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The Autumn Garden

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by GimletEdge10/22/11

The maturity of your style makes for lush reading.

Seldom is mentioned on Literotica the unreached climax with its attendant frustration. It launches Clare into a botanical coitus care of her husband's spirit. (Is it possible that she was not quite so unaware of his plight during that last attack?)

And the brash youthfulness, acting in accord with what was perceived to be her wish, destroys the fruit of a sexual lifetime in a single swipe. A morality play!

The sex is hot, the justice literary.

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Twisted vines

Mabeuse, your details sure entwine the heart with horror and the mind with grotesque erotic images. Appropriately, the ending felt like an axe impact too.

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by Anonymous10/25/11

Horribly Wonderful

This story made me hot, and then made me shiver with that delightful disgust that all good horror provokes. It is truly a halloween tale.

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by FaithWhite10/27/11

What a story!!!

I was enjoying the first half of the story very much but all the while thinking halloween? how?.

You delivered.

Really good story and very halloweeny. loved the line botanical rape for some reason. very witty. 5/5 x 2 :)

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by LisbethElliot10/29/11

Scary hot!

Only you can entice me to read horror, erotic or otherwise. Only you can make me cum and terrify me at the same time. The sex, as always, is incredibly hot...even making me jealous of a woman being raped by plants. But your writing is so exquisitely beautiful that it brings tears to my eyes.

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by Lisie02/06/12

Oh my!

Thank you for sharing your gift with us. It was another extremely erotic story. You never disappoint!

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