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by Quietmahoganystorm

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MSNJMSNJover 12 years ago
Hotttt

Azz story. Shit that made me happy for real tho. If you do go further with it cool beans. If not write another one and start from the 1st day of meeting to the 10 or 20 yr anni. Good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Simply

EXCELLENT!!! Just loved it!

QuietmahoganystormQuietmahoganystormover 12 years agoAuthor
Story gap

Crudola! I mentioned that the twins in this story are eight, then in the sequel to it, "Wake up call" they are 10 years old. The twins should be ten in both instances. Unfortunately I didn't pay attention to that detail in writing the sequel.

Curses! Alas, I'm not perfect & hopefully didn't confuse anyone reading the two stories.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 12 years ago
Damn

to have a husband like this!!!

Black_Dragon_PrincessBlack_Dragon_Princessover 10 years ago
Awww SHIT YEA!!!!!

Now I KNOW where my sweetie got the idea for what he did to me last night!!!! ;3

Marklynda2Marklynda2over 1 year ago

Short but very sweet. Loved it! I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (personal experience?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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