Linda your story was incredible. You included every aspect from the total innocence of a young man and mother to the steps up to becoming lovers. This story is my favorite of all time.
Thank you so very much!
You are an in incredible writer.
Frank
by
Anonymous02/07/13
Even better than the first story. You simply must keep writing and in particular a sequel to this one.
I've just finished reading this again and realized it is nearly a year and a half since it was submitted and you have not added another part or a new story. It is time. it's stories like these (well, there really aren't that many THIS good!) that keep me from needing viagra!
You are good !!!
Not quite shaking but PLEASE write a lot more chapters or something down the same lines as that .Iam sure it will be as good "but" I think Linda , Anne and the boys have a lot more things to get up to dont you ???????
Linda, Your stories seem so real and i enjoyed them very much. Please keep writing and continuing this story. I know you havent written anything more for awhile, but wish you would do all your fans a favor and keep writing more chapters on this story. You are a very good writer.
by
Anonymous03/13/13
Excellent story development....
Sharing with friends for mutual satisfaction ... the way it should be. Me and GF enjoyed your story. She is thinking her daughter needs to tease me or please me that way so we can both have her. Thanks for the thoughts.
My comments will cover the story in total (Chapter's 01 and 02) rather than as individual chapters. Being a person with a natural curosity to analyze people, four and half years in the US Navy with JAG for the Sixth Fleet, and my business career in banking and finance, culminating and relating to analyzing all forms of accidents and courts-martial with the Navy, and the financial well-being and character of people in the banking world, I earned the nickname of "Eagle Eye", for my ability to find, observe, locate, discover and find things others could not.
Linda (if I may be so bold), you have written, authored and I'm sure with some assistance, produced a magnificent and true masterpiece of literature. Fortunately for the incest lovers and myself in particular (and some other deviants) here on Literotica you have presented us with many hours of pleasurable reading.
Over the past hour or so I read all 132 comments of Chapter 01, and 109 comments for Chapter 02; every critique imaginable was offered, probably more than half with individuals not brave enough to identify themselves even with a "nom de plume". Many of the comments had glowing praise for your efforts; and so do I praise your work and would also add that I might be your number one cheerleader, and here's why!
To begin I have no homosexual biases nor hates; neither do I relish nor have any urges nor tendencies as I am straight. I also do not read gay or lesbian stories--to each his own! When Linda bussed the lips of her friend Anne near the end of chapter 01, I had the fear the fabulous mother and son love story was going to be muddied and deviate into some wandering lesbian affair, or even worse--but I chose to withhold judgement until after reading the full story of parts one and two. When Linda began her lesbian activities in the spa of chapter 02, I almost stopped reading at that point, but did continue to read through for the specific reason I was going to comment after the story finished, and I wanted to be as objective as possible. I'm glad I read through those token lesbian sex scenes in the spa for the following reaon.
Throughout the story of both parts I gleaned, in my opinion, the mother's total actions and every sexual activity that pertained to her son was for one reason, and that was for the total, pure unadulterated love and devotion of her son's pleasure and love. In Chapter 01 when Linda and Anne performed the 69 pussy cleansing of each other, in the spa, after their son's climaxes, in my mind, it was purely another block in the foundation of her, Linda's, love for her son.
To her credit, Linda never displayed any lesbian urges nor proclivities outside those couple of endearing minutes in the presence of her total humbrage and dedication to the pleasuring of her son's mother-love!! Pure and simple. In the deepest recesses of my heart and soul I feel I have read this lesbian action on her part correctly.
The writer, and/or author know for sure why the token lesbian actions were added, so I won't second guess the action, with the exception of my prior comments above.
The story is undoubtedly one of the better constructed, themed and character usage I've had the pleasure to read seldom and rarely. The story did not just come to a screeching halt at the end of Chapter 02!!!!! Life and the imagination and the fantasies of the writer continued, even to this day. It has been seventeen months since the first part was posted, several weeks later for part two. Many of the 240 plus comments so far have asked for Chapter 03--or more--and I join in the utterances and chorus for further writing from your God-Blessed mind and fingers.
Congratulations on a monumental masterpiece. Your deserve every accolade!
by
Anonymous03/21/13
The people demand rubber dicks.......oh, and more chapters
by
Anonymous03/29/13
hooooot .. more .. we need more .. i can't wait for more ..
This story is HOT!! Linda, the writer, Should get a prize for one of best stories Literotica has ever published!! If this isn't from personal experience; She has one hell of a sexual imagination with such bold graphic descriptions I came with all of them!! Thank you very much and keep the stories cumming!!!
we mead watter and lotes ofit..Just hope nextschapters are note long in cuming linda your on hot mom and your friend annie well all I can say love leann xxxxxxxx
Linda - I was living this with you - very hot story - please write more soon.
ps. May I have some of your panties please mom?
Mark
by
Anonymous05/03/13
Best Yet!
Best yet! While I find all kinds of sexual themes exciting, the mother / son incest theme has been one of those that I have found particularly erotic. The emotional implications may be complex but the attraction of the story is certainly clear for anyone who has shared this kind of fascination. Thanks to the author for sharing these intimate nuances.
I had always wished i could have been with my mom. She was short with large breasts and I looked at her every chance I got. I did the panty thing for a while but never got to fuck her. GREAT story. Let;s hear from you and Mark again!!!
by
Anonymous06/10/13
awesome, more please
excellent story and writing, would love to see more of the fantasy unfold as they swap more than panties and cum. Thank you, please keep writing 9
by
Anonymous06/29/13
I don't understand it.
A lot of people think you're a "brilliant" writer. You couldn't write your way out of a paperback mystery. The dialog is terrible. As in flat, boring, and repetitive. There are so many clunky sentences here that you could paper a wall with them.
"He quickly picked his head back up..." What? He'd been decapitated and survived? Try: "He raised/lifted his head."
This was incredibly well written and incredibly sexy! I loved how real the situation felt and how believable the protagonist was in being both a mom and a lover. In short, congratulations, you have just become my first Favorited author! I look forward to seeing what you come up with next!
lovely wrap-up of this nice sexy story-good ending-thanks
by
Anonymous08/15/13
Excellent and captivating story
If this is your first venture into this medium, you hit the jackpot. Well written, personal, believable, and kept me reading with a great hope that not only might you consider extending this but writing lots more.
Great stroking story. It is all in the details leading up to the cumclusion!!!!
by
Anonymous10/24/13
How much was really true? :)
I very much enjoyed the story. I realize a lot might be true, but I am sure a lot is also exaggerated or fiction all together. would love to chat so see just how much. Nice for fantasies though! :D
by
Anonymous10/24/13
MY REQUEST TO YOU
Is it too much to ask you to repeat your submission...It was a great story that I have read two more times since the first time..... I was so turned by your detailed story line...I wish you could continue it with episodes ....so we can follow the life of Linda and her side kick in love....Annie
I cant correctly source my password but I want to hear from you.....
email.....kizambeezi@yahoo.com.......You can call me ....Jae
by
Anonymous11/04/13
incestlove
Thanks for this so exciting incest story!!Awesome,but why did you not make Mark fuck Annie and Tom,Linda?This is the cent missing in this story.Don't you agree?Plse continue
by
Anonymous11/11/13
Love your writing
Loved both of your stories, so hot and got me so incredibly turned on that I jacked off with my wife's panties!
by
Anonymous12/01/13
dear god i need to cum so bad after reading both your stories,
feel like i'm going to pop, had you continued that final scene i would had to explain the sudden eruption of my orgasm to my wife sitting across from me, in fact i'm off for some fun thank you very much for your work look forward to future titles
by
Anonymous12/06/13
Pretty good finish.
I was a bit worried after part one that we were headed for some kind of free swapping circus with both moms and sons. The limited pair-by-pair evening was a good way for things to end. There are endless tales of random group swapping people of all types to read. This story seemed more real because it was kept within the boundaries of a natural loving relationship. The lesbian moments between Ann and Linda are more than fine and completely believable for two women of their background so it did not seem forced for the sake of titillation.
I add my hopes that we will get to read future stories by this writer, but, not if it entails frat boy orgies and trading mom-partners as presents. Linda & Anne and their sons can be put aside right here or we could continue with the focus more on Anne and Tom finding their way. Looking at the time since this was submitted I'd guess the story was done.
Sure, the writing style is far from perfect, but it's far above the usual dreary efforts in this category. Here's hoping LindaT will post other good reads in the future.
Without a doubt handr down the best mother/son story Ive read to date. The only th ing I can think of that might have made it even better is if the two moms were sisters.
by
Anonymous12/26/13
Panties!
Love your story. I love(d) my mom's panties. I'm glad yu kept it a love story and not a son - swapping story. Shareing Mark to the degree she did so as to get Tom & Anne together was good. It wouldn't have been good for them to swap beyond that as it might have weakened both relationships.
by
Anonymous01/11/14
IF you do a 3rd Chapter
PLEASE do NOT have the couples switch partners! As it is they did not need to be in the same house, let alone the same room this time. The interest was already there. The mothers AND sons had already talked to each other. There was no other stimulus needed to initiate there own activity. (btw it would have been a good source for a new story thread)
Why can't authors just let a couple enjoy being with each other without immediately going off into other directions before they even know who they are together?
this is as gtood a story thats out there nicely written although not keen on sons sharing there mothers as i would want to keep her all to my self and never want to share her but you did a good job at walking that fine line with that cant wait to see if more cums along and keep them from fucking the neighbors to much please great story though keep up the good work
These two stories typified lit-EROTICA. They were marvellous. Haven't had time to read all the other comments but to hell with them I loved both stories.
5* is nowhere near enough.
As each and every comment mentions, this story is simply an erotic masterpiece!! Both chapters make me cum each time I read them. Five stars is nowhere enough. Just wished the author continued writing.
English
Fantastic
Linda your story was incredible. You included every aspect from the total innocence of a young man and mother to the steps up to becoming lovers. This story is my favorite of all time.
Thank you so very much!
You are an in incredible writer.
Frank
Even better than the first story. You simply must keep writing and in particular a sequel to this one.
More, please
Time for Chapter 3...
Need to keep writing. You are very talented.
More..Please?!
I've just finished reading this again and realized it is nearly a year and a half since it was submitted and you have not added another part or a new story. It is time. it's stories like these (well, there really aren't that many THIS good!) that keep me from needing viagra!
HOLY SHIT Part 2
You are good !!!
Not quite shaking but PLEASE write a lot more chapters or something down the same lines as that .Iam sure it will be as good "but" I think Linda , Anne and the boys have a lot more things to get up to dont you ???????
Keep writing
Linda, Your stories seem so real and i enjoyed them very much. Please keep writing and continuing this story. I know you havent written anything more for awhile, but wish you would do all your fans a favor and keep writing more chapters on this story. You are a very good writer.
Excellent story development....
Sharing with friends for mutual satisfaction ... the way it should be. Me and GF enjoyed your story. She is thinking her daughter needs to tease me or please me that way so we can both have her. Thanks for the thoughts.
Another voice crying "More"
Linda's Discovery Ch.02
My comments will cover the story in total (Chapter's 01 and 02) rather than as individual chapters. Being a person with a natural curosity to analyze people, four and half years in the US Navy with JAG for the Sixth Fleet, and my business career in banking and finance, culminating and relating to analyzing all forms of accidents and courts-martial with the Navy, and the financial well-being and character of people in the banking world, I earned the nickname of "Eagle Eye", for my ability to find, observe, locate, discover and find things others could not.
Linda (if I may be so bold), you have written, authored and I'm sure with some assistance, produced a magnificent and true masterpiece of literature. Fortunately for the incest lovers and myself in particular (and some other deviants) here on Literotica you have presented us with many hours of pleasurable reading.
Over the past hour or so I read all 132 comments of Chapter 01, and 109 comments for Chapter 02; every critique imaginable was offered, probably more than half with individuals not brave enough to identify themselves even with a "nom de plume". Many of the comments had glowing praise for your efforts; and so do I praise your work and would also add that I might be your number one cheerleader, and here's why!
To begin I have no homosexual biases nor hates; neither do I relish nor have any urges nor tendencies as I am straight. I also do not read gay or lesbian stories--to each his own! When Linda bussed the lips of her friend Anne near the end of chapter 01, I had the fear the fabulous mother and son love story was going to be muddied and deviate into some wandering lesbian affair, or even worse--but I chose to withhold judgement until after reading the full story of parts one and two. When Linda began her lesbian activities in the spa of chapter 02, I almost stopped reading at that point, but did continue to read through for the specific reason I was going to comment after the story finished, and I wanted to be as objective as possible. I'm glad I read through those token lesbian sex scenes in the spa for the following reaon.
Throughout the story of both parts I gleaned, in my opinion, the mother's total actions and every sexual activity that pertained to her son was for one reason, and that was for the total, pure unadulterated love and devotion of her son's pleasure and love. In Chapter 01 when Linda and Anne performed the 69 pussy cleansing of each other, in the spa, after their son's climaxes, in my mind, it was purely another block in the foundation of her, Linda's, love for her son.
To her credit, Linda never displayed any lesbian urges nor proclivities outside those couple of endearing minutes in the presence of her total humbrage and dedication to the pleasuring of her son's mother-love!! Pure and simple. In the deepest recesses of my heart and soul I feel I have read this lesbian action on her part correctly.
The writer, and/or author know for sure why the token lesbian actions were added, so I won't second guess the action, with the exception of my prior comments above.
The story is undoubtedly one of the better constructed, themed and character usage I've had the pleasure to read seldom and rarely. The story did not just come to a screeching halt at the end of Chapter 02!!!!! Life and the imagination and the fantasies of the writer continued, even to this day. It has been seventeen months since the first part was posted, several weeks later for part two. Many of the 240 plus comments so far have asked for Chapter 03--or more--and I join in the utterances and chorus for further writing from your God-Blessed mind and fingers.
Congratulations on a monumental masterpiece. Your deserve every accolade!
The people demand rubber dicks.......oh, and more chapters
hooooot .. more .. we need more .. i can't wait for more ..
Linda and Mark Annie and Tom PERFECT!!
This story is HOT!! Linda, the writer, Should get a prize for one of best stories Literotica has ever published!! If this isn't from personal experience; She has one hell of a sexual imagination with such bold graphic descriptions I came with all of them!! Thank you very much and keep the stories cumming!!!
its to hot
we mead watter and lotes ofit..Just hope nextschapters are note long in cuming linda your on hot mom and your friend annie well all I can say love leann xxxxxxxx
to hot to handle
"I like it, I love it, I want some more of it"... I can hardly wait for the next epesode...
I was hard all the way through
Linda - I was living this with you - very hot story - please write more soon.
ps. May I have some of your panties please mom?
Mark
Best Yet!
Best yet! While I find all kinds of sexual themes exciting, the mother / son incest theme has been one of those that I have found particularly erotic. The emotional implications may be complex but the attraction of the story is certainly clear for anyone who has shared this kind of fascination. Thanks to the author for sharing these intimate nuances.
Wrong title
Should have been "Perverts are us".
Outstanding
I had always wished i could have been with my mom. She was short with large breasts and I looked at her every chance I got. I did the panty thing for a while but never got to fuck her. GREAT story. Let;s hear from you and Mark again!!!
awesome, more please
excellent story and writing, would love to see more of the fantasy unfold as they swap more than panties and cum. Thank you, please keep writing 9
I don't understand it.
A lot of people think you're a "brilliant" writer. You couldn't write your way out of a paperback mystery. The dialog is terrible. As in flat, boring, and repetitive. There are so many clunky sentences here that you could paper a wall with them.
"He quickly picked his head back up..." What? He'd been decapitated and survived? Try: "He raised/lifted his head."
Great story
Thanks for a Great story, I can't wait for more
Now that's what i'm talking about
This was incredibly well written and incredibly sexy! I loved how real the situation felt and how believable the protagonist was in being both a mom and a lover. In short, congratulations, you have just become my first Favorited author! I look forward to seeing what you come up with next!
hmmm, oh yessssssssss
lovely wrap-up of this nice sexy story-good ending-thanks
Excellent and captivating story
If this is your first venture into this medium, you hit the jackpot. Well written, personal, believable, and kept me reading with a great hope that not only might you consider extending this but writing lots more.
Very Good
You have to write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!Please.
You MUST write the next chapter before i burst into flames!
I haven't read anything that hot in eons. Yes, PLEASE write another chapter ASAP!
The Best! The Best The Best!
Please, Please, Please write some more! That was not only very hot, but well written, too.
Thanks!
LTG
Awesome!
How I loved these two families and the gorgeous slow build up of tension and sensuality. Please continue this brilliant series.
Great story!!
Great stroking story. It is all in the details leading up to the cumclusion!!!!
How much was really true? :)
I very much enjoyed the story. I realize a lot might be true, but I am sure a lot is also exaggerated or fiction all together. would love to chat so see just how much. Nice for fantasies though! :D
MY REQUEST TO YOU
Is it too much to ask you to repeat your submission...It was a great story that I have read two more times since the first time..... I was so turned by your detailed story line...I wish you could continue it with episodes ....so we can follow the life of Linda and her side kick in love....Annie
I cant correctly source my password but I want to hear from you.....
email.....kizambeezi@yahoo.com.......You can call me ....Jae
incestlove
Thanks for this so exciting incest story!!Awesome,but why did you not make Mark fuck Annie and Tom,Linda?This is the cent missing in this story.Don't you agree?Plse continue
Love your writing
Loved both of your stories, so hot and got me so incredibly turned on that I jacked off with my wife's panties!
dear god i need to cum so bad after reading both your stories,
feel like i'm going to pop, had you continued that final scene i would had to explain the sudden eruption of my orgasm to my wife sitting across from me, in fact i'm off for some fun thank you very much for your work look forward to future titles
Pretty good finish.
I was a bit worried after part one that we were headed for some kind of free swapping circus with both moms and sons. The limited pair-by-pair evening was a good way for things to end. There are endless tales of random group swapping people of all types to read. This story seemed more real because it was kept within the boundaries of a natural loving relationship. The lesbian moments between Ann and Linda are more than fine and completely believable for two women of their background so it did not seem forced for the sake of titillation.
I add my hopes that we will get to read future stories by this writer, but, not if it entails frat boy orgies and trading mom-partners as presents. Linda & Anne and their sons can be put aside right here or we could continue with the focus more on Anne and Tom finding their way. Looking at the time since this was submitted I'd guess the story was done.
Sure, the writing style is far from perfect, but it's far above the usual dreary efforts in this category. Here's hoping LindaT will post other good reads in the future.
Best Ive read
Without a doubt handr down the best mother/son story Ive read to date. The only th ing I can think of that might have made it even better is if the two moms were sisters.
Panties!
Love your story. I love(d) my mom's panties. I'm glad yu kept it a love story and not a son - swapping story. Shareing Mark to the degree she did so as to get Tom & Anne together was good. It wouldn't have been good for them to swap beyond that as it might have weakened both relationships.
IF you do a 3rd Chapter
PLEASE do NOT have the couples switch partners! As it is they did not need to be in the same house, let alone the same room this time. The interest was already there. The mothers AND sons had already talked to each other. There was no other stimulus needed to initiate there own activity. (btw it would have been a good source for a new story thread)
Why can't authors just let a couple enjoy being with each other without immediately going off into other directions before they even know who they are together?
great story
this is as gtood a story thats out there nicely written although not keen on sons sharing there mothers as i would want to keep her all to my self and never want to share her but you did a good job at walking that fine line with that cant wait to see if more cums along and keep them from fucking the neighbors to much please great story though keep up the good work
Ecstasy
Such a beautiful and loving story. I've had many orgasms reading both parts. It certainly resonates with me darling (;
O-M-G.
These two stories typified lit-EROTICA. They were marvellous. Haven't had time to read all the other comments but to hell with them I loved both stories.
5* is nowhere near enough.
terrific
Amazing.. came multiple times to this. Wish I had this... so hot...
my new favorite author
this is one of the best pieces i have ever read. you are a genius with a naughty creative mind thankyou for your effort/
The best ever just a simple beautiful story
The best ever so horny and realistic
five star +++++++
As each and every comment mentions, this story is simply an erotic masterpiece!! Both chapters make me cum each time I read them. Five stars is nowhere enough. Just wished the author continued writing.
Amazing
I've can't recall reading and enjoying any multiple part story as much as I have this one. Wow!
Absolutly fantastice
You have to add more to fantasy story. The way you wrote it I felt like I was Mark. Please try to add more.
Really Great Read
good mixture of fantasy and reality. Totally enjoyed and hope you write more stories.
share
The guys didnt get to fuck the other women, this is bullshit. but you get 5 stars, for part fantasy.
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