Submissive Soccer Moms: Shy MILF

soccer mom

loved your story and how the two loved the warm feeling afterwards

soccer mom 2

I am torn between wanting the daughter to find them and in a way I don't. It would probably be best to let her find out by guessing why her mom and coach are such good friends now. That way the story stays sweet.
thanks again

too hot

That was an amazing tale..too good.

Wow!

The way you turned the dom/sub relationship around not once but twice, and then just left it an ambiguous equality at the end...not only hotter than Hades but fascinating to read. Can't wait for the next installment!

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Spectacular story & a must read! As always you had me on every word. So erotic, yet sweet & romantic. Would love to read about Layla & Clara's future in another story. It would make for a nice long romantic seduction story.

Great Story

This is another great story from you. I have enjoyed your library of great stories!!

LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVe It, please keep writing, like to see the coach still have to dominate and come home to tell "Mommy" all about it and then being dominated by "Mommy"
Just keep it going please

Top Notch

Excellent character development for such a relatively short story. Very hot sex as well. Keep up the good work!

AGREE

Must agree with the other comments. Amazing twist on the plot. Leaves room for another chapter or 2. Layla must still seduce the rich lady's daughter. No doubt Maddie must become involved, also. Excellent read even though shorter than some of your other stories/chapters.

Silk Finds a New Dimension

That's why I enjoy copy editing her work so much. Good hot sex and plenty of plot keeps a reader's interest. More to come (pun definitely intended) from this extremely talented writer. Stay tuned, fans, more good stories from Silk are on the way.

Excellent work!

A wonderful story, very sweet. I love the way you concentrated on the emotions of the 2 women, it was very romantic. One of my favorites from you.

Great plot

If layla is really submitting to Carla, she might want to present her tiffany as a toy :)

You write wonderfully sexy stories, we read them as our foreplay

come on

come on where`s the rest keep checking to see if you have followed these up yet,how long must we wait

Another installment, please

Such a great beginning - these two stories you have woven together. All of us are patiently waiting for more

What a switch-up.

I liked the contrast between the preceding story and this one; to each in their own measure. The dance of power that developed during the seduction was verrry enjoyable, and the way they fell in love at the end was wonderfully fulfilling.

I kept waiting for the daughter to walk in, or (better still) to have the story shift at the very end, letting us briefly into the confused, but overpoweringly horny viewpoint of the daughter watching from the hallway. Of course that sort of thing could lead... anywhere. I love your work. Thank you.

OMG Please continue the story

Loved LOved the story. So many angles that u can pursue. Please continue and write further parts. TYSM

very good

The ending humanized Layla. It would be great to see Layla and Clara become a couple, Out side of their relationship Clara would accept Layla being a preditory dom, except when it was a threat to their relationship. Then she would be ruthless in nutralizing threat to Layla or anyone tries to seduce Layla away from her. On occasion Clara might help or/and share some of Layla's conquests.

More please to

Loved this story!! Please continue on with their story. Can't wait for more!!

Bravo

I have to say that is an INCREDIBLY well written story and I am so aroused now. You were able to transport me into the story. Bravo...thanks for helping me get off!

Wow

I loved this.

Kell

Loved it!!

This was great! Please continue this story!! I'd love to see what happens next!

Great Story

Really enjoyed the story and hope you continue with another chapter!

Coach me

Sooooooo hot, luved it. Maybe next time the dau will join in too.

The seduction of Clara, the MILF, was classic; slowly and gently cultivating the desire before allowing it to reach the point of becoming a craving for sexual release. I found Layla's prolonged teasing of Clara and keeping her under sexual tension to be extremely arousing. It reflects many of my own sexual fantasies and my desire to experience intense sexual teasing.

The reader quickly becomes captivated by the way Layla pleasures various erogenous areas of her body and effects the complete surrender of Clara; granting her the orgasm her body desperately needs only after begging her newly found young mistress!

A beautifully written erotic story that exquisitely describes the physical sensations of a beautiful woman being seduced.

Amazing

Your writing never ceases to amaze me. The first in the series set the tone but this one raised the bar very very high. The seduction of the shy MILF was building and building but then with the tables turned the story simply got hotter and hotter. thank you for sharing this amazing ertoic story!! Cheers
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The twist you wrote on the second page was amazing. You need to write a continuation for Layla and Clara.

OK, I commented on another story of yours, and was compelled to do so here also. This was another great story, your thoughts on sequels aside, this begs for continuance, as evidenced by all the comments here. Maddie and Tiffany simply must be brought into

Wow, what a dunce! Myself, not you. I typed a rather lengthy comment in the header section. Too long to re-do. So please accept my apologies, and just go with the header.---Jedd

If any of the many back rubs I ever gave turned out one / forth as good as that one. In high school the girls would come to me to have some one to vent about how bad they had been treated. Some asked for a back rub whih I would do for them I could see they would get wet between their legs. Then they would say thanks and go fuck the first guy hey saw as they did not want to be seen with the kid with the bad leg that walked funny. And 3 or 4 days later they would come back wanting me to feel sorry for them, like I had no feeling at all.

What else can be said, that has not already been recorded here! Incredibly smooth transition from seductress to seduced... I Loved it and crave for more!

10/10

Excellent erotic story with a good twist. More please.

Hello

Another fantastic story, Jasmine. Would love to see what happens next with this one. This story is insatiable.

Cool story

Cool story I liked it very much

Amazing Story

I love the way you write. As I have commented in the previous story, this series needs a serious revisit. I would love to see them, both Clara and Layla, dominate Tiffany. In the previous story you brought up how Samantha said it was okay for Mistress Layla to dominate her daughter, Tiffany. I also think it would be interesting to see Maddie brought in latter and see if she is a domme of sub.

Love the twist

You are my favourite author on Lit by far. This story is yet another example of your skills and empathy. Beautifully written and a fantastic turning of the tables. As others, I am very curious to see how the story could continue and would urge you to continue with these series.

Erotic

Beautifully developed story. Can imagine this happening in the real world. Like your style.

Fantastic

Sequel Please!

Great story

Wow. This is one of the hottest stories I have ever read. Please write sequel.

Can't wait until the sequel!!!!!!!!!

Great story

Jasmine, This story has the potential for being one of your top masterpieces.

Very Special

This was very special, Jasmine, in that you made the domme, Layla, submit to the shy MILF and calling her Mistress. I liked that turn of events. More stories about Layla, please.