Well wriiten. I do like occasional male domination stories but this is a little extreme. I mean if you want love it cannot ever be one sided. And the falling in love part was not believable at all.kinda forced. Like as if you had to make the girl fall in love so she felt an ache inside her? Seriously?
P.S - The main guy is kind only with words.
And we all know that actions speaks louder than words.
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Too much.
Well wriiten. I do like occasional male domination stories but this is a little extreme. I mean if you want love it cannot ever be one sided. And the falling in love part was not believable at all.kinda forced. Like as if you had to make the girl fall in love so she felt an ache inside her? Seriously?
P.S - The main guy is kind only with words.
And we all know that actions speaks louder than words.
Nice!!
I loved it's! Hope there is more to their story!?! Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your work.
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