I know this is fiction, but have you ever had root canal? it doesn't take a year or did she deliberately have more teeth done to continue the affair?
Epilogue? Be nice to see if lisa ever got her "filling" finished.
What a wonderful plot line. I loved it! Drama, action, humiliation, revenge. You've written one of the best stories on the site.
The scenes are hysterically funny and drawn out perfectly - excellent tale!
Pure greatness
This had possibilities but your lack of an ending ruined it.
Finish the damn story!
It just never escaped to see daylight. In an attempt to be clever, your story got lost in the words and you forgot to tell it. Simply no fun to read because it was practically unreadable. What a mess!
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I know this is fiction, but have you ever had root canal? it doesn't take a year or did she deliberately have more teeth done to continue the affair?
How about an
Epilogue? Be nice to see if lisa ever got her "filling" finished.
A plot worthy of me
What a wonderful plot line. I loved it! Drama, action, humiliation, revenge. You've written one of the best stories on the site.
Great job!
The scenes are hysterically funny and drawn out perfectly - excellent tale!
greatness
Pure greatness
Next time - put an ending to your messes
This had possibilities but your lack of an ending ruined it.
Just another lame author!
Finish the damn story!
There was a story in there somewhere.
It just never escaped to see daylight. In an attempt to be clever, your story got lost in the words and you forgot to tell it. Simply no fun to read because it was practically unreadable. What a mess!
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