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wow!
i like!!!! patiently waiting for the next chapter
ON THE JOB
4 MEET AND 1 ENTERS....2 LEAVE 2 STAY,,,TK U MLJ LV NV
Oh Yes!
Omg you must continue this story! It is 2 good! I felt myself about to cry for Nicole at the end and i dont usually pick the side of the "girlfriend" of a married man! Matteo is a bastard! Lets hope the great doctor can fix up our girl! lol
waitin for the next chapter
A good beginning please continue.
Wonderful!!!!!
I'm in. Let's go:)
Ready for the ride as well
This is good as long Rafe is no rebound.
Hurry & post another addition ....
Wow what a messed up begining but, I'm so curious as to where this story is going. I think it's going to be good ...
wow, a hell of a way to start a new romance. can't wait to see how it unfolds, so please keep writing :-)
More please.
What a tragically beautiful story! Well done!!! I am anxious to read future installments.
Whoah!
That's all I've got, just Whoah! 5 stars and I can't wait to read more.
wow
way to start with a bang! shit what else is there to say, you rock!! kudos
NICE!!
Nice story, but please,please finish sibling rivalry. I like where this story seems to be going, however, Sibling Rivalry is the BOMB!!!
Very nice read
WHAT A START
AND A LONG AND ROUGH ROAD AHEAD I SEE, SHOULD BE A VERY INTERESTING RIDE
Damn
I'm already hooked. I like the complexity of your story line. Can't wait for more :)
more more more please
love your stories.. please make this right becuz she needs to move on. maletto is not good for her cuz if he really did care for her he would be with her.
im in love
With this story already. It reminds me of my own relationship.. I can't wait for the rest :)
Pleasee
Finish, this is so good
ok ok
Where is the next chapter...I'm up at 2 am droolin lol
I would love to know what happens next.
Wow! talking about drama!
This story has drama, love, hate, remorse, etc....all the elements to make a good story! Please don't stop here!
Wow! talking about drama!
This story has drama, love, hate, remorse, etc....all the elements to make a good story! Please don't stop here!
DRAAAAMA
Loving it.....please update soon.
This needs to be continued. It's so dramatic. I love it!!!!!! -DC
Where's the rest of it?
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?
Where is the rest of this fabulous story?
You're torturing me here
Please continue. I was tooo cought up in this story, my gosh, why did it end this way?
I don't mean to be rude, or put pressure on you, but it would be really great if you finished your stories. Or if they are just scenes from life, please let us readers know that they are complete. We get hooked and then it seems to come to naught.
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