A breathtaking read especially in context with Ch 01
As a healthy male, I don't usually read this genre of story but the quality of writing and story line development are an incredible turn on. The pace makes it very believable and you have a new fan!
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Anonymous01/28/12
WOW!!!
yeah i usually stop reading these things like half way through... but i just couldnt stop. you're a genius!!! i hope there's more to this story and some other titles that r just as good.
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Anonymous02/03/12
loved the theme
I have an idea for the next chapter. One of the boys is home and his mom shares his seaman with her friend the way she did at the end of the story. She asks her friend how she liked the taste of her son. Then she offers her best friend to her son as a gift to them both
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Anonymous02/05/12
Linda's Discovery 1&2
I really enjoyed your stories, you have a great imagination, I hope to read more from you. Single parents have to support each other, haha
T.H.
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Anonymous02/05/12
Linda"s Discovery 1&2
Super writing ,great story,once I started reading I could not stop.
You had talent, my lady. I hope you have more mom/son stories (my favourites) planned for the future. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work.
by
Anonymous02/08/12
erotica you've succeeded
oh yeah i'm looking for more from you
Kam
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Anonymous02/11/12
hope chapter 3 cums soon great writting
by
Anonymous02/20/12
Great start...
Now it's time to switch partners!
by
Anonymous02/20/12
SWITCH PARTNERS
CHRISTMAS VACATION IS NEAR
by
Anonymous02/28/12
Very exciting
Very exciting story. Hope you can continue the story. This time Mom swapping or son swapping.
by
Anonymous03/05/12
Just write more!
A continuation of this story would be great. But even if you don't continue it, just keep writing. You've got skills!
by
Anonymous03/11/12
Made me want to go do my mom
by
Anonymous03/12/12
Very Erotic
By far this is the most erotic and hot mom-son incest story. I wish you were my mom or your neighbor and I could be present while you are doing your son. Please write more stories.
This is one of the most erotic stories I've ever read. I really enjoyed the womans perspective in the greatest story I've read in a long time
Thank you,
A Fan
everyone should have a mom as hot and adventurous as Linda! Definitely worth Five Stars, and I hope you will keep on writing.
by
Anonymous04/05/12
5 stars
DUNNO WHY SITE WON"T TAKE RATING......BUT ANYWAY....JUST GREAT111
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Anonymous04/07/12
THE Best
THE BestS Story i've read so far!!!!
by
Anonymous04/20/12
I so agree!
At first I didn't like reading about all this family lovin', but found I enjoyed the "how it all started" parts of the story. This one made me wish my hubby and I had shared some phone sex in our four years of long distance dating. Jealous!
You are a really great story teller and I would like to read more on this couple. Especially the details about them sharing their son's a little or a lot more!
This second part was pure joy , so very erotic such a real turn on .
stories don't get any better nor the writing more exciting .
this was a real joy to read . and the author is second to none .
loved it to bit . linda 's discovery part two was nothing but an incredible very hot horny beautiful ending with both boys filling both moms with all there young juices
a fantastic brilliant well written story.
I for one can't wait for chapter 3 when maybe they swap ?
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Anonymous05/18/12
Very good
I really liked your story. Very sexy and well written. There was enough teasing and suspense to keep me interested (hard) through out both chapters. And of coarse the sex was awesome. I really hope you write more. Will they swap moms? will there be a 4some? I hope so. Thanks for sharing your story with us
This story isn't near long enough. I thought it was slow getting started in Chapter 1, but it got better and better as it went along. And, now it's over. Uh, how is Chapter 3 coming along? lol.
Speaking for Mothers, It's a shame Son's aren't wise enough to realize 'mothers' are available. Some of us we not mature enough to realize these desire were possible. I wasn't! Not until VWC10 posed that subject in years past. So many opportunities for further adventure through the mind of this quality author.
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Anonymous06/29/12
one of the best
I have been reading stories on literocia for a long while and have writen some also. This is one of the best ever. BRB AD53
I have been reading Literotica for a number of years and this is the very best I have read yet. Toward the end of Chapter 01 the anticipation of what was to come was buzzing in my head, and with Chapter 02 all my fantasies were fulfilled. As noted in some of the other comments I think the fantasies you have captured in this tale are probably a lot more prevalent than we think............
Very well written and very well paced to the point that I became part of the story, anticipating every move yet to come/cum. I am already looking forward to Chapter 03 and beyond......... Keep up the good work!
Sorry to say that I just now discovered this talented writer's work. Even sorrier to see that she has not posted anything more for almost a year.
What a loss for the many of us who so admired her first two stories.
Please come back.
by
Anonymous08/16/12
HOT AS IT GET'S
KEEP IT UP, LET US READ MORE MORE MORE
by
Anonymous09/17/12
WOW and WOW
this was one of the best stories I have read - wish you had more like these - hurry and write more -
This story was hot and the more I read the more I got harder...i
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Anonymous10/10/12
So hard reading
I've never come so much reading her stories. Takes me back to hearing my Mom fuck Dad at nights and wanting to take his pace between her legs. Write more!
5 Stars really aren't enough to rate this superb story!
What a fantastic story - absolutely red hot! I loved everything about it, and just know it's going to lead to some Mommy Swapping later on. More please!!
You writing made this sound and feel so realistic. It took me days to get through both chapters. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it. Thanks
by
Anonymous11/14/12
HOT! HOT! HOT!
One the hottest stories on Literotica. Got me hard real quick. Hope you write some more about this foursome. I'd love to jerk off while the boys fuck each other's mother.
by
Anonymous11/23/12
Awesome
Absolutely fabulous story. Can't believe how hard I got reading it. The narrative and characterisations, the dialogue, all of it -- so hot, and well-written. You haven't posted for ages, but you really should do more. Thanks for this one, at least.
The second chapter certainly lived up to the first.
Great writing. I will keep my eyes open for anything else you may write.
Really enjoyed it.
Thank you
by
Anonymous12/13/12
beyond words! super hot
This story is just beyond words...loved it alot.and hope soon you come up with similar style stories.
by
Anonymous12/17/12
just awsome..
want another chapter. Something like swinging incest. Awsome writing style and story line. Really enjoyed reading.
Great story, I hope that someday you might decide to add a chapter or two.
by
Anonymous01/03/13
Well done, continue to writre
Linda thanks for the first story, well done, I hope you will continue to write your story.
by
Anonymous01/09/13
Linda, your story is stupendous.
I read it, re-read it, and read it a third time. It was so lovely. I am a married woman, with two children, a boy and a girl. I have always been ashamed of my secret thoughts about them, but your story gave me courage. I hope you write more like stories for me to enjoy.
A breathtaking read especially in context with Ch 01
As a healthy male, I don't usually read this genre of story but the quality of writing and story line development are an incredible turn on. The pace makes it very believable and you have a new fan!
WOW!!!
yeah i usually stop reading these things like half way through... but i just couldnt stop. you're a genius!!! i hope there's more to this story and some other titles that r just as good.
loved the theme
I have an idea for the next chapter. One of the boys is home and his mom shares his seaman with her friend the way she did at the end of the story. She asks her friend how she liked the taste of her son. Then she offers her best friend to her son as a gift to them both
Linda's Discovery 1&2
I really enjoyed your stories, you have a great imagination, I hope to read more from you. Single parents have to support each other, haha
T.H.
Linda"s Discovery 1&2
Super writing ,great story,once I started reading I could not stop.
Wow
Simply the best in a long time. Compliments!!!!!!
^__^
You had talent, my lady. I hope you have more mom/son stories (my favourites) planned for the future. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work.
erotica you've succeeded
oh yeah i'm looking for more from you
Kam
hope chapter 3 cums soon great writting
Great start...
Now it's time to switch partners!
SWITCH PARTNERS
CHRISTMAS VACATION IS NEAR
Very exciting
Very exciting story. Hope you can continue the story. This time Mom swapping or son swapping.
Just write more!
A continuation of this story would be great. But even if you don't continue it, just keep writing. You've got skills!
Made me want to go do my mom
Very Erotic
By far this is the most erotic and hot mom-son incest story. I wish you were my mom or your neighbor and I could be present while you are doing your son. Please write more stories.
Thank you!
Thank you for a beautiful story! Extremely erotic and well written... A pleasure to read.
Woowwwww
This is one of the most erotic stories I've ever read. I really enjoyed the womans perspective in the greatest story I've read in a long time
Thank you,
A Fan
P.S. Please write much more!!!!
IF THIS WAS AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL...
everyone should have a mom as hot and adventurous as Linda! Definitely worth Five Stars, and I hope you will keep on writing.
5 stars
DUNNO WHY SITE WON"T TAKE RATING......BUT ANYWAY....JUST GREAT111
THE Best
THE BestS Story i've read so far!!!!
I so agree!
At first I didn't like reading about all this family lovin', but found I enjoyed the "how it all started" parts of the story. This one made me wish my hubby and I had shared some phone sex in our four years of long distance dating. Jealous!
You are a really great story teller and I would like to read more on this couple. Especially the details about them sharing their son's a little or a lot more!
both having a cumming together
This second part was pure joy , so very erotic such a real turn on .
stories don't get any better nor the writing more exciting .
this was a real joy to read . and the author is second to none .
loved it to bit . linda 's discovery part two was nothing but an incredible very hot horny beautiful ending with both boys filling both moms with all there young juices
a fantastic brilliant well written story.
Brill
I for one can't wait for chapter 3 when maybe they swap ?
Very good
I really liked your story. Very sexy and well written. There was enough teasing and suspense to keep me interested (hard) through out both chapters. And of coarse the sex was awesome. I really hope you write more. Will they swap moms? will there be a 4some? I hope so. Thanks for sharing your story with us
Art
So exciting ...
The story is so touching and erotic, it totally made me want to be there and love them both.
oh noooooooooo.................
This story isn't near long enough. I thought it was slow getting started in Chapter 1, but it got better and better as it went along. And, now it's over. Uh, how is Chapter 3 coming along? lol.
Please Continue
Love your story. If most mothers knew just how many of the sons thought about being with their mom.
A shame Son's aren't wise enough ...
Speaking for Mothers, It's a shame Son's aren't wise enough to realize 'mothers' are available. Some of us we not mature enough to realize these desire were possible. I wasn't! Not until VWC10 posed that subject in years past. So many opportunities for further adventure through the mind of this quality author.
one of the best
I have been reading stories on literocia for a long while and have writen some also. This is one of the best ever. BRB AD53
Where is this author?
She wrote this last year.. Has she just quit? Is she writting somewhere else? Anybody know?
Wow, so well written, so erotic!!!!!
Lindat18 thanks for being so brave to write about your taboo love and sex life with your son, you're a very special Mom and woman is all I can say!
YES!
I have been reading Literotica for a number of years and this is the very best I have read yet. Toward the end of Chapter 01 the anticipation of what was to come was buzzing in my head, and with Chapter 02 all my fantasies were fulfilled. As noted in some of the other comments I think the fantasies you have captured in this tale are probably a lot more prevalent than we think............
Very well written and very well paced to the point that I became part of the story, anticipating every move yet to come/cum. I am already looking forward to Chapter 03 and beyond......... Keep up the good work!
I'm sorry
Sorry to say that I just now discovered this talented writer's work. Even sorrier to see that she has not posted anything more for almost a year.
What a loss for the many of us who so admired her first two stories.
Please come back.
HOT AS IT GET'S
KEEP IT UP, LET US READ MORE MORE MORE
WOW and WOW
this was one of the best stories I have read - wish you had more like these - hurry and write more -
More please!
Please write more!
All I can say is damn
This story was hot and the more I read the more I got harder...i
So hard reading
I've never come so much reading her stories. Takes me back to hearing my Mom fuck Dad at nights and wanting to take his pace between her legs. Write more!
Simply HOT
Your story is sooo hot. One can't help but cum while reading it.
came hard
I just came all over myself reading this one. Awesome story - hope it's mostly true!
5 Stars really aren't enough to rate this superb story!
What a fantastic story - absolutely red hot! I loved everything about it, and just know it's going to lead to some Mommy Swapping later on. More please!!
So realistic
You writing made this sound and feel so realistic. It took me days to get through both chapters. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it. Thanks
HOT! HOT! HOT!
One the hottest stories on Literotica. Got me hard real quick. Hope you write some more about this foursome. I'd love to jerk off while the boys fuck each other's mother.
Awesome
Absolutely fabulous story. Can't believe how hard I got reading it. The narrative and characterisations, the dialogue, all of it -- so hot, and well-written. You haven't posted for ages, but you really should do more. Thanks for this one, at least.
What can I say?
The second chapter certainly lived up to the first.
Great writing. I will keep my eyes open for anything else you may write.
Really enjoyed it.
Thank you
beyond words! super hot
This story is just beyond words...loved it alot.and hope soon you come up with similar style stories.
just awsome..
want another chapter. Something like swinging incest. Awsome writing style and story line. Really enjoyed reading.
Loved it
Great story, I hope that someday you might decide to add a chapter or two.
Well done, continue to writre
Linda thanks for the first story, well done, I hope you will continue to write your story.
Linda, your story is stupendous.
I read it, re-read it, and read it a third time. It was so lovely. I am a married woman, with two children, a boy and a girl. I have always been ashamed of my secret thoughts about them, but your story gave me courage. I hope you write more like stories for me to enjoy.
Abigail
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