All Comments on 'Lady Killer'

The illustration I posted with this story has not been correctly placed. The illustration should be portrait, not landscape format - thus the man in the picture is standing - not lying down as he appears. I've informed Literotica. Hopefully they will fix it.

Thanks for reading.

had seen a movie once called Triangle where the same events keep repeating themselves .... repeating themselves ....repeating themselves ......

this poem reminded me of that horror flick ! some sadness in this poem touched my soul so i wept with the author in empathy , corpse-rider ,wherever you are , whoever you are i too grieve at sadness per se

I'm still not sure how I feel about this story. It was very unexpected! However, I rated it with five stars after reading it two times.

A revealing detailed tale of an erotic horror!

Total break with the normal.. Loved it ! Can't get the image of the naked woman in the cold wind out of my mind.

It only gets better!

Orpheum69