Puppy Love Ch. 05

too fast!

If that was the end, it went way too quickly for me. I hope there's more to come...

Oh Hell to the No!!!!!

This can't be it! His meddlesome mother, the ex wife recent appearance and the missing brother. There is far to many loose ends I need closure or a spin off. Please don't ruin a good thing.

Very nice story arc

A great story arc, but it needs another chapter to really wrap things up. Why did his ex-wife appear? What did she really want? The story she was just passing by and was given the address by her former mother in law doesn’t seem right. What’s their real motive? And how are David’s parents – especially his mother – going to react to the pregnancy? Enough material to really wrap it up. Now it’s a bit hanging there…

okay okay :)

I reread it after it was submitted and realized it really isn't done... I will work on it!

I need another fix

I finally got time to read this chapter and it ended too soon. Please don't take to long to give us another chapter or two to finish this love story.

I can just see David's mother, (the bitch) scheming to bring his ex and him back together and then threatening to cut him out of her will if he marries Emma. You have plenty of background established to give us one or two more chapters I'm sure.

DS

niiiiice!

Beautiful chapter!

Enjoy this chapter, can't wait for the next to find out what is in the final chapter or to see if there are more to come.