All Comments on 'Ghost Romp'

on your first submission to Lit. You are now a published author. Like most first storys there are a few mistakes but nothing you can't correct in future storys.

Again I say congrats and wish you the best of luck w/your writing.

i would of love to have seen a little moe detail. and i hope that you write another one involving these charaters.

This is your first submission ? No way

I do like this story very much and I do hope that you have continued to write stories like this

Maybe adding a bit more detail, like if many girls put out red candles how does he choose which one he is going to spend the evening with

I am hoping to find more stories that you have written