent, the plot just disagreed with me.

NICE

BELIEVABLE , MAYBE , MAYBE NOT, BUT A WELL WRITTEN STORY

Good story. Sometimes the descendent becomes the opposite to the ancestor. I know a pair who are wives swappers and their child became roman catolic pastor.

I was enjoying it until she was into the old man

Then I stopped reading and rated it 1*. Smart young women don't marry old men.

Well written

and an interesting take on the life of a trailer town girl.
People do not like to be condemned for what their parents were or are, but it happens all the time.

You do like big age gaps between your lovers. DWorck will have to hand out a whole string of ones!

She didn't fit Carville's definition of "trailer trash".

I thought it was a good tale.

smart young women always marry men ten or more years older

it makes a more successful marriage and makes having children not be a financial crisis

Now that one is a good fairy tale -

The ending was sweet and the story so implausible - it is perfect heh -

No particular part is impossible or even unlikely - but altogether it is a remarkable sequence.

The universe works...

While reading this story, my son starting playing Bolero.

Sometimes you have to smile.

Thanks for the great tale.

smp

good but...

What is here is good writing, but there is too little interaction between the two that the 'romance' is about.

It's all backstory.
And then one day they look at each other and say they are in love.
The End.

your stories are a joy to read, just wish there was more to them