Arranged Marriage Ch. 02

Aw. This is cute.

David's such a sweetheart.

David needs a set

of balls he needs to tell his mother to stay the hell out of his married life and tend to her own spouse. If he can't stand up for his wife he don't got none! Yes Ladies I am a Husband of 31 Years. BTW not bad writing and decent story.

He's a nice guy but god, I can't stand a momma's boy or a guy who can't stand up to his mother. He should ask her to go along with his mom as much as she can but with something like the riding that gives her joy, couldn't he try to help them come to an agreement? like she wear long sleaves and a hat so she tans less. And how long will the mother be there? B/c it is clear he won't stand up for his wife. Ugg! :)

Interested in the next chapter!

Haha, to those below, it's obviously going to be a part of some plot development.
Nicely done!

LOVED IT!!!!!

I love this story, please continue!!!!! I want to know if Violet loves him back, and hopefully David can talk to his mother about letting Violet continue to ride!!! I love David's character, he is so loving and gental!!! Need more!!!

I guess...

I love the idea of it, but I agree that David really needs to step it up here. I also feel that Violet is a little too whiny. Her "no sex, I said no" chant helps to reaffirm the reluctance, but it also makes her seem like a shrew.

why

why have you stopped writing on this site or writing peroid.you seem to have a talent for it and continue to tell your stories will only make you better.I feel you could become a great writer if you would try. ron from the U.S.A.