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Trash
Written by a twelve year old???????
Trash
11 yr old is more like it. Utter rubbish!
Interesting
Just develop some of your scenes more and it would have been a lot hotter.
Enjoyed it!
Ignore anonymous asshole comments!
GOOD ON YER
Ignore the negatives it was the dogs b------s for me
Only a twelve year old would think to add that many question marks at the end of a sentence, but that's just my opinion.
I think it's a wonderful story. And it's perfect for the season as well!
Your stories don't match.
Very good stories on their own, but there seems to be a very big gap between the carnival, and the halloween party. Secondly in the first chapter Jenny is the girlfriend who cheated not a sister.
nothing like 1st story disapointing
more garbage
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