by nrjhnsn
... he calls her "little girl." As a not-so-small woman myself, I also love that he loves her body. Thanks for the reminder that we should love our bodies, no matter what size we are, and accept that others find us beautiful and sexy just the way we are. Also, it's refreshing to read a story that's not about a big hulk of a man falling for a skinny, tiny woman.
loved it... Can't get enough of it. this story is to good to stand alone please continue writing.
It's nice to see a bigger curvy woman get the man
What a great story teller you are. That this is only your 2nd submission is amazing. I already know I'm going to read your first story.
You did a wonderful job describing both the main characters, including giving them both alittle background. The way you snuck in the fact the Silas was a Vamp, make that a Vamp King was great. And the fact that Kenzie was so mixed up about self image rang true.
You did a really wonderful job w/this story and I look forward to reading more of your future storys.
I LOVE IT!!! MORE PLEASE!!!! BIG GIRLS ARE BEAUTIFUL TOO!!! BEAUTY IS NOT IN THE SIZE OF YOUR CLOTHES... IT'S MORE THAN THAT THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! VERY SEXY READ.... THINKIN ABOUT GETTING BIT MYSELF.... MMMM....
This is a great story. Full figured ladies need yummy men too!
I love both of your stories. They are well written and I really hope you continue to write. You had interesting ideas about vampirism and I hope you continue to write about Silas and Kenzie. You could easily make their story novel length. I am looking forward to your next story.
That was f'ing hawtt seriously wet n hardcore hawtt... Please write more! I'm loving it ;-)
I really enjoyed this! As a plus size girl myself, her feelings about herself echoed mine exactly. It sucks being bigger in this society. I loved how he chose her in spite of, and seemingly b/c of her figure.
I think it was well-written and I really would like to see more of their story. I think it could be a longer story or series.
I hope you'll consider writing more about them.
this story rocked on so many levels, i totally enjoyed myself reading this.
Great job i am looking forward to more.
I love this story. I am always up for a bbw story. Totally enjoyed this.
You are gifted as an author - so sensual, sexy, archaic, romantic with a deep understanding of the way a big girl feels. I want more.
Sorry for my English . I'm good at reading not at writing ;)
this story was great! As someone who is plus sized myself and disabled from birth, I love to see the girl that I can identify with get her vamp! I'm also addicted to vampire stories if you didn't know. Thanks for writing a story that has a woman that knows she is beautiful no matter what society says!
I hope you decided to publish your writing someday. It is wonderful to have something written from the viewpoint for us plus sized bbws. Thank you for sharing this beautifully erotic uplifting woman empowering story. I loved it and I hope to see something else submitted.
I have now read all four of the stories you have posted, straight through. I am breathless...and hot. You are a stunning writer...I cannot wait to see more!
This story was amazing and I hope you make it a series
If more so called romance writer out there wrote like you I think I'd actually enjoy picking up a book or two.
Please tell me this is going to be some kind of series?
im kinda of a greedy little bitch just not so much on the bitch maybe a slut but yeah it kinda feels like it would be cool for more
I think that is something a lot of us forget. And I hope more of us remember this. We are not all thin and size twos, even if the media and society forget that it's what's on the inside that counts and that everyone is beautiful in their own way.
I love all of your stories sooo much!!! I can't wait for new submissions! Has Claiming Bella been released yet?
This must be one of the best stories I have ever read! well done
Loved this story actually I am on to ready all your stories. I have read your newest. Just so excited and aroused. Love the characters and the detail is best bar none.... Thank you
What a lovely sex positive story. Very well written and very erotic. I liked hearing a story from a sassy sarcastic experience. Keep up the good work.
That was ...I can't even justify in words how wonderful that was. Being a plus-size myself it's hard to think of someone wanting me, so yeah. That was a boost of confidence I wasn't expecting from a Sunday afternoon fun read. And that was fun. Gloriously fun. Very well written and the characters were nicely 3-dimensional.
You should think about writing a book on this, if you do There is an App Called Wattpad many amateur authors start out on there and eventually have their books published to first virtual copy then hard...
I love your writing a n d characters. I hope you continue this story.
Well done! Very intense and sexual with just the right amount of mystery to the very end. It would be nice to see another chapter but better just this one than none. Thanks
Ehh, started off strong but her falling in love with him AND deciding to permanently bond with him AND become an immortal vampire all in the span of 20 minutes seems ridiculous