My First MFM

Oh look the ugly festering troll makes the usual bland comment

What a sad little man.

Fairly common

Working as a male massuer, I often see the situation where a guy likes to watch his wife touched, looked at. Many situations don't go all the way but a few do. But in lots of years of working the trade, I have only seen one tied up that was not supposed to know.

She did, of course. All women can tell the difference between one cock and another, it seems.

That one I will never forget, she pulled off the blindfold and slipped off the ties.

Then she looked at her husband and grinned, saying "Well? Is that what you wanted to see, honey?"

WTF

IT'S A STORY.....show a total lack of class criticizing a story for hell sake...

Well, I liked it...

While this story doesn't mirror any fantasies I have, the idea of my husband doing this for me is hot!

It's funny

Never realized there were so many men that want to watch their wives get fuck.......hum

spelling

It might have been more erotic if there hadn't been so many spelling and grammar errors.

Veggies

I think this is Nonconsent ( read rape) & would fit better there, although I think it might be rejected because it misses one of their criteria (she doesn't eventually agree she approved). What I really don't understand is why she would be expecting (and miss) sucking his cock AND a root vegetable at the same time! Ultra-kinky! (Harvard, raw or pickled beets?)

Very good start

You could use an editor to correct the grammatical and selling errors.
It was a good read.

loved the story

Sexy story, what a fantasy! Definately a story to make you horny x

Great read

What a sexy great read, well paced and did I say sexy...

great short story, had me wet from start to finish

Is it a bad thing?

That the comments made for a more interesting read than the story?

Fantastic!!!

I have role played this many time with my wife. She always cums hard. She loves it that she cannot resist, she must give in and allow herself to be taken. If she is taken she can then give in to the pleasure. In our fantasies she has been taken by three BBCs. And in her favorite she gets taken by her brother-in-laws. She cums to hard she wails. More!!!