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Love Lost, Then Found Ch. 03

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by Anonymous10/27/11

hmmmm

seems awfully short for a novel. good storyline tho

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by lust_4_u10/28/11

good start

I think the story has a lot of potential, but agree the chapters are too short - it is over before the reader can really get a sense of what is going on. I also would reccomend getting someone to look over the story before you post -- there were several errors that make for a choppy read. That being said, I look forward to the next chapter! Thanks for sharing!

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by Anonymous11/22/11

I agree about each chapter being too short but.......

Enjoy reading this but would be nice to have longer chapters to story can develop.
Its well done though. Thanks.

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