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by MSNJ01/14/12

Hotttt

Azz story. Shit that made me happy for real tho. If you do go further with it cool beans. If not write another one and start from the 1st day of meeting to the 10 or 20 yr anni. Good writing.

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by Anonymous01/21/12

Simply

EXCELLENT!!! Just loved it!

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Story gap

Crudola! I mentioned that the twins in this story are eight, then in the sequel to it, "Wake up call" they are 10 years old. The twins should be ten in both instances. Unfortunately I didn't pay attention to that detail in writing the sequel.

Curses! Alas, I'm not perfect & hopefully didn't confuse anyone reading the two stories.

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by THELOVELY1GLO04/01/12

Damn

to have a husband like this!!!

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Awww SHIT YEA!!!!!

Now I KNOW where my sweetie got the idea for what he did to me last night!!!! ;3

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