They're not going to make it. Sorry. Just write the truth , man. This story will suck if you lie. No woman in porno stays with the same man she broke onto the business with. It's just the way it is ( cue Bruce Hornsby song) for too many reasons to explain.
I too was a little perplexed by the "deal with it" comment not fitting the rest of the story but ....
This is otherwise a well crafted tale so I let it slide.
Quite a good story so far I'll be interested to see further chapters.
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Anonymous10/20/11
poopchootkaboose
Can't put a fart back in your ass, poopchoot puts alot of stuff up his ass but once a fart is out, can't be put back. Once the guy let his wife do the porno it was too late for undoing it: just deal with the consequences.
Surely poopchoot would like something in his kaboose, probably has something going in and out right now, but no way a fart can go back in once let out, just gotta deal with the smell. And the skid mark.
The first story was based on a Discussion Forum "Story Ideas" thread. The person suggesting the story said the wife has a hard time saying no to people in authority, as in Scottie, prompting her to act against her husband's words. There wasn't a second chapter suggested or intended.
I was surprised by some of the flaming comments made on the first story - but ultimately found inspiration in them. Wo I penned an unexpected second chapter.
People define their marriages in different ways. Will this drive the apart or together? Some have strong opinions about the impact - but I think it displays more about themselves than this fictional couple.
chootkabhoot's criticism is a fair one. His personal attack? His opinion. Thanks for reading.
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Anonymous10/20/11
next time
well we loved it lets keep it going. The 4 of us wifes enjoyed it and yes our mates have seen us do other guys and we have done each others mates.
we have done pics and movies too but only for us. lets see if she and he would do another but him getting another lady
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Anonymous10/20/11
he still needs 5 pussies to make up for it
plus he also needs to get paid to fuck all 5 of them plus dear ole scottie needs to star in his own gay film as the bottom
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Anonymous10/20/11
this is the most
doggy turds i have ever puked over. how about a new hobby lead weight swimming the English channel 500 Kg about right.
but the content, specifically the cheating, bothers me. The writing on the otherhand was well done. I think you captured the frustrations of both parties well.
My feeling was that the wife got caught up in the excitement of the moment and could not say no when asked to perform. I feel that both knew it would change the dynamics of their relationship, not necessarily for the better.
If this was real life I doubt that I would have ever allowed my wife to work at the porn shoot to begin with. If I had we would have needed to discuss the fact that she would not be a performer, ever.
It would take a strong love, for each other, to survive something as this.
Not nearly as hot as the first story. More about how adjustment often has to pendulum between the poles before settling into a new 'reality.'. The part I find unrealistic is the timing of his negative reaction, although his analytical perspective during their first 'post-porn' fuck foreshadowed his later funk! I am hoping Bucky will see fit for her to improve the quality (as in 'plots') of Scotty's DVDs while upgrading Light-Boy's (and her) sex life from great to monumental!
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Anonymous10/20/11
Bucky, I Think It Is A Very Honest Piece Of Work
reflecting an extremely difficult effort to work out how you would feel about and deal with that experience, if it occurred in real life; maybe it did.
It was very good but I gave it a 4 just for the insecurity that he let take over him. The author has very good progression in his stories and character development. The husband needs to get over it and move on. His wife is such a giving person and he's lucky to have her.
Well, at least anonymous is referencing the story and not just spewing hate.
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PTBzzzz - Thanks for picking up on the fact that they were both working on a porn set. It's easier to say "no" to a drink if you never visit a bar. And I agree, it will take strong love (and maybe a change in values) for them to move past it. Personally, I think they took a big step in that direction.
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Lickideesplit - yeah, it wasn't as jammed packed (pun? what pun?) with sex as the first one. I knew it wouldn't be. I wanted to respond to some of the misogynistic, homophobic comments the first one received. Personally, I don't see LB as being or becoming a cuckold.
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And Anon - I'll leave that conjecture up to the reader. It's more fun that way.
Your story was so well written and, in a peculiar way, conveyed a great deal of emotions - from both of them. Part 2 had a very different feel than did part 1; which made it unusual for this site.
I normally do not care for this type of story. That being said, I found these two chapters compelling and erotic. I did not like the cheating aspect though it was integral to your plot. As was pointed out both worked on the porn set, and she sincerely believed she was helping but unfortunately did not think it through until afterwards what future ramifications there could be and regretted her choice. Her character also changed in the next chapter from a slut who didn't give a crap that her husband told her not to do it, into a loveable caring person who realizes she screwed up. I believe in character consistency.
If you do write a third part, I hope you focus on some of the possible future conflicts, and problems you alluded to regarding coworkers, working as a teacher, the principal, etc.. To me it would be a shame if she degraded into a life of porn. I really believe this was a one and only time for her, and although she enjoyed it, she wouldn't do it again because of these conflicts and her love for her husband. I think he would not put up with her doing it again. Please keep her a loving wife, not a "loving" wife. I hope smarter heads prevail. Thank you for a decent read.
fischware - Thanks!
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RPBPhoto - Thank you, too. Part 2 needed a different feel to convey the feelings I wanted to portray. Actions do have ramifications - it's up to others to decide which are positive and which are negative.
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Mostera1 - I believe the story will stand as is. There's always a story before the story and I think it's hinted at in these stories. She's sexual, because of him, and the depth of their play is further exposed in the second story, adding more "believability" to her choice of actions. True, she's bullied into it and "takes one for the team," but without showing every bit of their lives together, I think a part of her knew her husband's reaction. Indeed, some commentators miss the significance of him complaining, but never leaving, and getting excited.
Dealing with the further issues (friends, family, co-workers) carries a lot of appeal for my muse, but I'm fighting against it. I like the conjecture of it ending here.
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To answer my question, I believe cheating and infidelity are things done in secret, behind someone's back, and not in an open manner. The only love she ever expressed was towards her husband and her heart stayed true through-out.
The fact is, she cheated. Why? Because he said no, even though they needed the money, he did not want her to star in the porn flick with 5 guys. She told him to "deal with it" and she was doing it with or without his consent. To me, that is cheating.
What if the situation were reversed, and he was offered a chance to star in a porn flick fucking another woman, or maybe having a 3-way with 2 women? And she said no way was he going to do that. And he told her he was going to, and just "deal with it." I think he might wake up the next morning with pain and bleeding from a "Lorena Bobbit" maneuver.
I don't feel he can ever really get over this unless he has some wild card credits so that he can feel equal in their marriage. Some are thinking that because he experienced a powerful erection, he must have enjoyed the whole scene. In fact, a man gets an erection in circumstances where he is threatened.
It's nature's way. It enables him to possibly fuck out the other man's (or men's) sperm and reclaim his woman. Men get strong erections while they are being hanged by the neck -- that hardly means they find hanging to be exciting or something they want to occur. The story was well-written and explored the thought processes involved in the entire scenario. Otherwise, my score would have been very low. Thanks for writing.
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Anonymous10/21/11
Wifes turn
So in the next chapter the husband gets to do five porn starlets in another shoot while the wife watches and she has to deal with her insecurities. Then together they start their own film company, get rich and drive their ass of a boss out of business
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Anonymous10/21/11
What a
Weak piece of shit hubby. He loved it but didn't have the balls too accept it.
Vulcan - interesting take on things. One that's been reflected by others. Not sure that I agree, but I respect your opinion on the matter and appreciate the way you said it.
Anon - "Wife's Turn" - simple and direct, LOL.
Anon - "What a" - Crudely put, but a good point in my opinion.
How disappointingly shallow so many of the comentaters are. This was a beautifully thought out and written story. Some of them even seemed to totally miss out on the thread of the story. Well done Bucky, I salute you!
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Anonymous10/22/11
Yeah, yeah
We're all so shallow all we noticed was how stupid this story is. Give me a break Britease.
Part 2 is a great compliment to your first chapter. The first was a fun situation to read through. The second packs the emotional punch that's necessary after a couple (particularly that couple) goes through something like that. Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous11/08/11
Great follow-up!
Great follow-up to a great story!
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Anonymous12/01/11
clueless closet cucks
don't know any actual women besides their mom so couldn't relate to the interactions between this couple (closet cucks deal with blow-up women only).
What made this story work is the dialogue - totally carried the day, good work author
Very well written (though there was 1 or 2 misspellings I caught, hehehe)!
Very few authors deal with the emotional "after effects" of what such an incident leads to, and you've done a fantastic job. To those saying this can never happen...nobody feels, acts, or behaves exactly like anybody else. Can I see this scenario happening? Yes. Would it happen to me? Who knows unless the situation arose. I think it was a good compliment to the first story dealing with the aftermath of an unusual situation.
Too many times people offer negative comments because a story does not pan to how THEY (the reader) would act. This is fiction, for one thing it will not portray real life, as there is fantasy involved. For the second, YOU are not the protagonist in the story, and as I mentioned, every person deals with things different. How many of you know somebody who did something and responded in an entirely different way than you would have? That's life, deal with it.
As for the discrepancy of her "Deal with it" comment versus crying and being ashamed...she's a woman. Show me one woman who has not in some point in her life completely flip-flopped her emotional state or opinion and I'll give you my first born. I found it completely acceptable that she had remorse afterwards. It doesn't mean it will happen again, and the reader is left to ponder what will happen.
I would not write a third chapter...leave this where it is, as it has spawned considerable thoughts and dialogue by the readers and is the perfect place for an author to leave it. Not every story needs a "they lived happily ever after" ending, and this left right off where it should...in a grey area where anything could happen.
Wow, wow, wow! I left a comment after Ch 01, too, but here's the rest of my thought. Man did this story take an interesting twist! This story was much more believable to me.
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Anonymous08/06/12
"On the other hand, her experience with other men was now five times my experience with other women."
Not exactly: he has *no* experience with other women. Any prime number divided by zero equals infinity.
I like how they are starting the process of working through their shared guilt. It will take a lot of love, effort, and a good sense of humor. Dealing with the priciple, parents, and co-workers is going to add a lot of strain to their relationship. It would almost be a good idea to move out of town while they can still get good references.
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Anonymous07/09/13
Better than Chapter 1
I liked this story better than Chapter 1. Like many of the comments here (I didn't read them for Ch1) I found her "Deal with it" comment at odd's with her later reaction.
I realize Bucky that you have obviously split sex from love in your thinking, I say this because you don't consider her going against her husbands wishes aas cheating, as Vulcan explained so well. Basically I saw her reaction to his "Hell no" in Chapter 1 as pure stubbornness on her part in a "oh, he won't tell me what to do!" mentality much more believable than how it's later written that she did it for her husband because he looked at her like she was hot.
I agree with the sentiment that was alluded to that if he'd have been a "real man" he'd have walked off the set, but I somehow don't think that would have stopped her from completing the act, as she was written in Chapter 1. Maybe the wife in chapter 2 would have stopped if he had left, but it's iffy at best. Basically she lost her brain because she was horney and was bound and determined to have that gang bang. You can try to 'blame' the husband all you want for having "sexualized" her, but frankly, what seperates us as humans from animals is our ability to make choices and realize the consequences.
Here, she didn't seem to realize any consequences, or if she did (faint glimmers were made that she worried on some level, not enough to stop though) she didn't give a shit enough to stop. And I'm sorry but the "I did it for you" is probably one of the oldest and weakest excuses to ever use when trying to excuse behavior that was offensive to someone you love. If you really did it for them, then you'd accept the hardship with the car and say no and deal with life. Then again there'd have been no story at all then, but honestly, if the wife really respected her husband she'd have stopped when he said no. That's really the bottom line here in my opinion. If she were really that loving that would be an easy choice for her to make regardless of how horny she was.
Bucky, the story left me with some mixed feelings. The reviews...the reviews on the other hand tell a whole different story.
Several of the reviewers when presented with proof of their wife performing in a porn movie immediately grabbed up their Glock and killed all the participants, the wife, actors, actresses, makeup girl, prop guy, sound and lighting guy, the director, cameraman, fluffer and gofer. They're now spewing their bile from their jail cell while Bubba plays havok with their anal orfice.
A number of other reviewers wrote their piece after snorting several lines of a suspicious white powder.
A few obviously wrote whatever their wife/husband/SO dictated to them white they were in the throes of ecstasy as administered by a cattleprod set on high.
And the remainder are comprised of romantics, idealists, pessimists, fools and lastly realists.
Humans are, by and large, complex beasts. Some of us are intensely jealous, others violent to an extreme and then there are the negotiators, the wimps and wusses, the schemers and everything in between. In short, human nature is hard to portray. Why do some men want to prong anything that's female? Why are other males satisfied with just one mate? Why are there lesbians and gays?
Just winnow out all the ranters and look at those who have some constructive criticism.
BTW IMO ch1started out good, you set up the situation quite well. From personal experience working at strip bars and hostess clubs in Tokyo and Bangkok I can emphasize with the husband. He's working in an environment where he's been desensitized to what's going on. His wife is a wildcard in this story, I think you fell short in how you portrayed his and her interactions and evolution in ch 1 but did a better job in ch 2.
Keep on writing.
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Anonymous03/01/14
WTF
I simply don"t understand the comments of your readers
. It's porn you assholes not an entry for the Nobel Prize. And as such that's how it should judged. In that context, it's very well written, dialogue is terrific and worth 5 star wankers for hotness. I look forward to reading all of Bucky's output.
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Anonymous12/21/14
PERFECTLY WRITTEN!!
The reason why this story is a standout to other very written erotica is because it is smart erotica. No not smart in a sense of space travel matamatics but smart in that chapter two is the inevitable emotional fallout and turmoil a young married couple WOULD experience when living through such an adventure together. Incredibly well written thoughtful dialogue between the two main characters! I felt like I knew them and in a sense I did. Back in the early 80's my ex fiancé and I enjoyed a threesome with another male whom we knew for years. It was a birthday present for her of sorts and was both erotic, exotic and baffling at the same time. Thankfully our male friend did not subject me to the bullshit macho garbage comments those porn freaks did to him however I still felt the conflicting emotional war raging inside my heart and brain which was not helped with the raging hormones. Our conversations were nearly verbatim to the characters here. One of the central reasons why this remains a favorite of mine and likely so many is because of its realism. These characters were not cartoonish outlandish unbelievable nonsense, their turmoil, love and conflicting emotions are what people really do or will experience. The best way to explain it to those that would not understand is that the couple here used the porn freaks much the same way a couple would use sex toys for their own entertainment and enjoyment, NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND. Despite what the porn freaks, naysayers and other narrow minded fools would think, SHE went home with her husband and NOT with the porn freaks. And they were six thousand dollars richer for it as well. Yes there is always that chance that friends family and jobs could get wind of the movie but today it would make far less of an impact then it would have thirty years ago when porn sex and posing naked was still a no-no. Today Hollywood careers are made by a sex tape "leak" and they earn millions. Well done story!
Ray
As I read both chapters,I could not get past the deep sense of her betrayal to a lifelong bond. The'd been soul mates since early childhood. Neither had ever had sexual relations with anyone other than each other.They were best friends. I can't believe that she would just ignore that bond to agree to,and then do a gangbang with 5 big-dicked strangers,especially after he vehemently voiced his objection. He had to feel the deepest sense of betrayal after her response to him was deal with it.
If I were him,my return response would be something like : "I can't believe you'd disregard my feelings and betray me this way! You want me to deal with you sucking off,fucking,and doing a gangbang with 5 strangers,even after telling you how much you're hurting me? OK,deal with this : 1) Scottie I quit! 2) I will not remain married to a traitorous slut who's using money as an excuse to cheat.That also makes you a whore! 3) Our marriage is over! You deal with that!"
I just don't see how that kind of betrayal would allow that marriage to survive. (Unless he's one of the sorry-assed cucks present in so many stories on this site,which invalidates the whole story!)
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Anonymous10/16/15
Cuckold propoganda 1*
She betrayed him with five men in every way possible when she had only ever been with him and somehow it was justified because he got hard watching her. Unbelievable logic.
Yep. That's just the way the person who requested the original story idea wanted it to be. :-)
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Anonymous11/17/15
Entirely plausible that they'd at least attempt to save their marriage
I notice this same author slipped this reference into one of his other stories: " She had a really interesting story about a husband and wife who worked on a gang-bang shoot together. Apparently, when the talent failed to show for the last scene, the wife stepped in did the fucking and sucking while her husband watched. 'As far as I know, that was the only scene she ever did and they're still married today. I don't know for sure, though'." from www.literotica.com/s/the-girl-with-a-past
Sex is fun. At the same time, jealousy can kill entire relationships... which is not fun.
It's plausible. They might still be able to walk away from porn and salvage what's left of their marriage. I've read more farfetched stories... like the one where Clinton's husband cheats on her with Monica in the blue dress, and with others, yet inexplicably she's still married to the son-of-a-dog. It's weird, but it happens. I read that one in a newspaper - but post that story on this site, no one would believe it.
Both are unhappy, both feel very guilty for their respective roles in this trainwreck, but do either actually want the divorce? The screwing by the lawyers is far less pleasurable than the porn, and no one would be smiling at the end of that.
That said, if she wants to continue as a schoolmaster she has no choice but to get out of the porn business ASAP (without making Lot's wife's mistake and looking back); most likely under the circumstances she will sooner or later pull hubby the photographer out with her. $6k is chump change if the cost is jeopardising an entire career as an educator, and that money won't last long. It certainly won't pay the cost of her retraining in some other professional field if she leaves the classroom. Heck, it might not be enough to pay for ongoing counselling for two. In any case, their working relationship with Scotty isn't worth saving once he told the lies about the loan shark and the cover photos. Both of this pair will be handing out CV's tomorrow for 'straight' jobs. If the price of saving their marriage at this point is that they both ditch porn forever, that's an easy step to make. Much easier than a divorce.
And no, having him screw five porn starlets (while it might make fun reading for this audience) isn't necessarily going to help - it's just going to rub more salt into the wounds. Only way to salvage this is for each of them to drop all outside partners until they're both comfortable with the idea - even if that just happens to be 'never'. The awkward discussions should've happened before bringing in the outside partner(s) - not after - anyone who's tried swinging (multiple sexual partners) or polyamory (multiple romantic partners) and actually stayed married likely grasps the concept. It´s possible that they might have enjoyed this had they been free to set their limits together beforehand (so this is fun, but stops short of any point at which it interferes with their primary relationship) and had this not interfered with work or careers.
It's a difficult and potentially long road back to recovery, but if this is what they both want, it would make no sense for them not to pursue a reconciliation and rebuild their marriage. Even if someone named 'Anonymous' on Literotica told them to divorce.
Some people to things for the wrong reasons and are able to get over it. He was shooting porn and they were watching porn. Not that much difference from a Swinger's Club or an orgy.
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Anonymous12/21/16
Mmm not convinced but with some merit 4*
So she basically cheated on him against his consent right in front of him, then because he was excited by watching her and she was excited by him watching that somehow made her initial betrayal ok?
Really just cuckold propaganda. Well written though, with some attempt at expressing their love for each other despite her cheating and his cuckold response. I really don't think mixing the two works that well but nice try.
If you lost the cuckold bit and went onto her regret and remorse at what she had done and a genuine attempt at reconciliation that would have been more realistic than this forced outcome.
I am glad he gave her shit over this but he loves her and will fold - how donyou come back from seeing your love gang banged? Of course he got hard but that is meaningless. Wish him luck
English
Dance of the Doomed
They're not going to make it. Sorry. Just write the truth , man. This story will suck if you lie. No woman in porno stays with the same man she broke onto the business with. It's just the way it is ( cue Bruce Hornsby song) for too many reasons to explain.
Yeah ....
I too was a little perplexed by the "deal with it" comment not fitting the rest of the story but ....
This is otherwise a well crafted tale so I let it slide.
Quite a good story so far I'll be interested to see further chapters.
poopchootkaboose
Can't put a fart back in your ass, poopchoot puts alot of stuff up his ass but once a fart is out, can't be put back. Once the guy let his wife do the porno it was too late for undoing it: just deal with the consequences.
Surely poopchoot would like something in his kaboose, probably has something going in and out right now, but no way a fart can go back in once let out, just gotta deal with the smell. And the skid mark.
Fair Comments
The first story was based on a Discussion Forum "Story Ideas" thread. The person suggesting the story said the wife has a hard time saying no to people in authority, as in Scottie, prompting her to act against her husband's words. There wasn't a second chapter suggested or intended.
I was surprised by some of the flaming comments made on the first story - but ultimately found inspiration in them. Wo I penned an unexpected second chapter.
People define their marriages in different ways. Will this drive the apart or together? Some have strong opinions about the impact - but I think it displays more about themselves than this fictional couple.
chootkabhoot's criticism is a fair one. His personal attack? His opinion. Thanks for reading.
next time
well we loved it lets keep it going. The 4 of us wifes enjoyed it and yes our mates have seen us do other guys and we have done each others mates.
we have done pics and movies too but only for us. lets see if she and he would do another but him getting another lady
he still needs 5 pussies to make up for it
plus he also needs to get paid to fuck all 5 of them plus dear ole scottie needs to star in his own gay film as the bottom
this is the most
doggy turds i have ever puked over. how about a new hobby lead weight swimming the English channel 500 Kg about right.
I would like to say I liked the story
but the content, specifically the cheating, bothers me. The writing on the otherhand was well done. I think you captured the frustrations of both parties well.
My feeling was that the wife got caught up in the excitement of the moment and could not say no when asked to perform. I feel that both knew it would change the dynamics of their relationship, not necessarily for the better.
If this was real life I doubt that I would have ever allowed my wife to work at the porn shoot to begin with. If I had we would have needed to discuss the fact that she would not be a performer, ever.
It would take a strong love, for each other, to survive something as this.
Interesting
Not nearly as hot as the first story. More about how adjustment often has to pendulum between the poles before settling into a new 'reality.'. The part I find unrealistic is the timing of his negative reaction, although his analytical perspective during their first 'post-porn' fuck foreshadowed his later funk! I am hoping Bucky will see fit for her to improve the quality (as in 'plots') of Scotty's DVDs while upgrading Light-Boy's (and her) sex life from great to monumental!
Bucky, I Think It Is A Very Honest Piece Of Work
reflecting an extremely difficult effort to work out how you would feel about and deal with that experience, if it occurred in real life; maybe it did.
Very Good but
It was very good but I gave it a 4 just for the insecurity that he let take over him. The author has very good progression in his stories and character development. The husband needs to get over it and move on. His wife is such a giving person and he's lucky to have her.
Great comments so far, THANKS!
Well, at least anonymous is referencing the story and not just spewing hate.
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PTBzzzz - Thanks for picking up on the fact that they were both working on a porn set. It's easier to say "no" to a drink if you never visit a bar. And I agree, it will take strong love (and maybe a change in values) for them to move past it. Personally, I think they took a big step in that direction.
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Lickideesplit - yeah, it wasn't as jammed packed (pun? what pun?) with sex as the first one. I knew it wouldn't be. I wanted to respond to some of the misogynistic, homophobic comments the first one received. Personally, I don't see LB as being or becoming a cuckold.
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And Anon - I'll leave that conjecture up to the reader. It's more fun that way.
Thank You!
Your story was so well written and, in a peculiar way, conveyed a great deal of emotions - from both of them. Part 2 had a very different feel than did part 1; which made it unusual for this site.
Thanks again for sharing it with us. Bob
Interesting
I normally do not care for this type of story. That being said, I found these two chapters compelling and erotic. I did not like the cheating aspect though it was integral to your plot. As was pointed out both worked on the porn set, and she sincerely believed she was helping but unfortunately did not think it through until afterwards what future ramifications there could be and regretted her choice. Her character also changed in the next chapter from a slut who didn't give a crap that her husband told her not to do it, into a loveable caring person who realizes she screwed up. I believe in character consistency.
If you do write a third part, I hope you focus on some of the possible future conflicts, and problems you alluded to regarding coworkers, working as a teacher, the principal, etc.. To me it would be a shame if she degraded into a life of porn. I really believe this was a one and only time for her, and although she enjoyed it, she wouldn't do it again because of these conflicts and her love for her husband. I think he would not put up with her doing it again. Please keep her a loving wife, not a "loving" wife. I hope smarter heads prevail. Thank you for a decent read.
Define "Cheating"
fischware - Thanks!
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RPBPhoto - Thank you, too. Part 2 needed a different feel to convey the feelings I wanted to portray. Actions do have ramifications - it's up to others to decide which are positive and which are negative.
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Mostera1 - I believe the story will stand as is. There's always a story before the story and I think it's hinted at in these stories. She's sexual, because of him, and the depth of their play is further exposed in the second story, adding more "believability" to her choice of actions. True, she's bullied into it and "takes one for the team," but without showing every bit of their lives together, I think a part of her knew her husband's reaction. Indeed, some commentators miss the significance of him complaining, but never leaving, and getting excited.
Dealing with the further issues (friends, family, co-workers) carries a lot of appeal for my muse, but I'm fighting against it. I like the conjecture of it ending here.
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To answer my question, I believe cheating and infidelity are things done in secret, behind someone's back, and not in an open manner. The only love she ever expressed was towards her husband and her heart stayed true through-out.
Disagree with a number of the comments
The fact is, she cheated. Why? Because he said no, even though they needed the money, he did not want her to star in the porn flick with 5 guys. She told him to "deal with it" and she was doing it with or without his consent. To me, that is cheating.
What if the situation were reversed, and he was offered a chance to star in a porn flick fucking another woman, or maybe having a 3-way with 2 women? And she said no way was he going to do that. And he told her he was going to, and just "deal with it." I think he might wake up the next morning with pain and bleeding from a "Lorena Bobbit" maneuver.
I don't feel he can ever really get over this unless he has some wild card credits so that he can feel equal in their marriage. Some are thinking that because he experienced a powerful erection, he must have enjoyed the whole scene. In fact, a man gets an erection in circumstances where he is threatened.
It's nature's way. It enables him to possibly fuck out the other man's (or men's) sperm and reclaim his woman. Men get strong erections while they are being hanged by the neck -- that hardly means they find hanging to be exciting or something they want to occur. The story was well-written and explored the thought processes involved in the entire scenario. Otherwise, my score would have been very low. Thanks for writing.
Wifes turn
So in the next chapter the husband gets to do five porn starlets in another shoot while the wife watches and she has to deal with her insecurities. Then together they start their own film company, get rich and drive their ass of a boss out of business
What a
Weak piece of shit hubby. He loved it but didn't have the balls too accept it.
More great comments
Vulcan - interesting take on things. One that's been reflected by others. Not sure that I agree, but I respect your opinion on the matter and appreciate the way you said it.
Anon - "Wife's Turn" - simple and direct, LOL.
Anon - "What a" - Crudely put, but a good point in my opinion.
Beautiful
How disappointingly shallow so many of the comentaters are. This was a beautifully thought out and written story. Some of them even seemed to totally miss out on the thread of the story. Well done Bucky, I salute you!
Yeah, yeah
We're all so shallow all we noticed was how stupid this story is. Give me a break Britease.
Interested in a different take?
What if the man met the woman AFTER her career in porn? What happens then?
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-girl-with-a-p ast
Very nice follow-up
Part 2 is a great compliment to your first chapter. The first was a fun situation to read through. The second packs the emotional punch that's necessary after a couple (particularly that couple) goes through something like that. Thanks for sharing.
Great follow-up!
Great follow-up to a great story!
clueless closet cucks
don't know any actual women besides their mom so couldn't relate to the interactions between this couple (closet cucks deal with blow-up women only).
What made this story work is the dialogue - totally carried the day, good work author
Well done...
Very well written (though there was 1 or 2 misspellings I caught, hehehe)!
Very few authors deal with the emotional "after effects" of what such an incident leads to, and you've done a fantastic job. To those saying this can never happen...nobody feels, acts, or behaves exactly like anybody else. Can I see this scenario happening? Yes. Would it happen to me? Who knows unless the situation arose. I think it was a good compliment to the first story dealing with the aftermath of an unusual situation.
Too many times people offer negative comments because a story does not pan to how THEY (the reader) would act. This is fiction, for one thing it will not portray real life, as there is fantasy involved. For the second, YOU are not the protagonist in the story, and as I mentioned, every person deals with things different. How many of you know somebody who did something and responded in an entirely different way than you would have? That's life, deal with it.
As for the discrepancy of her "Deal with it" comment versus crying and being ashamed...she's a woman. Show me one woman who has not in some point in her life completely flip-flopped her emotional state or opinion and I'll give you my first born. I found it completely acceptable that she had remorse afterwards. It doesn't mean it will happen again, and the reader is left to ponder what will happen.
I would not write a third chapter...leave this where it is, as it has spawned considerable thoughts and dialogue by the readers and is the perfect place for an author to leave it. Not every story needs a "they lived happily ever after" ending, and this left right off where it should...in a grey area where anything could happen.
Wow, wow, wow! I left a comment after Ch 01, too, but here's the rest of my thought. Man did this story take an interesting twist! This story was much more believable to me.
"On the other hand, her experience with other men was now five times my experience with other women."
Not exactly: he has *no* experience with other women. Any prime number divided by zero equals infinity.
Shared guilt, shared reconciliation
I like how they are starting the process of working through their shared guilt. It will take a lot of love, effort, and a good sense of humor. Dealing with the priciple, parents, and co-workers is going to add a lot of strain to their relationship. It would almost be a good idea to move out of town while they can still get good references.
Better than Chapter 1
I liked this story better than Chapter 1. Like many of the comments here (I didn't read them for Ch1) I found her "Deal with it" comment at odd's with her later reaction.
I realize Bucky that you have obviously split sex from love in your thinking, I say this because you don't consider her going against her husbands wishes aas cheating, as Vulcan explained so well. Basically I saw her reaction to his "Hell no" in Chapter 1 as pure stubbornness on her part in a "oh, he won't tell me what to do!" mentality much more believable than how it's later written that she did it for her husband because he looked at her like she was hot.
I agree with the sentiment that was alluded to that if he'd have been a "real man" he'd have walked off the set, but I somehow don't think that would have stopped her from completing the act, as she was written in Chapter 1. Maybe the wife in chapter 2 would have stopped if he had left, but it's iffy at best. Basically she lost her brain because she was horney and was bound and determined to have that gang bang. You can try to 'blame' the husband all you want for having "sexualized" her, but frankly, what seperates us as humans from animals is our ability to make choices and realize the consequences.
Here, she didn't seem to realize any consequences, or if she did (faint glimmers were made that she worried on some level, not enough to stop though) she didn't give a shit enough to stop. And I'm sorry but the "I did it for you" is probably one of the oldest and weakest excuses to ever use when trying to excuse behavior that was offensive to someone you love. If you really did it for them, then you'd accept the hardship with the car and say no and deal with life. Then again there'd have been no story at all then, but honestly, if the wife really respected her husband she'd have stopped when he said no. That's really the bottom line here in my opinion. If she were really that loving that would be an easy choice for her to make regardless of how horny she was.
Train wreck looking to happen
I don't give this marriage a plug nickel for survival. Can't get around that she's a slut.
Interesting....
Bucky, the story left me with some mixed feelings. The reviews...the reviews on the other hand tell a whole different story.
Several of the reviewers when presented with proof of their wife performing in a porn movie immediately grabbed up their Glock and killed all the participants, the wife, actors, actresses, makeup girl, prop guy, sound and lighting guy, the director, cameraman, fluffer and gofer. They're now spewing their bile from their jail cell while Bubba plays havok with their anal orfice.
A number of other reviewers wrote their piece after snorting several lines of a suspicious white powder.
A few obviously wrote whatever their wife/husband/SO dictated to them white they were in the throes of ecstasy as administered by a cattleprod set on high.
And the remainder are comprised of romantics, idealists, pessimists, fools and lastly realists.
Humans are, by and large, complex beasts. Some of us are intensely jealous, others violent to an extreme and then there are the negotiators, the wimps and wusses, the schemers and everything in between. In short, human nature is hard to portray. Why do some men want to prong anything that's female? Why are other males satisfied with just one mate? Why are there lesbians and gays?
Just winnow out all the ranters and look at those who have some constructive criticism.
BTW IMO ch1started out good, you set up the situation quite well. From personal experience working at strip bars and hostess clubs in Tokyo and Bangkok I can emphasize with the husband. He's working in an environment where he's been desensitized to what's going on. His wife is a wildcard in this story, I think you fell short in how you portrayed his and her interactions and evolution in ch 1 but did a better job in ch 2.
Keep on writing.
WTF
I simply don"t understand the comments of your readers
. It's porn you assholes not an entry for the Nobel Prize. And as such that's how it should judged. In that context, it's very well written, dialogue is terrific and worth 5 star wankers for hotness. I look forward to reading all of Bucky's output.
PERFECTLY WRITTEN!!
The reason why this story is a standout to other very written erotica is because it is smart erotica. No not smart in a sense of space travel matamatics but smart in that chapter two is the inevitable emotional fallout and turmoil a young married couple WOULD experience when living through such an adventure together. Incredibly well written thoughtful dialogue between the two main characters! I felt like I knew them and in a sense I did. Back in the early 80's my ex fiancé and I enjoyed a threesome with another male whom we knew for years. It was a birthday present for her of sorts and was both erotic, exotic and baffling at the same time. Thankfully our male friend did not subject me to the bullshit macho garbage comments those porn freaks did to him however I still felt the conflicting emotional war raging inside my heart and brain which was not helped with the raging hormones. Our conversations were nearly verbatim to the characters here. One of the central reasons why this remains a favorite of mine and likely so many is because of its realism. These characters were not cartoonish outlandish unbelievable nonsense, their turmoil, love and conflicting emotions are what people really do or will experience. The best way to explain it to those that would not understand is that the couple here used the porn freaks much the same way a couple would use sex toys for their own entertainment and enjoyment, NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND. Despite what the porn freaks, naysayers and other narrow minded fools would think, SHE went home with her husband and NOT with the porn freaks. And they were six thousand dollars richer for it as well. Yes there is always that chance that friends family and jobs could get wind of the movie but today it would make far less of an impact then it would have thirty years ago when porn sex and posing naked was still a no-no. Today Hollywood careers are made by a sex tape "leak" and they earn millions. Well done story!
Ray
Enjoyed it
thanks for the offering.
Betrayal!
As I read both chapters,I could not get past the deep sense of her betrayal to a lifelong bond. The'd been soul mates since early childhood. Neither had ever had sexual relations with anyone other than each other.They were best friends. I can't believe that she would just ignore that bond to agree to,and then do a gangbang with 5 big-dicked strangers,especially after he vehemently voiced his objection. He had to feel the deepest sense of betrayal after her response to him was deal with it.
If I were him,my return response would be something like : "I can't believe you'd disregard my feelings and betray me this way! You want me to deal with you sucking off,fucking,and doing a gangbang with 5 strangers,even after telling you how much you're hurting me? OK,deal with this : 1) Scottie I quit! 2) I will not remain married to a traitorous slut who's using money as an excuse to cheat.That also makes you a whore! 3) Our marriage is over! You deal with that!"
I just don't see how that kind of betrayal would allow that marriage to survive. (Unless he's one of the sorry-assed cucks present in so many stories on this site,which invalidates the whole story!)
Cuckold propoganda 1*
She betrayed him with five men in every way possible when she had only ever been with him and somehow it was justified because he got hard watching her. Unbelievable logic.
Yep. That's just the way the person who requested the original story idea wanted it to be. :-)
Entirely plausible that they'd at least attempt to save their marriage
I notice this same author slipped this reference into one of his other stories: " She had a really interesting story about a husband and wife who worked on a gang-bang shoot together. Apparently, when the talent failed to show for the last scene, the wife stepped in did the fucking and sucking while her husband watched. 'As far as I know, that was the only scene she ever did and they're still married today. I don't know for sure, though'." from www.literotica.com/s/the-girl-with-a-past
Sex is fun. At the same time, jealousy can kill entire relationships... which is not fun.
It's plausible. They might still be able to walk away from porn and salvage what's left of their marriage. I've read more farfetched stories... like the one where Clinton's husband cheats on her with Monica in the blue dress, and with others, yet inexplicably she's still married to the son-of-a-dog. It's weird, but it happens. I read that one in a newspaper - but post that story on this site, no one would believe it.
Both are unhappy, both feel very guilty for their respective roles in this trainwreck, but do either actually want the divorce? The screwing by the lawyers is far less pleasurable than the porn, and no one would be smiling at the end of that.
That said, if she wants to continue as a schoolmaster she has no choice but to get out of the porn business ASAP (without making Lot's wife's mistake and looking back); most likely under the circumstances she will sooner or later pull hubby the photographer out with her. $6k is chump change if the cost is jeopardising an entire career as an educator, and that money won't last long. It certainly won't pay the cost of her retraining in some other professional field if she leaves the classroom. Heck, it might not be enough to pay for ongoing counselling for two. In any case, their working relationship with Scotty isn't worth saving once he told the lies about the loan shark and the cover photos. Both of this pair will be handing out CV's tomorrow for 'straight' jobs. If the price of saving their marriage at this point is that they both ditch porn forever, that's an easy step to make. Much easier than a divorce.
And no, having him screw five porn starlets (while it might make fun reading for this audience) isn't necessarily going to help - it's just going to rub more salt into the wounds. Only way to salvage this is for each of them to drop all outside partners until they're both comfortable with the idea - even if that just happens to be 'never'. The awkward discussions should've happened before bringing in the outside partner(s) - not after - anyone who's tried swinging (multiple sexual partners) or polyamory (multiple romantic partners) and actually stayed married likely grasps the concept. It´s possible that they might have enjoyed this had they been free to set their limits together beforehand (so this is fun, but stops short of any point at which it interferes with their primary relationship) and had this not interfered with work or careers.
It's a difficult and potentially long road back to recovery, but if this is what they both want, it would make no sense for them not to pursue a reconciliation and rebuild their marriage. Even if someone named 'Anonymous' on Literotica told them to divorce.
1*
cuck shit.
Hope they will resolve the problem
Some people to things for the wrong reasons and are able to get over it. He was shooting porn and they were watching porn. Not that much difference from a Swinger's Club or an orgy.
Mmm not convinced but with some merit 4*
So she basically cheated on him against his consent right in front of him, then because he was excited by watching her and she was excited by him watching that somehow made her initial betrayal ok?
Really just cuckold propaganda. Well written though, with some attempt at expressing their love for each other despite her cheating and his cuckold response. I really don't think mixing the two works that well but nice try.
If you lost the cuckold bit and went onto her regret and remorse at what she had done and a genuine attempt at reconciliation that would have been more realistic than this forced outcome.
I don't know man
I am glad he gave her shit over this but he loves her and will fold - how donyou come back from seeing your love gang banged? Of course he got hard but that is meaningless. Wish him luck
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