This is really well written, believable and pleasurably full of anticipation. Keep writing, I want to know more about the women's relationship and I'd love to read your description of sex between the three of them.
I have done some CFNM parties, but nothing like this.
Good Story
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Anonymous10/30/11
Very nice!
Some blokes have all the luck! Great story - 5 *s.
Thanks for posting and please write more.
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Anonymous11/02/11
great story!
I really liked your story! Would love if you had the girls tease him a little bit about being the smallest guy and maybe a little more foot play... maybe he should kiss the girls toes and apologize for being the smallest! lol
Of course you, of all writers, would make yet another fine story. Not too short nor too long. And just the right amount of details.
Please continue to write more great stories.
Dude, Carrol and Maggie are just taking advantage of you. Telling you how nice your dick and balls are, getting you drunk. Hell you even got sweet talked in to being waxed. I get it Carrol and Maggie are calling your shots, but if you ever cant make it to serve dinner, call me. I'm already to take your place, should the need arise.
Getting someone to start breathing a little heavier. Getting a rise out of a reader. Leaving the reader wanting more. All without a single fuck scene!
THAT is erotic writing.
Oh, I enjoy reading stories that revolve around ramming it home. But the kind of story you wrote is special.
I would like to see more of these people. Owen can start to become a broker. With that big house Maggie should move in w Carol. Maybe Owen could even move in. He is a nice guy and not a threatening Beast. In other words, wouldn't it be more satisfying to have a nice warm, hard cock in your pussy instead of occasionally resorting to a cold, hard, plastic dildo?
One more thing, I like stories w happy-endings w happy-endings ;^)
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Impressive
This is really well written, believable and pleasurably full of anticipation. Keep writing, I want to know more about the women's relationship and I'd love to read your description of sex between the three of them.
Very Good
I have done some CFNM parties, but nothing like this.
Good Story
Very nice!
Some blokes have all the luck! Great story - 5 *s.
Thanks for posting and please write more.
great story!
I really liked your story! Would love if you had the girls tease him a little bit about being the smallest guy and maybe a little more foot play... maybe he should kiss the girls toes and apologize for being the smallest! lol
also would like another jack off scene.
Thanks!
Another great story
Of course you, of all writers, would make yet another fine story. Not too short nor too long. And just the right amount of details.
Please continue to write more great stories.
Fine work...again!
Your Complete Education stories fondled me exquisitely. I LOVE Mary!
I really admire your ability to handle both male and female interior monologs...plus Your Sense of Humor!
One fixie: "desSert" Two of the letter S. Otherwise, you might risk "sand in the Vaseline"...:+))
Hot story
I'm okay with it ending here. That said, it could be developed into additional chapters. You know what the unanswered questions are.
Advice..........
You shouldn't beg for votes and comments. Good authors never do.
Classy Story
Well constructed and written story and I loved the mystery about the sexuality of the ladies.
EXCELLENT STORY.
I score it 5 out of 5. Thank you.
What she means, Owen
Dude, Carrol and Maggie are just taking advantage of you. Telling you how nice your dick and balls are, getting you drunk. Hell you even got sweet talked in to being waxed. I get it Carrol and Maggie are calling your shots, but if you ever cant make it to serve dinner, call me. I'm already to take your place, should the need arise.
Skillfully written
Getting someone to start breathing a little heavier. Getting a rise out of a reader. Leaving the reader wanting more. All without a single fuck scene!
THAT is erotic writing.
Oh, I enjoy reading stories that revolve around ramming it home. But the kind of story you wrote is special.
I would like to see more of these people. Owen can start to become a broker. With that big house Maggie should move in w Carol. Maybe Owen could even move in. He is a nice guy and not a threatening Beast. In other words, wouldn't it be more satisfying to have a nice warm, hard cock in your pussy instead of occasionally resorting to a cold, hard, plastic dildo?
One more thing, I like stories w happy-endings w happy-endings ;^)
WOW
Thanks for the revisit. It is still excellent.
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