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Hmmm..
Overall, I liked the story, but Jane belongs in the doghouse herself, considering what she tried to get her husband to do... Honestly, I didn't get that she learned anything at all from her friend's bad example.
But please continue writing, I enjoyed the story.
Good Read!!!!!!!
Short and cute. For story number two very good. Thanks for sharing.
Easy & Fun Read !
Not too sure about long term prognosis of marriage but it's great story fodder. Thx for chuckles, today was grueling & cold. This helped.
A nice little tale
I like the twist to the cuckold style story, especially what they did to Karen.
A well written and edited story, quick and to the point, but still nicely done.
A very good story, thanks
Excellent
Great story. A chapter 2 would be interesting seeing Karen whoreing the streets. HA.
Nice little tale.
Welcome change from the vast majority of cuckold loving authors here. Keep posting.
Very Good
I liked how it was played out and how it ended.
One of the best I have read in sometime.
I always ask "If it is good for her how about him?"
ps Tell Mike to stay away from SS06. That guy is hard on assholes.
A nice twist
I wish I could tell a story that good in as few words.
I think your conlusion goes both ways. Whichever partner is getting a bit on the side thinks it is fine for them but not for their spouse.
ONCE AGAIN THE AGE OLD ADAGE
ONE CAN DISH IT OUT BUT THEY CANT TAKE THE PLAYBACK. TK U MLJ LV NV
His let the Dogg out!
Doggs in the house Brilliant. Simply brilliant! You got a new fan!
Not bad . . .
Liked this one. Short and to the point. No wimp here -- some originality as well. Setting up the bitch for the divorce shows Jeff was not as stupid as he initially seemed. Thanks for writing.
Last point
Of everything I read the last point (not the one about grammar) is the best. Seems that sharing is usually one sided, doesn't it?
Loved it.
A top notch burn the bitch short story. Looking forward to more.
Yeay!
Yeay! A sissyboy/cuck free zone ... Today is a good day to Screw your own wife silly! TGIF.
Yes!!!!!
Nice story line and a good twist at the end.
I read it on SOL earlier. Good story 5 stars.
Heh!
its short. but about women not wanting to share their man, will tell my gf that. and she doesnt even want to take payment for my "service".
It makes the point
It's a bit over the top but a fun read.
The issue of course is not about sex, sharing, or making the marriage "better". It's about control. A woman that would act like this wants to dominate her husband. For the majority of men, that just won't fly. The turn around, allowing Karen to hang herself, was funny because her "control" and the arrogance associated with it turned to shit. Then Jane gets a well deserved dope slap when Karen wants to borrow her husband for sex. Of course it was totally impossible that Mike would let such a slut stay with him to contaminate his wife's thinking in the first place but it served the purpose of the story.
All in all a funny and enjoyable story.
Yeah.
Good story. I enjoyed it, thanks.
Very Funny
Great story, and very funny, laugh out loud funny.
Well said!
And about time. My sentiments exactly about this kind of situation!
Damn Hue
I think I am an asshole too. Most authors here write about doctors, lawyers and college professors. Mr. Hue writes about the nitty gritty. I like that. Blue collar attitudes. It also made me realize that I am glad the wife never had to see my partying days. I doubt that she would be amused. The author made his point well. From what I have witnessed it is true. Good one.
I Agree
I guess, most men are ass-holes when told by his wife that she wants to screw around with other guys. The only thing worse is when she expects it to be a one way street.
Oh, My Gosh!
An interjection of reality into THIS category!!!! Wow! What a concept!
Fuckin' A...
This is just how it should be handled. I hate these stories where the man lies down and gets run over in this way.
Congratulations! Another 5 from me.
Again you've been able to express the feelings a man, not a wimp, not a superman, but a man...plain and simple. Great job! Keep up the great work.
FUCKING LOVED IT!!!
5* Only reason I gave you a 5 is because they don't have a 6. Now that's my kind of cuckold story.
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha-never saw that twist coming and it was GREAT!
Wife/sister chartacter hung by her own rope-too funny!
Going to be tough to top that one (but please try!)
Thanks for writing
Bad wife?
I see that the poor Karen went straight into the trap, this Jeff was an insidious type. Sorry for Karen
Ok! It's Awesome!
Nice short story! Thanks for sharing it!
BETTER THAN ALL CUCKOLD SHITE ,LISTEN GAY WIMP CUCKOLDS US REAL MEN EXTRACT REAL MEAN REVENGE
Beautiful
Just a great short story with a really neat twist, a breath of fresh air in this category.
LOL!!!!!!!
Thx for the laugh....
just
stupid
I enjoyed the story
It was a bit short, a bit emotionless and echoed my feelings about the whole cuckolding adventure. I recommend wives read it... and so do husbands.
different
Cuckolding in any way is real strange...lol....each to his/her own
Perfect!
Short and sweet! loved the ending
Nice hue
And the last paragraph basically said what I wanted to say.
Good flash story.
I guess Jane does not follow the "due unto others" golden rule. My guess is that she wanted to play, but didn't think about the hubby getting to play also. Thank You.
Second Comment
Upon reading again, I determined that he should have thrown out both his wife and the other cunt just on principle because one was and one wanted to be a cheating skank. Just a thought.
Good one
Good story, nice that the dim witted woman learned her lesson before it was too late.
Last Part
That last bit always comes to mind when I read a cheating or cuck story. What if the roles were reversed...
Bwahahaha
Hue, I don't always like your stories, but when I do, they're great.
Women like this...
... are why men perfect the bitch slap. Sometimes the only way to stop stupid is to knock it out of the room. Christ he married a moron.
#2 I CAN SEE WHERE AN OLD ADAGE
about the Goose and Gander seems to fit in this theme. TK U M\LJ LV NV
Ha ha ha
I guess an english class or two would have killed your dumb ass??????????
Ha Ha Ha What an idiot!!!
Well THAT's the way you handle sluts!
Correct grammar only really matters if the sentence structure, word choice and spelling make the story unreadable. This story was eminently readable and funny to boot. It should come as no surprise to men that women want to have their cake and eat it too! And then, if they don't get their way, they won't share their cake.
So Many Great Lines In Stories
"If you want a cuckold, buy a fucking bird!". This one ranks up there with the best. ID, Saxon, cantbuymy, all great authors with equally funny great lines.
5* just for the line! Thanks for the no cucks here great read.
5*
Should
Divorce Jane and beat 7 shades of shit out of his sister Barbara. How can you trust any woman after she begs you to let her fuck around? When you say HELL NO, how do you know she hasn`t done it already, or how do you know that she won`t do it anyway behind your back? There`s nothing more devious and manipulative than the female mind. Once the question is asked, ALL trust evaporates in it`s wake. Once the question is out there, it can`t be taken back, and no amount of "Honey I didn't mean it" or "Honey I was just joking" can ever prevent that sneaking suspicion or mistrust from enter your mind, and once it does, how do you get rid of it?
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