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UGH!!!!!!!!!
Sorry not my type of story.
Go away
Hopefully she doesn't have your genes, thereby strengthening the whole human race
Make him an offer he can't refuse... maybe her too
WACC
Too many stories of your genre and it becomes monotonous to read.Your story is a submission to another site I know,too trite,too dry,too boring you earn all the superlatives of too stupid.
zzz...zzzz.zzz.zz.
Sorry fell a sleep reading your formula gay story.
crawl
Crawl back under your rock.
Time for the homo to come out of the closet
After all, if he is so turned on by another mans cum that he would gladly lick it from his wifes' used pussy, maybe he should just get it from the source. And his wife going from faithful wife to fucking another man in the space of one hour? Are you a fucking retard or did you just work on being stupid?
I would have enjoyed the story; but considering she completely disrespected her husband by lying to him and he completely disrespected her by not confronting her...well, this marriage is headed for divorceville.
Age-ism
The wife is described as being 32 "and STILL [emphasis mine] quite attractive..."
How about just plain ol' "quite attractive?" It's sad how age-ism is so ingrained in our culture.
poopchootkaboose
pls contact: train will be arriving in the station shortly, all aboard the poopchoot express - always room in the caboose
good one
Hopes the guy showed is boys how to eat a real man's seed from their mommys cunt like proper little cucks should.
we need more guys like this training the next generation of cucks or a lot of real man seed will be washed down the shower and that would be such a waste .
one star sick bastard.
Why don't all you cuck writers and readers and cuck wannabe's and full on limp dicked cucks join the army and serve as cannon fodder for the next attack? that way at least you would be of some use.
What
A sneak, a liar, a cheat and - all of a sudden' after years of a normal monogamous marriage?
You don't need this cheat! You should have packed the kids, taken her return ticket and left her there one time when she was with Don.
Unfortunately, for the kids - you are not much of a man and now that she knows she can cheat and you'll do nothing about it - well, a lot of horny guys are going to get lucky. She is not a Hotwife, she is a pure slut...Goodbye!
Great
It was a great story. Tell the readers that didn't like it to go stick it. It was good and I liked it.......
Looser
Pathetic
Looser & Loser
Everyone, Please remember that loser is the opposite of winner. Looser is what you do when you eat too much at a buffet and have to move your belt one or two holes to fit your larger belly.
Not great and cream pies are foul.
keep writing.
Just another wimp husband story, if he had any balls at all he would have an affair with a younger sexier womanb and knock her up to see how his whore wife would like that. And - if he was a real man he would divorce the slutty whore and try to get custody of the kids using the reason that she was an unfit mother who would because she is nothing but a whore and a cheap one at that.
Looser Anon
That's loosen you loser. You loosen your belt. A belt is something someone should have given this author when he thought of writing this story.
What A total Idiot
I mean the wife not the husband, although, he is an idiot also. Just to get pregnant (because she wants a girl this time) she screws a complete stranger. Doesn't she know that there is a fifty-fifty chance or a girl each pregnantcy. just because she had two sons with her husband doesn't mean the next would also be a boy. Instead she endangers her marriage and family (remember the three and six year old sons)just to have a girl. What a total bitch!
Piece of crap.
Sorry effort.
DNA test is almost 100%. A mandatory DNA test for the husbands after childbirth...... What a dream and how many excellent revenge story rawmaterial....
by lying about it the wife is a cheater and adulterer and DNA needs to be checked
lying by ommission or by deception is still a lie and if she will lie to you about one thing she will lie to you about anything. Check the DNA on all the kids, you now know she fucks around. Then divorce the slut and sue for custody of the kids if they are yours. You may love her but she doesnt love you, enough. You dont keep trash you throw it away.
Awesome
For all of you anonymous pussies, don't read stories in the "loving wife" section if you don't want to hear about sharing. All of you are idiots that just want to complain about something. Why don't you start writing if you can do better.
Great story, perfect for the "loving wives' section.
@eatingicon69 Loving wives category consists of many sort of stories. If you look at the stories you will see not every story is creampieeating husband, wife watching husband, wife swapping story.
@eatingicon69 Wife swapping and Group Sex Stories category? Does it match?
Cuckolding is a fetish.
This story should be posted there.
@eatincon
Anonymous sees that you have NO stories either!
re: Awesome
Since people can tell what is in a story without reading, which is the point of your comments, logic would seem to dictate that negative comments are the only reasonable result -- unless you're a moron.
It's amazing
The story was good, whether it was true or not. A few errors that might have been caught if you had an editor instead of just using Spell Check.
What is amazing is the flood of hatred that comes from a story like this. It's been said a million times and will probably be said a million more..... IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE SUBJECT OF THE STORY, DON'T READ IT. Why bother wasting your time reading something that upsets you enough to write the comments you do?? Does it make you feel superior in some way? Trust Me, from what I've read in these comments, most of you were probably school bullies or hung around with the school bully just so you could feel better about yourselves. OR you are Bible thumpers on your quest to clean up humanity with your "this is how it should be" crap. Either way, live your lives and let others live theirs.
4 stars.
Comments
For those of you who think this story belongs in another category, well... you are either new to Literotica or new to the Loving Wives stories. "Loving Wives" is not about a sweet, loving wife; everyone who's been on here knows that it's code for a hot wife or for stories where a guy gets cuckolded. As for those of you who think it's trash and blah blah blah, get a life. You knew early on that it was going to be like this ("Wife gets pregnant by another guy."), so what's your deal? Do you purposely read stories (all the way through) that bother you, then take the time out of your busy schedule to rail against the author? Why? Was it too difficult to just say, "Not my cup of tea" and move on? You are a pathetic piece of shit... that's what you are. You can't write, but you're fine with telling others that they have no business posting original stories. I rarely read the comments on this site because it's usually guys like you that weigh in. Illiterate, homophobic Tea Party types who probably live in Mom's basement. Ooh... there's a category for you: Incest. Have fun with that one and... say hi to Mommy.
It was a beautifully written story.
Great job, stlamanika. More, please.
1 star
because of the last two comments. They don't realise how stupid and pathetic their comments really are or how much a hypocrite they both are. And one claims to be a DOM? and drives a school bus? is that what most DOMS do for day jobs?
Echoing Eatingicon69
Two things: 0ne... The story is definitely where it belongs, and two... he's right, try writing a story for this category and find out how many assholes there are out there who want to put you down just for sport. That seems to be the way it is here in this category.
Unwilling and willing both
@Anon Cuckold may be willing or unwilling both. If the cuckold husband unwilling, many reader will read revenge stories or after revenge reconcilation stories. If you look at all stories you will finds many revenge stories and reconcilation stories as well. The cuckold means husband with cheating wife, but the cuckold does not mean WILLING CUCKOLD ONLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BTW there are a few not cheating wives stories here, look at my favorits.
Happens too fast
The problem with the story is not that Sara is having sex and getting pregnant by somebody else (even though the setup with her husband just fathering boys and Don fathering only girls is extremely far fetched and stupid), it is the way it happens here!
If a couple wants to have another child (or a child at all) and the husband isn't able to impregnate his wife they may talk (for a long time, probably months or even years) that when they meet a fitting stranger she could try and get pregnant by him. With todays medical possibilites that isn't necessary but it would be the easiest and cheapest way.
Here they don't talk about her getting pregnant by Don, she just sneaks off. That her husband is a sissy or cuckold and gets turned on by it she doesn't know! So her act is just selfish. And that means, that she doesn't respect her partner. In this story it worked out fine for them because he is a cuckold but what did she think would have happened if he hadn't been? They didn't talk about the whole affair, she did play with fire here and must have been aware, that she might end up divorced. Didn't she think so far?
Really stupid!
It's a five
Wish my wife would cum home full. It's so hot. I'd love to bang her with another guys stuff in her.
Too Bad
he never got to watch
Good Story
Loved the story. Ignore the comments by the anonymous troll, it would be best to delete them and leave the comments that are real. Please spend a little more time proof reading. Keep up the good work.
Probably the reason Don had only girls is he had a man sized cock
Kim probably knew that Don would go in deep enough in her pussy to give her the girl she wanted.
She now lays awake a night in bed, dreaming of that big cock Don gave her and wants more of it.
Puke
It sucked!
Really Good
I think this is a very good story, you should write more of this kind of stories
re: Anon-good story
If you're going to delete comments that you don't like and only keep the good ones, isn't that defeating the purpose of even having comments. Might as well do away with the comment section altogether. Would be self-serving. If one allows public comments, take the bad with the good, otherwise don't allow any comments. That's my take. Author, not a bad story, but it's like so many on this site, a wimpy cuck story, nothing new. Needs to be put into a genre called "slut wives" which this site doesn't have.
re: Anon it's a five
Let me know where you live, and I'll make sure you're wife comes home with a creampie for you, no problem. Sounds like you're just like this guy in the story, a willing cuck. lol
re: eatingicon69-awesome
Now isn't that calling the kettle black. What exactly are you doing? Complaining about somebody that has a different opinion than yours. Why don't practice what you preach. Eh......one either likes willing cuck stories or not. I think it should be a fetish, but then others, may not agree.What else is new?
delete them
I say delete the comments by the haters. I didn't come here to read a bunch of angry, nasty comments by ugly, angry, closed-minded people. If you don't like the story, and don't have any constructive criticism, go somewhere else.
Wow, Just What the Cuck Lovers Wanted
Just what we needed. Another story about a wimp whose wife likes to fuck around behind his back and knows he is such a wimp that she does not even try to cover her tracks. Of course the subtly provided reason was that she wanted a girl. Don's sperm evidently provided girls and her husband's provided boys.
I would never like any story about such a wimp and slut wife, but it would have been a bit better if you had explored her reasoning and thoughts behind her actions. Of course you made that almost impossible by only writing from his point of view. It just would have been nice to know whether she really knew her husband would not leave her or if having a girl was more important than her marriage.
another fag cuckold
next she'll fuck everyone on cruise ship
Bad parent(s) Bad story
So while you are spying on the wife, nobody is watching the young kids. When she goes away from the pool and leaves 3 and 6 yr old in the pool with you supposedly asleep? wtf? It's a wonder your kids were still alive after your vacation.
Very poor story
because they're both deceiving one another. A masrriage with very little love and no communication can't last. Shame, because it could have been so good.
if you want to see real cucks
look in the storys favorite section, 22 cucks thought this was a great story. The go on vacation and his skank wife gets knocked up by another man and a group of morons think that was one hot story. A whore and her WBC, WACC to the 25th power.
Marriage to a skank for no matter how long
His wife showed her true colors on the couple's vacation, she just had to fuck a stranger and of course was too stupid to use birth control and she got knocked up.
Our hero turns out to be a non caring wimp and just lets his wife get away with it.
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