All Comments on 'Love Lost, Then Found Ch. 03'

seems awfully short for a novel. good storyline tho

I think the story has a lot of potential, but agree the chapters are too short - it is over before the reader can really get a sense of what is going on. I also would reccomend getting someone to look over the story before you post -- there were several errors that make for a choppy read. That being said, I look forward to the next chapter! Thanks for sharing!

Enjoy reading this but would be nice to have longer chapters to story can develop.

Its well done though. Thanks.