What an erotic story. I loved the second part as much, if not more, than the first part.
I really appreciate how you established the characters in part one, allowing us to see the relationships develop. I also REALLY like that in part two, it didn't end in some sort of roman orgy.
This story (parts one and two) has a very believable element to it. I hope you will continue writing. You have a gift.
A fine continuation of your story. The hot tub scene is one of the most erotic I've read in quite a while...the in the flesh revelation of a mother-son love to an outsider is one of my favorite fantasy moments! Looking anxiously for the next!
Loved every moment (and movement :) ) of the so well told. You certainly have the gift for the erotic - a tale that is so well written that it transports the reader to Linda, Mark, Annie and Tom
Just to add my two cents. You are quite a wonderful writer. Your development of characters is at a superior level; one not usually found in erotic writings. While most are content to leave the reader "outside looking in, you have the marvleous ability to drawing your reader into the story and leave her completely overcome by what is happening in her own living room. :)
You maintained your quality level very well in Chapter 2, and you didn't get in such a rush to get to the big MFMF scene that you let down on the flow and the descriptions.
There is tenderness in this story, blended with the eroticism, that speaks to the feelings you must have for your son. This is not a dirty story, but rather a very sweet one. The mother in the story displays a healthy self-respect along with a deep love for her son, and the fact that she has raised him as a single mother is used to explain the deep feelings they have for each other, on many different levels. Being his mother and admirer and secret sharer and lover all coalesce, and you make it all seem natural, and beautiful!
Thank you for writing such a sensitive, moving story, and for sharing your feelings with us. I feel privileged to have been allowed to read it.
You obviously are very good at this. Please keep writing.
There is no doubt that this is the hottest fuck story that I have ever read. Hope you continue to write as you have a knack of drawing it out and making a person really hot and then jacking off to the dream that you created. Thanks again and keep up the stories. Gale
a nice conclusion... well, I hope that it isn't a conclusion!
by
Anonymous11/03/11
Excellent!!
You have a great talent for writing - PLEASE don't stop! Would be nice to see the two sons getting together too!
by
Anonymous11/04/11
Great Love/Lust Story
As you so well illustrate in this delightful story, sex is so much better when the partners truly love each other. Your mother and son are two very nice, considerate people. They obviously respect each other and defer to the other's desires. Although their sexual activity eventually becomes very hot and passionate, there is never the slightest trace of unwanted domination or latent cruelty. Their genuine love is the controlling force throughout, and they seem more concerned about the other person's pleasure than their own. I would have been so overwhelmingly happy if I could have had a real-life romance like this with my mother.
I love your stories about your adventures with your son. Great story line and wonderful content. Please keep up the good work and give us more of your mother and son adventures to enjoy!
by
Anonymous11/06/11
Brilliant writing!
Having discovered Literotica several years ago I have read many many great stories but your's, by far, is the best one yet. Your writing is excellent, your description of the events is superb, and I feel as if I were actually there watching this wonderful story unfold. I certainly hope this is not your only submission as I will be watching for more new material by you. Great Job!
Sophisticated eroticism... sensuality @ its sexy best!
Where do I start – so much good stuff in such a short story…
I loved you sniffing and even licking your “crusty panties” that Mark had used to jerk off. I love your sensual lust and behavior!
Your oral expertise and tease is really hot. I love that you swallowed his cum. Your proclivity to not rush his blowjob, but to crest – ebb – crest – ebb was really hot! And of course – your sexy yellow panty strokes – well let’s just say, that visual thought makes me hard and wet with pre-cum.
I love your description as you drank your iced frappuccino – that “just fucked” look of satisfaction and happiness on my face.
Mark and Tom sharing panties was a surprise to me, a really hot surprise, very believable. And you sharing with Mark about Anne listening to your “sex phone” call was hot. I enjoyed being reminded of Anne sticking her finger in her wet pussy and letting you lick it clean.
The scene with you, Anne and Mark around the hot tub was extremely erotic. I love your description of each person’s arousal. I love the kissing between you and Anne. And then you are eating her pussy – WOW, Linda! This is my erotic fantasy: making love to my mom, while she eats her best friend’s pussy!!! Your description of how much you loved being fucked by your son, while eating her pussy heightens the erotic sensuality even more. Makes me hard just visualizing this as I type my comments. I am losing control as you describe Anne eating Mark’s love juice from your pussy! What a hot scene!
Your description of the lovemaking the next morning: “what ensued was a long, tender, sensual, love-making hour. I was positively glowing when we finished” was so romantic and loving.
And then the foursome after dinner: best friends, two moms, two sons, foreplay, fucking… WOW, HOT!!! And your detailed description of this scene created mental visual imagery, again that make my cock leak pre-cum and cause me to think: Oh, to be Mark or Tom!
And just when I thought I was as aroused as I could be, you and Anne share a 69, eating each others pussy and drinking your son's love juices mixed with feminine cum!
I believe this story is so hot because you wrote about real life experiences – even if you embellished it some. When you consider your reader rating – on your first story – Lady Linda, you are good.
Your fans, or at least this one wants to hear more about future fuck sessions: swapping sons, perhaps inviting other moms and their sons to enjoy. Perhaps include a dinner outing, what you all were wearing, the foreplay in the car, at the restaurant, on the dance floor…
We are waiting to read another hot adventure of mother/son incest… and mother/daughter incest would also be extremely hot… Finally, what is your relationship between the four of you like today?
Great real life adventure – thanks for sharing. I am coming again!
by
Anonymous11/07/11
Erotica writing at it's BEST
Linda, As I stated in chapter 1 you are amazing.
Please do not stop this series as it has so much more potential
You have an amaizng way of making me feel like I'm im in the room watching all of this go down. Please keep this story going. If you ever want any ideas or suggestions please feel free to contact me.
Thanks again for a sensual and erotic story.
Excellent story from front to back.You have a lovely concise style.I hope you continue with more accounts.Your attention to details that add to your tale are lovely.My best to you and your son
by
Anonymous11/17/11
WOW WOW WOW
Very good story, how much is real??? Please continue writeing, you are the best I've seen here.
by
Anonymous11/18/11
Where is Chapter Three
Linda - You are a wonderful writer: character development, exciting plot, excellent description and dialogue, dramatic tension and eroticism - its all there. You sweet coupling of Mom and Son made me wish I could couple with my Mom. There is a tremendous amount of room in this story for a dozen more chapters. Get to work. AnHoa Rifleman.
by
Anonymous11/18/11
Amazing story please continue. I absolutely loved it and I am craving more.
Thanks Linda for a really erotic and well written story .
I began it last night then had to go out but tonight I finished it completely if you know what I mean. Keep writing. I like the dialogue too. makes it hotter and reminds me of some past adventures.
THANK U THANK U Linda, it is hard 2 find a bloody good story on here, that i can get in2, but i felt as though i was really mark, then later tom... hope u continue this story,
5*
tittylover has asked if u could maybe add the mums going 2 a frat house, i would say nooooooo, as i think it would take the realism away from the mum/son concept mayb u could add another single mum/son? mayb another single mum/daughter
Linda, both your stories are fantastic and HOT.Hope you keep the series going! Thanks for your great stories! NaturallyI have added you to my Favorite Author list.
by
Anonymous12/25/11
hmmmm taboo as it is would love to do my sons and their friends
Having read many,many erotic stories, I find that this one is one of the best I
ever came across. Just imagine how wonderful life could be among families,
if it were not for the killjoys and moral apostles.
Of course young children should be left well alone, to grow up as innocent
as possible.
Thanks for a great read.
Had to read this much more rapidly than I would have liked. It and Ch. 01 certainly will get a re-read tomorrow - something I don't do very often. I expect tomorrow will confirm my rather hasty favorite story, favorite author designations.
by
Anonymous01/05/12
Another Chapter
Pretty Linda: We are still waiting for the next chapter. AnHoa Rifleman
by
Anonymous01/10/12
Next chapter
Look, this story is on the all time high scoring page. Its one of a dozen and a half of the all-time favorites. That is quite an accomplishment so don;t let it atrophy. Get on the stick and come up with the next chapter and make Pretty Linda even juicier and hotter and her son even harder and more of a horndog. Linda deserves it.
AnHoa Rifleman
by
Anonymous01/17/12
loved it
I hope there is more to this story or another one. Each story was good for twocum shots.
English
Bravo!
Well done! I look forward to more!
AWESOME!!!
Wonderful story and well written!!!
Wonderful
What an erotic story. I loved the second part as much, if not more, than the first part.
I really appreciate how you established the characters in part one, allowing us to see the relationships develop. I also REALLY like that in part two, it didn't end in some sort of roman orgy.
This story (parts one and two) has a very believable element to it. I hope you will continue writing. You have a gift.
Very hot
Well written and damn sexy, five stars.
Amazing...
Loved it! You write really well, and the Mom/Son aspect, damn. very hot story!
Excellent start
Very good start hope this more to come, would think at least a group night maybe moms at the frat house.
excellent
keep writing.
Arousing!
A fine continuation of your story. The hot tub scene is one of the most erotic I've read in quite a while...the in the flesh revelation of a mother-son love to an outsider is one of my favorite fantasy moments! Looking anxiously for the next!
Very Well written Story
Loved every moment (and movement :) ) of the so well told. You certainly have the gift for the erotic - a tale that is so well written that it transports the reader to Linda, Mark, Annie and Tom
Venus
Stating the obvious
Just to add my two cents. You are quite a wonderful writer. Your development of characters is at a superior level; one not usually found in erotic writings. While most are content to leave the reader "outside looking in, you have the marvleous ability to drawing your reader into the story and leave her completely overcome by what is happening in her own living room. :)
I hope you write more. You have a real gift.
unbelievable
You are too damn good. Wow, that was hot and hard.
Very good, thanks
Got to go to the bathroom so I can suck my cum out of my panties you got me for sure, thanks a bunch.
A Very Good Story
Just 1 word.... HOT !!! I hope u continue writing... U hav a real talent...
Brilliant
Once more you have done it again. Fantastic little tale please more soon
Very well written
You maintained your quality level very well in Chapter 2, and you didn't get in such a rush to get to the big MFMF scene that you let down on the flow and the descriptions.
There is tenderness in this story, blended with the eroticism, that speaks to the feelings you must have for your son. This is not a dirty story, but rather a very sweet one. The mother in the story displays a healthy self-respect along with a deep love for her son, and the fact that she has raised him as a single mother is used to explain the deep feelings they have for each other, on many different levels. Being his mother and admirer and secret sharer and lover all coalesce, and you make it all seem natural, and beautiful!
Thank you for writing such a sensitive, moving story, and for sharing your feelings with us. I feel privileged to have been allowed to read it.
You obviously are very good at this. Please keep writing.
Hot
There is no doubt that this is the hottest fuck story that I have ever read. Hope you continue to write as you have a knack of drawing it out and making a person really hot and then jacking off to the dream that you created. Thanks again and keep up the stories. Gale
very hot
a nice conclusion... well, I hope that it isn't a conclusion!
Excellent!!
You have a great talent for writing - PLEASE don't stop! Would be nice to see the two sons getting together too!
Great Love/Lust Story
As you so well illustrate in this delightful story, sex is so much better when the partners truly love each other. Your mother and son are two very nice, considerate people. They obviously respect each other and defer to the other's desires. Although their sexual activity eventually becomes very hot and passionate, there is never the slightest trace of unwanted domination or latent cruelty. Their genuine love is the controlling force throughout, and they seem more concerned about the other person's pleasure than their own. I would have been so overwhelmingly happy if I could have had a real-life romance like this with my mother.
amazing story...
love your writing style and can't wait for the next chapter...
Bravo!!!!
I love your stories about your adventures with your son. Great story line and wonderful content. Please keep up the good work and give us more of your mother and son adventures to enjoy!
Brilliant writing!
Having discovered Literotica several years ago I have read many many great stories but your's, by far, is the best one yet. Your writing is excellent, your description of the events is superb, and I feel as if I were actually there watching this wonderful story unfold. I certainly hope this is not your only submission as I will be watching for more new material by you. Great Job!
Sophisticated eroticism... sensuality @ its sexy best!
Where do I start – so much good stuff in such a short story…
I loved you sniffing and even licking your “crusty panties” that Mark had used to jerk off. I love your sensual lust and behavior!
Your oral expertise and tease is really hot. I love that you swallowed his cum. Your proclivity to not rush his blowjob, but to crest – ebb – crest – ebb was really hot! And of course – your sexy yellow panty strokes – well let’s just say, that visual thought makes me hard and wet with pre-cum.
I love your description as you drank your iced frappuccino – that “just fucked” look of satisfaction and happiness on my face.
Mark and Tom sharing panties was a surprise to me, a really hot surprise, very believable. And you sharing with Mark about Anne listening to your “sex phone” call was hot. I enjoyed being reminded of Anne sticking her finger in her wet pussy and letting you lick it clean.
The scene with you, Anne and Mark around the hot tub was extremely erotic. I love your description of each person’s arousal. I love the kissing between you and Anne. And then you are eating her pussy – WOW, Linda! This is my erotic fantasy: making love to my mom, while she eats her best friend’s pussy!!! Your description of how much you loved being fucked by your son, while eating her pussy heightens the erotic sensuality even more. Makes me hard just visualizing this as I type my comments. I am losing control as you describe Anne eating Mark’s love juice from your pussy! What a hot scene!
Your description of the lovemaking the next morning: “what ensued was a long, tender, sensual, love-making hour. I was positively glowing when we finished” was so romantic and loving.
And then the foursome after dinner: best friends, two moms, two sons, foreplay, fucking… WOW, HOT!!! And your detailed description of this scene created mental visual imagery, again that make my cock leak pre-cum and cause me to think: Oh, to be Mark or Tom!
And just when I thought I was as aroused as I could be, you and Anne share a 69, eating each others pussy and drinking your son's love juices mixed with feminine cum!
I believe this story is so hot because you wrote about real life experiences – even if you embellished it some. When you consider your reader rating – on your first story – Lady Linda, you are good.
Your fans, or at least this one wants to hear more about future fuck sessions: swapping sons, perhaps inviting other moms and their sons to enjoy. Perhaps include a dinner outing, what you all were wearing, the foreplay in the car, at the restaurant, on the dance floor…
We are waiting to read another hot adventure of mother/son incest… and mother/daughter incest would also be extremely hot… Finally, what is your relationship between the four of you like today?
Great real life adventure – thanks for sharing. I am coming again!
Erotica writing at it's BEST
Linda, As I stated in chapter 1 you are amazing.
Please do not stop this series as it has so much more potential
Part II did not disappoint
Just as well written and satisfying as the first chapter. I hope there is more to come.
Perfect
You have an amaizng way of making me feel like I'm im in the room watching all of this go down. Please keep this story going. If you ever want any ideas or suggestions please feel free to contact me.
Thanks again for a sensual and erotic story.
wonderful
I have enjoyed both chapters very much please continue to add more. Thank you
Linda`s discovery
Excellent story from front to back.You have a lovely concise style.I hope you continue with more accounts.Your attention to details that add to your tale are lovely.My best to you and your son
WOW WOW WOW
Very good story, how much is real??? Please continue writeing, you are the best I've seen here.
Where is Chapter Three
Linda - You are a wonderful writer: character development, exciting plot, excellent description and dialogue, dramatic tension and eroticism - its all there. You sweet coupling of Mom and Son made me wish I could couple with my Mom. There is a tremendous amount of room in this story for a dozen more chapters. Get to work. AnHoa Rifleman.
Amazing story please continue. I absolutely loved it and I am craving more.
Yep, its a great story
Thanks Linda for a really erotic and well written story .
I began it last night then had to go out but tonight I finished it completely if you know what I mean. Keep writing. I like the dialogue too. makes it hotter and reminds me of some past adventures.
More Amazing!
You write beautifully. Very hot.
fan-fucking-tastic
Love the two stories, I'm still hard as a rock and pumping like a fire hose. Please give us some more.
Evxellent story can't wait for chapter 3
Love the story very hot and well written
Nothing to say
Really nothing
HOT
I love your stories. Keep them coming.
I am in awe
I just love your stories! They are beautiful...as are the perfect relationships between these mothers and their sons! Simply marvelous!
The hottest story ever!!!!!!!! And so well written. Please write more.
Awesome
THANK U THANK U Linda, it is hard 2 find a bloody good story on here, that i can get in2, but i felt as though i was really mark, then later tom... hope u continue this story,
5*
just 1 more thing
tittylover has asked if u could maybe add the mums going 2 a frat house, i would say nooooooo, as i think it would take the realism away from the mum/son concept mayb u could add another single mum/son? mayb another single mum/daughter
Fantastic
Linda, both your stories are fantastic and HOT.Hope you keep the series going! Thanks for your great stories! NaturallyI have added you to my Favorite Author list.
hmmmm taboo as it is would love to do my sons and their friends
Help wanted
Wow! Do you have a remedy for a sore dick?
Linds's discovery
Having read many,many erotic stories, I find that this one is one of the best I
ever came across. Just imagine how wonderful life could be among families,
if it were not for the killjoys and moral apostles.
Of course young children should be left well alone, to grow up as innocent
as possible.
Thanks for a great read.
Very Nice, Linda
Stories like this make me wish I had had a mommy like your characters.
It only gets better . . .
Had to read this much more rapidly than I would have liked. It and Ch. 01 certainly will get a re-read tomorrow - something I don't do very often. I expect tomorrow will confirm my rather hasty favorite story, favorite author designations.
Another Chapter
Pretty Linda: We are still waiting for the next chapter. AnHoa Rifleman
Next chapter
Look, this story is on the all time high scoring page. Its one of a dozen and a half of the all-time favorites. That is quite an accomplishment so don;t let it atrophy. Get on the stick and come up with the next chapter and make Pretty Linda even juicier and hotter and her son even harder and more of a horndog. Linda deserves it.
AnHoa Rifleman
loved it
I hope there is more to this story or another one. Each story was good for twocum shots.
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