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LOVE
I wish I could do her stepdad!! Very well written 5 stars! Can't wait for Chapter 2!!
Decent story but,
lots of little errors, misspelling, repetitions, etc. Proof read your story before submitting.
Misspellings
Sorry, I rely on spell check and am not really looking to post a finished piece, it's more just the story line rather than anything else, grammar and poor spelling will probably be found, I'll try to have someone look it over next time though.
Great
Loved it even if there were spelling mistakes I still got great visuals
Yes!
That was a great beginning. Yes there were grammar errors, but nothing I can't live with. I would be honored to proof read for you anytime.
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