by brewdude2003
I just wanted to say that I disagree with the anonymous commenter who thinks your premise is silly. I don't think it is silly at all, just unusual - unusual, but plausible, considering all the strange college traditions out there, and therefore creative. After all, that's what writing is all about, isn't it? Slogging through all the same or very similar props and settings all time would get awfully boring. It's nice to come across a writer now and then who has fresh ideas, because it helps us shake out the old cobwebs, and realize that there are other possibilities out there. Keep up the good work, and feel free to continue this story. It has potential. Let's see if you can take the siblings' relationship even further - perhaps extending beyond their college years.
Brewdude2003,
Very well put together, keep up the work.
You just inherited a fan.
An interesting story to force the issue. Writing about the real life peeping and feeling would be helpful. Keep writing it can encourage others with the same desires.
just plain dumb not worth the space it takes up and the time it takes to read it. this would have been better off left in the writers head do us a favor and delete it. secret or not there is no way he would not have told her before she started at the school only a totally uncaring asshole would let her join the school without warning her.