Buzz-Crackle

huh?

good story, but not a gay one.

I know right?

I submitted it as Erotic Couplings, I'm not sure why it got changed lol.

Thanks for the comment! This is my first story for literotica!

Beautifully written and very sexy. You need to fix the category though; it's certainly not a gay male story.

Wonderful first story!

I know the author. She wrote it as Erotic Couplings, and it got moved here for some reason. Regardless, I have to say well done! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Nice...

story. Too bad Lit moved it here, but hey, wouldn't have found it if that hadn't happened, LOL!

Not only . . .

Not only was it not EROTIC coupling as written and submitted so we're told by the author , but was lusted as ooops Listed as
Submitted by BluebirdDreams ***(LOVING Wives)***

But wait, there's more. . . the subheading on the 'front Page' was . . .
"GAY MALE Male Buzz-Crackle "

Erotic, Gay-Male Loving Wives. Literotica has a tough audience.

Confusedly
Kilroy.

Very sexy story. Not realistic in the theory of what sane swingers would do, but otherwise a sexy fantasy! Keep writing, I will watch for more stories from you.

Brava!

Very well written and very erotic. Loved it!

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN TALE

of what a newbie might think sex was about, TK U MLJ LV NV

I hope that she is just getting started

That there is a lot more guys ready to fuck her, and she is going to be fucked all night.

Thanks for the read.

wow

i didn't know what to expect, but i have to say this was such a wonderful read, so descriptive, it pulls you in and makes you wish you were in the story.

this story got into my head

Wow... you really made this story come alive, and then some. To say I enjoyed is an understatement, but I enjoyed the back and forth as she tried to take control, as well as the naughty naughty narrative. I suspect I'll be returning to read this again and again. You've got a sexy sexy mind :)

I'm luving it

very nice - does find the sweet spots between my thighs :D

Loved it!

I think every woman at some point fantasizes about this very thing!

Nice work!

Is it wrong that I need a change of clothes now?

wow

i havent read anything this exciting in a long time. please continue

SOMETIMES ITS BEST

to agree to dis-agree and say No Thanks. TK U MLJ LV NV

Hot

Hot and heavy tale. I hope the husband had a good time also.