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Good story, crazy audience
I know I'm late to this party, but good story. I enjoyed it, although I did find some of the character actions at the end a bit odd. No big problem.
However, what I find really amusing is the anonymous idiots flaming you for this story. They must be incredibly insecure in their own identity to be so viscerally upset by the actions of this imaginary character. Incredible.
Interesting
thanks for the offering.
Not badly written, but still no fun to read.
And you'll soon learn that arguing with the "anons" on the internet is a complete waste of time. You're on a porn site where everyone is anonymous. And no matter if you write what you consider to be the best erotic story ever, people will bomb you. Regardless of the fact that it's just a story. I didn't like it because she just turns into a slut too fast. She didn't do it for him, she did it because she liked it. And while most men might fantasize about their wife acting like a slut, none of them want to actually witness that behavior. So, in your imaginary tale, it's time to divorce the whore and move one. There! That's the bible thumpers viewpoint for you! Even though I've never been in a church or read the bible in my life.
A Real Meat-jerker,BUT
Really hot sex,and the porn action seemed very realistic.
I just don't see how the couple who've been together since "the sandbox" and have only experienced sex with each other can make it through this cheating. Watching his wife sucking,fucking,anal,DP,bukkake with 5 huge cocks,and loving it is not something that any man can handle,I would think. Besides,even if he swings a 7 inch tool,trying to fuck his wife is gonna be like entering the Lincoln Tunnel!(Her is the Holland Tunnel!) ~ And now that she's likely to become a porn queen,able to fuck and suck all the biggest rods in the business,how long will she really share that close connection with wimpy,er I mean hubby?~ ~ He should have dragged her ass out of there as soon as he saw her topless talking to the director!
In any case,HOT story,with plenty of torid action,and another wimpy husband eventually paying a price.
Read This Again,and It REALLY Bothers Me!
"Deal with it," she said, turning to Scottie for her instructions.
The asshole husband needs to "deal with" then! Drag her off the fuckin' set! If she resists,and insists,tell her that the marriage is over and mean it! If she still does it,bite the bullet and leave her. She obviously does not respect your feelings,and the relationship,and has just been turned on to the point where she just wants those big cocks.
If he's too much of a wimp to enforce his wishes,then this is just another sick cuckold story and a total bad joke!
Actually, pretty good.
This is, after all, an erotic site. They needed money really bad. Opportunity knocked. She responded. It bothered him, of course. She told him to "get over it". Rightly or wrongly he apparently did. Maybe it damages their relationship in the long run, but that's for the author to decide, depending on whether or not he or she pursues it.
Love the unique aspects of your story
I know the story has been up for a while, but I wanted to give you kudos on a story with some very unusual elements. I do wind up reading a lot of stories with similar characters and situations, so I like the twists you used. The husband in the porn business, the couple who is really passionate about each other, the wife who loves her husband but wants to experience a truly wanton encounter, the idea that you can bang a lot of dudes, but still be in love with your man, these are all great!
I enjoyed your story a lot, thanks for sharing it.
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cuck shit.
don't listen
Don't listen to all the idiots on here telling you it was cuck shit etc. If they don't like it they can stop reading. I suspect they were all hard and jerking off and loved it, just jealous that they don't have the talent to write anything or ever have the opportunity to enjoy the experience for themselves. Keep up the good work. I loved it.
@watcher_uk
he may not listen, but this still is what it is, brit cuck.
Great story
Waiting to read the follow-up
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