this is a first time story so is in the right catagory. i think its wonderfully well written considering i dont usually enjoy gay sex stories. keep up the good work!
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Anonymous11/07/11
Is English your second language?
Get an editor, please! The story would be passable if the grammar and spelling mistakes weren't so prevalent!
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Anonymous11/08/11
WTF
Sorry to tell you man, it is technically first time. But this should really go in gay male. Was disappointed.
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Anonymous11/14/11
Dual-Categories needed
Sorry, not about the story, although it wasn't bad. Editor was needed...
But why doesn't Literotica have a multi-category option for stories? I have never understood that.
English
nahh i gotta disagree
this is a first time story so is in the right catagory. i think its wonderfully well written considering i dont usually enjoy gay sex stories. keep up the good work!
Is English your second language?
Get an editor, please! The story would be passable if the grammar and spelling mistakes weren't so prevalent!
WTF
Sorry to tell you man, it is technically first time. But this should really go in gay male. Was disappointed.
Dual-Categories needed
Sorry, not about the story, although it wasn't bad. Editor was needed...
But why doesn't Literotica have a multi-category option for stories? I have never understood that.
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