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HERMANS HERMITS COMMENT
in the next to last sentence. TK U MLJ LV NV
Not any better than the
first part. And no I did not finish reading this part either. What a waste of time.
Getting up
For a stroke piece I suppose it's okay, however, in the literary sense it's lacking a definitive presence. There is no background, no buildup, no twist. There are, at best, hints behind a veil, but that's all. And the plot is...well, there is no real plot. In short, it's as if someone transcribed a short of a porn video. The writing is decent, but all the descriptive prose in the world won't help if there is nothing to grab the reader. Unless, all they want to do is some grabbing.
pure
Pure garbage
Wake up
The public is not buying this preverted toilet leavings..
poopchootkaboose
sex crazed cornhole loving, nothing like a trip up the poopchoot
What kind of perverted fool writes such trash.
And, the answer is: a perverted fool.
What
It took over 20 years for her to find out he would supply studs for her?
With the way she looked - is this strange lover really new?
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