All Comments on 'Keep Me Safe Ch. 04'

Oh. My. God! That was so MEAN! I really thought you had killed off Miles there for a second. Lol! I had tears forming in my eyes as I read Ryan being in a cemetery. You are CRUEL!

wooow! so much drama! awesome story!

Thanks for the editor's credit :) but you did most of it yourself.

You evil author!!! lol...great ending! :)

Actually had me worried there for a whole second! I didn't *think* you'd kill him off... but ya just never know, LOL! Congrat's on the editor, she's nice!

i was actually wondering if u would really end it like that... would be getting some really angry emails from my part..lolz..jus kidding..great story..loved it..cant wait to read more of ur stories as u post them..i will be checking in

...But I love you. Started to cry at the end and then realized Miles was not dead.

You almost had me there. I had to keep telling myself that these stories never end badly, but it just seemed like Miles was dead. Good job.

HOW COULD YOU!!!! You are evil! I never cried so much, before reading these stories. I LOVED IT. Keep writing

Hi everyone, I would like to thank those that have commented on KMS4 and would like them to keep on coming. I enjoy the feed back and it helps me work on improving my writing. I'm glad to say that I will be writing an epilogue chapter. Keep the comments coming x

I was going to scream if Miles died... but a beautiful ending keep writing

ooohhh so mean lol. I loved it. I really do think you should have had a conversation between them. We heard their feelings for each other in their thoughts. We never got to see them speak to each other about it or even say I love you to each one another when they were awake and in person. That's the only thing I would have said needed to be added. I would have liked to see Miles talk to him a bit more rather than always crying and falling asleep. He did that several times. It feels like you're a bit more comfortable doing thoughts than conversation. Try to add more in. Through conversation you could have showed Miles a bit stronger b/c of his love.

I loved it!!!!!!! I honestly thought my heart was going to jump out of my chest!! There are some stories that you can read over and over and wish that they wouldn't end well for me this is one of those stories. Loved it loved it, and if there is more on Miles and Ryan please keep them coming:)

I actually started crying when it said that Miles closed his eyes for the last time and when Ryan was in the cemetery, and when it said that Miles was still alive I literally froze and was like WHAT!? So mean but oh my god...so worth it! Keep it coming!

I almost died myself when I thought Miles was dead!! I about screamed..lol. I'm so happy Miles and Ryan are getting married and agree that I wish they had actually said I love you to each other. But I can't wait for the epilogue. Please please please write it soon!!!!

the scared the crap outta me.? i thought miley was dead..... you norty you are lol xxxxx

IS THE ANY MORE TO COME......PLEASE MORE LOVED IT

i frickin' thought miles dead i had almodt cried your so fucking awesome their are no words too describe your artistic work keep writing your just do gucking awesome gosh i sound like a nerd that just got their first calculator.

I LOVE this story. I thought Miles was dead...I was almost sick, but you pulled it out of the fire! Thank you! <3 <3 <3

My heart actually stopped beating and i was actually convinced miles was dead!!!! Actually cried tears of relief when he wasn't. Amazing story!! Loved it! X

I read the end before I read the series JUST BECAUSE I hate to start a story or series and find it incomplete. I'll just pretend that I didn't know that Miles didn't die though. Really nice story and plot twist at the end. Five stars for me.