It really wasnt her sister, for that would have made the story stronger. Neither of the guys were really getting the other women, she would have been telling this fact to us, and common sense, the boys if all naked would have fucked both women, so no boys were involved.Out of the blue, the neighbors wouldnt be talking incest. The panties is too far fetched, I dont think the panty story was physically or imaginatively stretched, so the panties are totally discounted at Walmart. Something had to be eral, was the imagination part real, imagination isnt real. So yhe only thing she could have done was to fuck her son. But I dont believe any of the panty smelling, for him to have initiated the story. For if any of the panty story was true, if would have been more believable,so its a total lie.So, its not truthfully told who started with who, the whole story is a lie. She even lies on her biography, she claims shes 18.
I've been reading incest stories for years, and of the thousands of stories out there on the 'net, this is by far one of the best. I've probably read this 20 times or more.
This story is the literary equivalent of viagra. Just awesome.
I only wish I could write something half as good as this.
To the anonymous author of "heres whats true (sic)" - Your post was neither grammatically nor logically readable. If English is your first language, then our education system has failed your miserably (e.g. "she claims to be 18" is not the same as "over 18"... and there is no mention of any sister... I could go on, but you won't understand). I will applaud you for posting anonymously and hope that you continue to do so to any other sites in the future. Any name that you may choose that might lead to your true identity can only serve to hurt you if a future employer is looking for someone with any intelligence.
From my perspective, I think this is one of the best stories on the site. I thought it was believable (how many of us probably got our first smell of a woman's panties from our mom?), showed an element of restraint (how many of these stories devolve into some sort of "fuckfest"?), and incredibly well written. None of us knows where the real life part of the story ends and the fantasy begins, but I suspect there was at least the discovery by Linda that Mark was taking her panties, a discussion followed, and probably the phone sex (or some variation). I also suspect that she discussed this with Annie. Whether or not that lead to her and Mark actually hooking up can only be conjecture on our part, but that's what makes this story so great... it is written in a way that makes it very believable that it could have happened exactly like she described it.
Well done Lindat817. I wish I could give it more than 5 stars.
This story is great, particularly how she develops it and makes it grow. Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!!!
by
Anonymous05/25/14
More Please
I would love to hear more of this. It's really exceptional. I'd like to hear a lot more about Tom and Anne. Perhaps the boys could take their Mothers to Hedonism, the girls could get laid after a bukake contest, the boys could enjoy each other's company and pregnancy could ensue for each. I'd love it if Linda dropped her bikini to show off a a sweet "For Him" tattoo. It's been much too long. I hope this continues!
I love these mom/son stories, However there are parts in this one that set it apart from all the rest. When both mothers and sons are making love in the same room is exceptional. And when Annie fucks her son for the first time with Linda and Mark watching in very hot. I like how Annie lowers herself onto Tom's cock with her back to him. She knows what she wants. And then the final capping moment in when Annie lowers herself over Linda to get her cunt sucked and to suck Linda's ...Too hot!!!
Thank you for such a wonderful story. I just became a member so i didn't have to write a comment anonymously and because your literary prowess has convinced me that this is a site i can truly enjoy. The mother son story was fantastic and with the inclusion of her best friend, well i finished the first story and had to read the next immediately. I look forward to anything more you are planning to write.
I really wanted to give 5 stars but on my phone it registered 3. What a great second part. You had me hard from start to finish. You made it easy to visualise what was going on and I felt like I was there watching the action. You tell a great story and you need to keep writing.... Would love to read more of what you write.
but if you do a 3rd chapter please keep the couples in their own beds in their own homes, please.
I hate it when there is a whole set up of slow, reluctant, progression, and then suddenly it becomes a lifestyle that includes everybody in a sexual free for all with name calling, degradation, and humiliation.
by
Anonymous07/06/14
I have never ever read a story, that had me drawn in to the mind of Linda, so deep !!!
As I read the story, I became so locked into Linda's thoughts that the action
was REAL AS IT GETS !!! I have read Many erotic stories in my 60 some odd
years !!! This one is a MASTERPEACE !!!! You truly, have a talent that is
a rare gift !!! I wish you all the success in the world !!! I also Thank You with
all my heart, for a story that, I know I, will treasure and remember the rest
of my life !!!!!
by
Anonymous07/11/14
incestover
Maybe somewhat different from Linda's story,which is by the way AWESOME,I am going to tell you the most extraordinary personal experience I started with one of my office colleagues,Carina(I was 48 and her 46).We had been fucking since 2 years and done all sorts of Kama Sutra positions!Then we started to make fantasies,like making threesomes.It took me 6 months to have her accepting to fantasy on it and finally we made several times,a threesome with my best friend George and my young cousin Mike.It was a great experience for us all .She became more and more excited when the fantasy came on her son in law and finally she really started to fuck with him(she still does!) and I always encouraged her.She even sometimes let her mobile near them and I could hear all their moanings and cums.Then the fantasy came on one of her gorgeous daughters Mirella and two of her daughters in law Sharon and Angela.She sniffed and licked their dirty panties for me, making also photos thereof.She also sometimes gave me their dirty panties which I had to keep in my office desk,because bringing them home would have been dangerous.She got more and more excited when she fantasied that I was fucking them.She tells me that she is now slave of these fantasies,like me, and sometimes when she looks at these women she has to go to the toilet and masturbate herself.All her family know me and think that I am a good friend of Carina.They(son in law,the daughters,the daughters in law and the others) are VERY VERY FAR about suspecting what sexual pleasure they provide both of us!!!
An amazingly sensual and, very hot story... Only part I didn't like was, it ended way too soon... Very nicely done... Kudos from here...
by
Anonymous08/22/14
I keep coming back ....
....to this story. Your characters and plot line are super. All is well developed and coherent. Linda is believable as a mom and lover. Your skill at story construction is a rare find. Thank you for your hard work. I appreciate your prose.
When you are ready for another story, this man is ready to be wowed.
"Linda's Discovery Ch. 02:" - Linda and Mark; and Anne (Annie) and Tom Duncan - (Story/Subject Mother and Son, and Her Friend's Mother and Son).
After reading the current 173 reader's comments, there seems to be an over-riding "common thread" (pertinent thoughts and ideas) expressed by a great many of those readers.
One, is a vast majority fondly and respectfully request a continuing Chapter 03 be written and posted, being sure to keep the two families of Linda (and her son Mark), and Anne (Annie and her son Tom) totally seperated in all sexual activities! Though readers cajoloe, urge and plead for the writer(s) to extend the ending of their stories, in the writer/author's mind, their original intent of the story is over, fini, done! Second, and along the same lines, is that the minute' and smidgen amounts of bi-sexual (or lesbian) expressions of both mothers Linda and her friend Annie does not detract from the true form of incestual (blood-related) relationships and therefore should remain as a "small flavoring" of the gist, intent and theme of the story--the incestual relationships of two mothers and their respective sons!
'Linda817' has a very rare, very beautiful ability and depth of feelings and emotions to give each of her characters charisma and depth, and in the character's roles deliver those messages to her awed and lovingly mesmerized readers. This two-chapter story is magnificent in the charm and romantic idolizing of two mother's love for their respective sons and the sons for their respective mothers! Indeed, very rare!!
by
Anonymous09/24/14
question
The first thing that comes to mind is, which part is fiction and which is true? It all seems very real and possible to me. Sometimes passion causes us to do things we wouldn't normally do.
You are one very skilled writer, and you obviously enjoy both the writing and the subject matter. If you feel so motivated, please check out my "Aunt Jane" stories under Cvlryman. Would love to correspond with you via e-mail. Cvlryman@excite.com.
by
Anonymous10/04/14
WOW - just fuckin WOW
I really don't know how I stumbled upon this but what an amazing writer and story teller you are. The whole incest thing is not even close to any of my fantasies but as soon as I read the first paragraph I was unable to stop until the end. Please continue this as a trilogy and let the boys fuck both their own mothers and then each other's and finish with the mums fucking each other.
An enjoyable story that I hope you will be inspired to take a little further. Good narrative thread and an exciting scenario that almost begs for a follow up.
by
Anonymous11/05/14
Great!
You've done some great writing here, and it's not just the sex! That was great to! Well done.
You wrote this in 2011, from memory, and not heard from since then. So, I guess you and the young stud have ridden off into the sunset. Enjoy!
by
Anonymous02/04/15
Hot
Well done. I hope for you that most of it was true.
by
Anonymous02/10/15
Best Story Yet
It was perfect. I absolutely loved every word of it. And I'd like to do the same thing.
I think swapping sons would be great. You've already had them taste each other's son's cum.
by
Anonymous02/19/15
Excellent Story from Start to Finish...
This was easily one of the best erotic stories I have ever read. From start to finish it had me excited, both mentally and physically. WOW Thank you for sharing a very private part of your life. I feel privileged to be able to read it and hope there is more to the story.
JWS
by
Anonymous04/09/15
Great story!
I was thoroughly enticed by this story. I loved the uninhibited relationship between Linda and Annie, and how that spilled over into Mark's and Tom's life. It's always refreshing to read about a woman's open-mindedness put into words. Life should be this open to sexual and sensual possibilities, instead of being repressed by fearful people.
by
Anonymous04/30/15
Great!
I've read other comments and gotten the idea that this, or something similar, really happened to you. Thats great. I think no man can love a woman like her son, and vice versa. I'd kind of not like to see or read about Mark and Tom trading mothers for sex. Call me crazy, but I have a problem with that but no problems with incest! As long as everyone concerned is wanting the same. I think Mark and Linda love each other and I hope your story Linda is really you. This has got to be one of the top stories I have read. We've never met and never will, but I think you are beautiful. I don't know if you should write more stories or not. I like the telling of the real thing too much.
by
Anonymous05/31/15
shit Linda
I thaught the first part was hot . this has nearly melted computer screen . Iam still panting . best of luck .will you Bwriteing an more. love to find out how both famlies fair L david
by
Anonymous06/11/15
Fuck. Me!
You blew my mind! Thank you! Thank you! Thank. You.
Great, great story!! i must have cum a dozen times reading how mom and son made loved and he filled her
I so love a good incest story and this one is so damn hot. I would hope you would continue with both moms and sons, maybe a story about the other mother and her boy and then perhaps they can share their sons and trade off or have a 4 way. please keep writing!! Gave you a 5!!!!
by
Anonymous07/08/15
Oh come on bonnie
we all know that you can't get hard twice while reading a single chapter, let alone cum. You never should have let us know how hard some stories get you.
by
Anonymous07/10/15
I've never really
into the mom son stories but after reading this one I can't say that. You certainly stopped writing this one in a way that leaves it open to more (since you've developed the characters) . There's so much more of this one that I want to read... and experience with them.
by
Anonymous07/14/15
I added the part about it not being my idea to be lighthearted and try to make myself appear to be a little less slutty. But as soon as I said it,
Always a good sign when she tries to minimize how Slutty she is....
English
heres whats true
It really wasnt her sister, for that would have made the story stronger. Neither of the guys were really getting the other women, she would have been telling this fact to us, and common sense, the boys if all naked would have fucked both women, so no boys were involved.Out of the blue, the neighbors wouldnt be talking incest. The panties is too far fetched, I dont think the panty story was physically or imaginatively stretched, so the panties are totally discounted at Walmart. Something had to be eral, was the imagination part real, imagination isnt real. So yhe only thing she could have done was to fuck her son. But I dont believe any of the panty smelling, for him to have initiated the story. For if any of the panty story was true, if would have been more believable,so its a total lie.So, its not truthfully told who started with who, the whole story is a lie. She even lies on her biography, she claims shes 18.
One of the best
I've been reading incest stories for years, and of the thousands of stories out there on the 'net, this is by far one of the best. I've probably read this 20 times or more.
This story is the literary equivalent of viagra. Just awesome.
I only wish I could write something half as good as this.
Here's What's True - a response
To the anonymous author of "heres whats true (sic)" - Your post was neither grammatically nor logically readable. If English is your first language, then our education system has failed your miserably (e.g. "she claims to be 18" is not the same as "over 18"... and there is no mention of any sister... I could go on, but you won't understand). I will applaud you for posting anonymously and hope that you continue to do so to any other sites in the future. Any name that you may choose that might lead to your true identity can only serve to hurt you if a future employer is looking for someone with any intelligence.
From my perspective, I think this is one of the best stories on the site. I thought it was believable (how many of us probably got our first smell of a woman's panties from our mom?), showed an element of restraint (how many of these stories devolve into some sort of "fuckfest"?), and incredibly well written. None of us knows where the real life part of the story ends and the fantasy begins, but I suspect there was at least the discovery by Linda that Mark was taking her panties, a discussion followed, and probably the phone sex (or some variation). I also suspect that she discussed this with Annie. Whether or not that lead to her and Mark actually hooking up can only be conjecture on our part, but that's what makes this story so great... it is written in a way that makes it very believable that it could have happened exactly like she described it.
Well done Lindat817. I wish I could give it more than 5 stars.
One of the best stores!!!!
This story is great, particularly how she develops it and makes it grow. Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!!!
More Please
I would love to hear more of this. It's really exceptional. I'd like to hear a lot more about Tom and Anne. Perhaps the boys could take their Mothers to Hedonism, the girls could get laid after a bukake contest, the boys could enjoy each other's company and pregnancy could ensue for each. I'd love it if Linda dropped her bikini to show off a a sweet "For Him" tattoo. It's been much too long. I hope this continues!
Just about the best story there is.
I love these mom/son stories, However there are parts in this one that set it apart from all the rest. When both mothers and sons are making love in the same room is exceptional. And when Annie fucks her son for the first time with Linda and Mark watching in very hot. I like how Annie lowers herself onto Tom's cock with her back to him. She knows what she wants. And then the final capping moment in when Annie lowers herself over Linda to get her cunt sucked and to suck Linda's ...Too hot!!!
Became a member to say a proper thank you
Thank you for such a wonderful story. I just became a member so i didn't have to write a comment anonymously and because your literary prowess has convinced me that this is a site i can truly enjoy. The mother son story was fantastic and with the inclusion of her best friend, well i finished the first story and had to read the next immediately. I look forward to anything more you are planning to write.
Great second part
I really wanted to give 5 stars but on my phone it registered 3. What a great second part. You had me hard from start to finish. You made it easy to visualise what was going on and I felt like I was there watching the action. You tell a great story and you need to keep writing.... Would love to read more of what you write.
good mentoring opportunity
but if you do a 3rd chapter please keep the couples in their own beds in their own homes, please.
I hate it when there is a whole set up of slow, reluctant, progression, and then suddenly it becomes a lifestyle that includes everybody in a sexual free for all with name calling, degradation, and humiliation.
I have never ever read a story, that had me drawn in to the mind of Linda, so deep !!!
As I read the story, I became so locked into Linda's thoughts that the action
was REAL AS IT GETS !!! I have read Many erotic stories in my 60 some odd
years !!! This one is a MASTERPEACE !!!! You truly, have a talent that is
a rare gift !!! I wish you all the success in the world !!! I also Thank You with
all my heart, for a story that, I know I, will treasure and remember the rest
of my life !!!!!
incestover
Maybe somewhat different from Linda's story,which is by the way AWESOME,I am going to tell you the most extraordinary personal experience I started with one of my office colleagues,Carina(I was 48 and her 46).We had been fucking since 2 years and done all sorts of Kama Sutra positions!Then we started to make fantasies,like making threesomes.It took me 6 months to have her accepting to fantasy on it and finally we made several times,a threesome with my best friend George and my young cousin Mike.It was a great experience for us all .She became more and more excited when the fantasy came on her son in law and finally she really started to fuck with him(she still does!) and I always encouraged her.She even sometimes let her mobile near them and I could hear all their moanings and cums.Then the fantasy came on one of her gorgeous daughters Mirella and two of her daughters in law Sharon and Angela.She sniffed and licked their dirty panties for me, making also photos thereof.She also sometimes gave me their dirty panties which I had to keep in my office desk,because bringing them home would have been dangerous.She got more and more excited when she fantasied that I was fucking them.She tells me that she is now slave of these fantasies,like me, and sometimes when she looks at these women she has to go to the toilet and masturbate herself.All her family know me and think that I am a good friend of Carina.They(son in law,the daughters,the daughters in law and the others) are VERY VERY FAR about suspecting what sexual pleasure they provide both of us!!!
0 are very far about knowing how much
Great Story
One of the most erotic stories I've read on Literotica! Great job...
As #1 was a GREAT STORY hope you have more It was a 2 come
Linda, sure has a way of getting you off. Her writings are amazing.
Keep them coming
:)
Keep 'em coming!
Top quality
Two excellent stories, well constructed and beautifully written
Awesome
You're great, this story aroused me so much... Please write more!
AMAZING
FUCKING AMAZINGLY HOT. OMG
i can't wait for 3
Both your stories were so unbearably hot. Would live to hear the third.
hot hot
great stories cant wait for the third.
beautiful
fapping like a wild monkey on a pile of bananas watching a famale monkey eating another female monkey's pussy
Incredible...
An amazingly sensual and, very hot story... Only part I didn't like was, it ended way too soon... Very nicely done... Kudos from here...
I keep coming back ....
....to this story. Your characters and plot line are super. All is well developed and coherent. Linda is believable as a mom and lover. Your skill at story construction is a rare find. Thank you for your hard work. I appreciate your prose.
When you are ready for another story, this man is ready to be wowed.
if you do a Chapter 03
don't have them swap,
please
"Linda's Discovery Ch. 02:" - Linda and Mark; and Anne (Annie) and Tom Duncan - (Story/Subject Mother and Son, and Her Friend's Mother and Son).
After reading the current 173 reader's comments, there seems to be an over-riding "common thread" (pertinent thoughts and ideas) expressed by a great many of those readers.
One, is a vast majority fondly and respectfully request a continuing Chapter 03 be written and posted, being sure to keep the two families of Linda (and her son Mark), and Anne (Annie and her son Tom) totally seperated in all sexual activities! Though readers cajoloe, urge and plead for the writer(s) to extend the ending of their stories, in the writer/author's mind, their original intent of the story is over, fini, done! Second, and along the same lines, is that the minute' and smidgen amounts of bi-sexual (or lesbian) expressions of both mothers Linda and her friend Annie does not detract from the true form of incestual (blood-related) relationships and therefore should remain as a "small flavoring" of the gist, intent and theme of the story--the incestual relationships of two mothers and their respective sons!
'Linda817' has a very rare, very beautiful ability and depth of feelings and emotions to give each of her characters charisma and depth, and in the character's roles deliver those messages to her awed and lovingly mesmerized readers. This two-chapter story is magnificent in the charm and romantic idolizing of two mother's love for their respective sons and the sons for their respective mothers! Indeed, very rare!!
question
The first thing that comes to mind is, which part is fiction and which is true? It all seems very real and possible to me. Sometimes passion causes us to do things we wouldn't normally do.
Skilled Writer
You are one very skilled writer, and you obviously enjoy both the writing and the subject matter. If you feel so motivated, please check out my "Aunt Jane" stories under Cvlryman. Would love to correspond with you via e-mail. Cvlryman@excite.com.
WOW - just fuckin WOW
I really don't know how I stumbled upon this but what an amazing writer and story teller you are. The whole incest thing is not even close to any of my fantasies but as soon as I read the first paragraph I was unable to stop until the end. Please continue this as a trilogy and let the boys fuck both their own mothers and then each other's and finish with the mums fucking each other.
Very nice!
An enjoyable story that I hope you will be inspired to take a little further. Good narrative thread and an exciting scenario that almost begs for a follow up.
Great!
You've done some great writing here, and it's not just the sex! That was great to! Well done.
Very, very hot
An incredibly hot story, paced well and with good dialog. Looking forward to more.
Hot
Just too fucking hot for words. Both installments were awesome. Keep up the good work
Excellent Linda
You wrote this in 2011, from memory, and not heard from since then. So, I guess you and the young stud have ridden off into the sunset. Enjoy!
Hot
Well done. I hope for you that most of it was true.
Best Story Yet
It was perfect. I absolutely loved every word of it. And I'd like to do the same thing.
I think swapping sons would be great. You've already had them taste each other's son's cum.
Excellent Story from Start to Finish...
This was easily one of the best erotic stories I have ever read. From start to finish it had me excited, both mentally and physically. WOW Thank you for sharing a very private part of your life. I feel privileged to be able to read it and hope there is more to the story.
JWS
Great story!
I was thoroughly enticed by this story. I loved the uninhibited relationship between Linda and Annie, and how that spilled over into Mark's and Tom's life. It's always refreshing to read about a woman's open-mindedness put into words. Life should be this open to sexual and sensual possibilities, instead of being repressed by fearful people.
Great!
I've read other comments and gotten the idea that this, or something similar, really happened to you. Thats great. I think no man can love a woman like her son, and vice versa. I'd kind of not like to see or read about Mark and Tom trading mothers for sex. Call me crazy, but I have a problem with that but no problems with incest! As long as everyone concerned is wanting the same. I think Mark and Linda love each other and I hope your story Linda is really you. This has got to be one of the top stories I have read. We've never met and never will, but I think you are beautiful. I don't know if you should write more stories or not. I like the telling of the real thing too much.
shit Linda
I thaught the first part was hot . this has nearly melted computer screen . Iam still panting . best of luck .will you Bwriteing an more. love to find out how both famlies fair L david
Fuck. Me!
You blew my mind! Thank you! Thank you! Thank. You.
Hell of a story....
keep writing please your words have me rock hard.
Great, great story!! i must have cum a dozen times reading how mom and son made loved and he filled her
I so love a good incest story and this one is so damn hot. I would hope you would continue with both moms and sons, maybe a story about the other mother and her boy and then perhaps they can share their sons and trade off or have a 4 way. please keep writing!! Gave you a 5!!!!
Oh come on bonnie
we all know that you can't get hard twice while reading a single chapter, let alone cum. You never should have let us know how hard some stories get you.
I've never really
into the mom son stories but after reading this one I can't say that. You certainly stopped writing this one in a way that leaves it open to more (since you've developed the characters) . There's so much more of this one that I want to read... and experience with them.
I added the part about it not being my idea to be lighthearted and try to make myself appear to be a little less slutty. But as soon as I said it,
Always a good sign when she tries to minimize how Slutty she is....
Too bad
That this writer stopped submitting stories. Very talented.
Wow
I am amazed that this was even hotter than the first story. Linda you are an exceptional erotic author! Keep up the good work!
more more more
probably the most erotic story i ever read
wonderful
This is great!
SEXY STORY !!!
very well written. enjoyed every page. really engrossing and sexy.
Very curious
Really wonder how much of this was imagination and how much of his story really happened
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