Dragon Master

Would like more like it

I just loved this and would to see more stories written

wetness

This is one of those rare stories that I have to add to my list for masturbation later. It left me soaking wet and I HAD to say something about the magic of the work. A lot of thought and care was put into this story and it's very refreshing. Would LOVE to see more of ... the power in Bran is what every submissive yearns for. Thanks for the aid in orgasm! Please write more along this line.

Oh my...

Do you plan on writting more about Bran and Marged? I would love to read any sequals that occur. Great story, well written. I loved it!

wow

I would see more of this line of story PLEASE I LOVE IT it was truly different and well written Good imagination!

Very Good

Wonderful, please write more on this!

PLEASE continue the story!!!!

I hope you continue this story. Looking forward to the next installment.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEZ RIGHT MORE. I LOVED THIS STORY IT HAD ME COMING OVER AND OVER AGEN!!! WOW

TAYLOR H

this is amazing

mainstream, this story would do well! this was so well written and well laid that every trait, quality, idea feels natural, as though we all knew about dragons and their customs...
and not to mention how hot their sex was. i am not into bdsm, just slightly, little whispers of no or a slap on the ass during sex, but not whips and the such, wax burning my pussy, but this story was so hot i know i will be reading it again

MOREMOREMORE!

Please write many more chapters, my pussy will thank you.

Fabulous

Your story is absolutely fabulous. You are a magical, erotic dreamweaver, and I pray you will weave further tales.... you simply must! And I shamelessly beg for more.

Fantastic

Great story. Thanks
Richard

Wonderful

Absolutely wonderful story that drew me in, and had me begging for more!! Would love to see more chapters of this. Reminds me a bit of the start of Dragonriders of Pern by Anne McCaffrey.

Sweet!

Very nice dude very detailed, and kept you the storie from begain to end

Wonderful Story

You wove your tale masterfully and ended it beautifully. What a wonderful statement your story makes on the freedom of submitting! Torturing her with orgasms? Have you perhaps had some experience in that area? I believe so, or you could not have written this story so well. Pray continue!

Great!

You did a wonderful job on this story. It had all of the erotic elements I was looking for. Your use of description was brilliant! The way the pleasure torture was a great effect. The only thing I can suggest is longer, sex "scenes", but that is a personal preference really. The longer and more detailed the hotter. You truly have a way with words and I hope to see more chapters of this story released.

Luv your stories

I cant wait to see more of this story, I have also read all of your other stories, you are one of my favorite authors.
NEO

WOW great job

That was great now u need one with a night elf ^_^ I would write one my self but im only good with action -_-

-Praz-el

Intricately Exquisite, Delightfully Arousing!

This story is woven so beautifully, and delicately that by the end of it I have become aroused in intense delight. Your story-telling is very ingeniously devised, and thought out. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. - Jaydia (Why won't it let me log in? Keeps saying Invalid usermane or password, but I know its correct. )

Heroic fantasy mixed with BDSM...........

what more could a girl ask for??? This was the first time i have read Your work, will go looking for more!! :)

Amazing

I just read this one. going to look for more. I am a lover of dragons... and now want to find my own Dragon Master. Great JOB

Very erotic and certain part very comically funny

Love it.

Like the part when Marged waited and waited to be eaten alive only that the dragon man kept looking at her. She has a fiery tongue that makes your heroine more adorably vocal instead of those other heroine that always seems to be at loss of words.

yum!

Thanks for the story it was wonderful, the characters where wonderful and the polt was strong...only one small ciritique, spend a ittle more time editing after you have finnished writing your masterpiece, there seem to be a few hers where there should be his.

!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this! It was the best story I have ever read on this site!

A masterpiece of submission

Beautiful imagery. The anticipation of the torture was exquiste and the cure for the pain and wounds inflicted was genius. Wouldn't I like to be a dragon lady too. I don't think your story needed much in the way of editing. It was well executed and a very enjoyable read. Yummy! Give us more dragon erotica please.

Bran is delicious!

I liked the way the story built. The author has a good sense of what dominance and submission are really about. My only suggestion: proof read a little more carefully. Typos and spelling mistakes distract from an otherwise lovely story.

Fantastic

Great stuff! First one of your stories I have read but looking forward to reading the others.

My favorite

I am a personal fan of fantasy erotica and this story is so far my favorite. I love all of your work and this one is the cherry on the sundae.

This story was great!

I loved this story. Bran is amazing. The power he has is very erotic. I can't wait for the next story. The only things that took away from the story were the spelling and grammar mistakes. But that is trivial compared to the talent that this story reflects. Bring on the next chapter! Your fans are waiting!

Anouther chapter please.

So great so wonderful this one is not my personal favorite to play to. The spelling doesn't bother me and the characters so wonderful. I know that this was the end but to me and everyone else its the beginning. I know that if you wrote another chapter my pussy would love you so to speak lol.

Good stuff

I have always had a keen interest in the mythical and mysterious. This is fabulous work.

Wonderful!

It made me feel like a young woman again, just being introduced to erotic stories on the web without making me feel guilty for reading it. The details of the world were fleshed out and believable... and the story makes me wish that you would turn this into a series of books.

ooos and ahhhs

love the story line and the love, but there is nothing on his part in the love.

it is halfway good. but it feels like he is the orcastrator of her pleashure,
and one sidded sex isan't sexy to me

great story

i love the story line, the character, everything, it kept me on the edge. great job

Fantastic

You did this wonderfully. I never thought I would find a dragon story, let alone such a good one. Continue it please? Marged and Bran deserve another chapter.

Mmmm.. dragons!

It's one of the best stories I've ever read on here.

WOW!!!

Loved it!! Had been looking for good stories esp mythological stuff & this was just the ticket! Please, please do give us another chapter at least!

INTRIGUED........

This is the first time I have ever read a story of this genre from start to finish and I have to say I loved it! It is definately not my usual reading material but I will be reading more of Your work!! ThankYou!! (intrigued 48 yrs old UK female!!) xXx

Also intrigued

I'm also very intrigued by this. I loved it and would be thrilled to hear more.

Great

Very great story! Hope there will be more to come! There is so much more than can be told!

Wonderful!

This was a great read, beautifully written! I hope you decide to continue this story.

brilliant

more please

Wow

I loved your story, and hope there is much more to come

Love at First Word.

I just loved the story, but there was one thing I didn't like. You really need to edit it. Some examples are, "her hard length into her" "a willing an eager participant" and "not trying to escape buy searching the skies". Other then a few errors like that, it was a great story and I hope to read more of your works.

Excellent

Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed watching the characters grow in their roles. When you feel the time is right and you find patience to finish the destiny of the two characters. I am very interested to see where this adventure leads. I enjoyed how you have woven the demands of some BDSM into it and its piqued my interest on the subject.

Comforting

Most of romantic sex stories are written about ordinary people with strong sexual desires and perversions. I was delighted when this story took me to the fantasy world with sexual scenes. I like when my imagination works through all story, rather than just sexual intercourse. Thank you for this art piece.

Delightful

The story never seemed to stop being interesting and I was hooked on reading it. When I got to the end I was disappointed that there wasn't more.

Was completely turned off by this story of rape and torture...doesn't matter whether or not it was eventually enjoyed...disgusting

Very Enjoyable

I was very interested in this story. Not many dragon stories on this site that I have seen so far. I know most don't care for the idea of rape but I find it rather thrilling. There are a few errors in the story but other than that the story was utterly perfect. Would of loved to hear about when he took her to the forest and chased her. *Giggles* But perhaps that is for another story.

i wish

i wish that we got to know what she looked like in dragon form

oooh!

im about to start cooing at how romantic and erotic this was. I believe this is my overall favorite story and i crave more. Being the spanking fanatic that i am, i would of loved to see a spanking scene thrown in there. Haters be damned. I found myself giggling and filled with numerous emotions while reading this.