All Comments on 'Bailey Ch. 01'

... can't wait for the rest of the story.

ShrkDivr

I very much liked it, It was so short though. I hope you can go more in depth with there budding boyfriend/girlfriend romance.

... but it felt more like a first paragraph than a full submission.

The story has the bones to go further, but, as a reader, I would relish a more fleshed out introduction for the introduction to a story.

I have high hopes for this story!