What was that about? You could have had a good story if you had continued.
I plan to continue the story, eventually, thanks for the feedback
Cant wait for part 2...................
Excellent start. And despite the "The End", this story is begging for a second chapter.
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are you kidding?
What was that about? You could have had a good story if you had continued.
*sigh*
I plan to continue the story, eventually, thanks for the feedback
Great start...
Cant wait for part 2...................
Excellent!
Excellent start. And despite the "The End", this story is begging for a second chapter.
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