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Bailey Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by 10/31/11

Nice start...

... can't wait for the rest of the story.

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by Scurvydog4403510/31/11

Go on

I very much liked it, It was so short though. I hope you can go more in depth with there budding boyfriend/girlfriend romance.

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by Anonymous11/02/11

Good start...

... but it felt more like a first paragraph than a full submission.

The story has the bones to go further, but, as a reader, I would relish a more fleshed out introduction for the introduction to a story.

I have high hopes for this story!

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