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A Fantasy Come True

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by Anonymous

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by ambush18410/24/11

are you kidding?

What was that about? You could have had a good story if you had continued.

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by MoonDreams10/24/11

*sigh*

I plan to continue the story, eventually, thanks for the feedback

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by Anonymous10/24/11

Great start...

Cant wait for part 2...................

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by LoneStarRider10/24/11

Excellent!

Excellent start. And despite the "The End", this story is begging for a second chapter.

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