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Buzz-Crackle

byBluebirdDreams©
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by Anonymous

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by lori196911/06/11

huh?

good story, but not a gay one.

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by BluebirdDreams11/06/11

I know right?

I submitted it as Erotic Couplings, I'm not sure why it got changed lol.

Thanks for the comment! This is my first story for literotica!

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by Anonymous11/06/11

Beautifully written and very sexy. You need to fix the category though; it's certainly not a gay male story.

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by MacDracor11/06/11

Wonderful first story!

I know the author. She wrote it as Erotic Couplings, and it got moved here for some reason. Regardless, I have to say well done! I can't wait to read more of your work!

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by nomoretears0011/06/11

Nice...

story. Too bad Lit moved it here, but hey, wouldn't have found it if that hadn't happened, LOL!

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by Anonymous11/07/11

Not only . . .

Not only was it not EROTIC coupling as written and submitted so we're told by the author , but was lusted as ooops Listed as
Submitted by BluebirdDreams ***(LOVING Wives)***

But wait, there's more. . . the subheading on the 'front Page' was . . .
"GAY MALE Male Buzz-Crackle "

Erotic, Gay-Male Loving Wives. Literotica has a tough audience.

Confusedly
Kilroy.

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by goodlife373811/07/11

Very sexy story. Not realistic in the theory of what sane swingers would do, but otherwise a sexy fantasy! Keep writing, I will watch for more stories from you.

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by Anonymous11/11/11

Brava!

Very well written and very erotic. Loved it!

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by tazz31711/11/11

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN TALE

of what a newbie might think sex was about, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by digdaddyrich11/12/11

I hope that she is just getting started

That there is a lot more guys ready to fuck her, and she is going to be fucked all night.

Thanks for the read.

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by Anonymous11/14/11

wow

i didn't know what to expect, but i have to say this was such a wonderful read, so descriptive, it pulls you in and makes you wish you were in the story.

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by Anonymous11/15/11

this story got into my head

Wow... you really made this story come alive, and then some. To say I enjoyed is an understatement, but I enjoyed the back and forth as she tried to take control, as well as the naughty naughty narrative. I suspect I'll be returning to read this again and again. You've got a sexy sexy mind :)

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by Anonymous11/15/11

I'm luving it

very nice - does find the sweet spots between my thighs :D

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by Anonymous11/15/11

Loved it!

I think every woman at some point fantasizes about this very thing!

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by Anonymous11/15/11

Nice work!

Is it wrong that I need a change of clothes now?

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by lonerider1006/30/12

wow

i havent read anything this exciting in a long time. please continue

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by tazz31706/30/12

SOMETIMES ITS BEST

to agree to dis-agree and say No Thanks. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by betrayedbylove10/06/14

Hot

Hot and heavy tale. I hope the husband had a good time also.

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by Anonymous02/21/18

I wonder who came next the husband or AN other she could be pleasured all night, and be well and truly fucked.

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