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awwwwwwww
just beautiful...
thank you
yes
An old story but very well done. Please continue.
Thanks
Thanks for commenting.
I don't think I can write a sequel to this chapter alpineskier, it's a story that's future can be imagined. I'll try to write down my imagination if I can, but I don't promise anything. Thanks again for liking it and taking the time to comment on it.
Beautiful story!
Great writing
oh wow.....
that was so sensual and natural feeling! keep going!
Warm Smile
Very beautiful and sensuous and HUMAN, as we should be...
Keep on going (writting). Please
Awesome
It is nice to read a truly romantic story.
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Amazing
That is one teriffic story. Very sensual. I wasn't looking forward to winter this year but now, bring it on. Your writing, selection of the appropriate words and grammer are excellent. Thank you for contributing this story and I look forward to reading more of your compositions.
Beautiful Story!
Your story was beautifully written erotic tale. It was one of the best that I have read on literotica.com in a very long time.
Thank you again
A big thanks to all of those who liked my story and took the efforts to comment on it. It really is heartwarming and this kind of response is a huge boost to me since I'm quite new at this. Thanks a lot again all.
Lovely
A wonderful story told with such feeling. Thank you
Raging Storm Indeed!
Great read! I totally agree with all of the previous positive comments! 5 stars, and I look forward to any future postings!
- Huufs
Heartwarming
Someone else already said it but I'll say it again. Great read and a very sweet story
awesome!
a great story.i only wished it was a bit longer. nonetheless, a job well done
Kind of short for Romance.......
I liked it. Would have preferred it to have been the first chapter of a longer story, but it's a nice read on it's own as well.
Romance?
I have to agree with a previous comment. This should not be in the Romance section. It is better suited for Erotic Couplings.
I know we are in the time of TV dinners and microwave, but romance is more than just meeting someone and jumping into bed with them.
Still a well written story.
Thanks.
SEQUEL!!
PLS DO A SEQUEL FOR THIS!!!
absolutely LOVE this story.. love the protegonists and your writing is fabulous in building up the characters and the plot! KEEP IT UP!
Good story
I've just started to branch out into the romance side of Literotica, and I'm enjoying what I've read so far. Your story is one of the best I've read so far.
Beautiful
A sweet story. Will there be a second chapter? Did they make a baby?
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