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liked it
cant wait for part three but next time do a complete read through to catch the old misspelled word like poss as in possibilty.
More!
I like it! It would be good to see more subtle clues that he actually does care for her. You have already put in some, such as being gentle with her in the bath, giving her ample food and time to rest, etc but I would like to see a few more, particularly as the relationship grows.
nice
nice story, can't wait to see how you develop the characters. Keep going!
Awesome but I would like to see that he cares about her..
aahhh yes! did i dedect the dr. softing tward her? keep it up!:D
Well...
What happened? Did she get pregnant? What happens next? Does her father come to check on her? Does the doctor begin to appreciate her?
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