A Beating

Not erotic

That is strictly abuse, plain and simple. While there are people who like humilation, punishment and such, a father doing these things to his children is abuse.

Brilliantlly written, showing the obvious reality of what can only have been sexual abuse

(the judge was getting off on it). Not erotic, for me, thank god. Yeah, just plain abuse. Thanks for the insight.

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I agree - not erotic at all. No incest/sex.
Should be submitted under BDSM, Non-Erotic, Non-Consent/Reluctance or even under Fetish but not under Incest.

this is just plain abuse not incest you should never write another thing unless you get help from a human i can't even gie it one star

terrible

garbage!!!!!!!!!!! thats the best I can say about this.

hate it

i usually don't post comments but i will make an exception. this is just wrong! i did not enjoy this story, it does not belong anywhere in this site.

This is nothing but a story.. you guys have nothing wrong with reading about incest but find physical abuse wrong.. why is it okay for a father to fuck his daughter but not okay to beat her.. unforunately shit like this happens everyday. What did you think the story was going to be about.. the title says " A Beating"

and you clicked on it to read it... as did I.

Not that I agree with any form of abuse or incest for that matter..

In Wrong Section

This story really belong in Non-Consent/ Reluctance at least, maybe BDSM. Editing is not bad as editing goes, but you really need to read your own story to see where it belongs. As for the content - Well, all I can say is that it doesn't belong in this section

does not belong on this site

I thought it was a good story just wasnt right for this site. now for you readers that said this was wrong, that this was abuse, you all think about this next time you think to yourself whats wrong with the world today. If I was to tell yuou about some of the whippings i recieved as a kid, you would say the some thing but i turned out ok. Keep writing just pay attention to where you post.

I was hoping for a turnabout revenge story

one where the victim gives the abuser a dose of their medicine and makes them their bitch.

guess I'll keep looking

Worthless

First of all it is no more that a ripoff of the event of the girl from Texas that her father beat her over music. Nothing at all sexual about this story, just an abusive man beating a woman. To each their own but you may need therapist or at least more hugs from mommy.

Hot

Really did enjoy it, tho should be more bdsm than incest. Hopefully there will be more chapters also.

Pointless

What was the purpose of this story? He bashes her, then violently rapes her then leaves her alone. If that was the case, then it should have been a 'I Spit on your Grave' type of story where she sleeked revenge.
3/10

This is creepy, unsexy and unoriginal.

Yeah, this isn't sexual at all - it's just a shameless, creepy ripoff of that horrible Texas case where a judge beat his poor, disabled daughter. Hell, you didn't even bother to change the names. Fuck off. I enjoy a good BDSM story, too, but this isn't safe, sane and consensual.

Abuse?

The girl in the story knew she was breaking house rules when she put the music on her computer and bought the make up and bought the frilly underwear, and was disciplined for it. The father will not any Parent of the Year awards.

This story reads very well, considering its powerfully disturbing subject matter. It is outside the romantic, breathy, matter-of-fact 'this is how i came to have sex with a blood relative' genre of famial relations. But it is an encounter between a young woman and a VERY strict authority figure.

worst story

this is the worst story i have ever read!
i dont see the point of it, he beats her then rapes her...
what is the point of that. you need to seriously get a grip and re-write!

Whatever

anyone may say about the content, this was very well-written. I applaud your bravery in posting it.

The gayest story

That was the most stupidest shit I ever read in my life and who the fuck gets extremely mad over some fuckin music on fuckin computer and that is true this shit is not sexual and the fucking title sounds like the girl tortures the abusive father and it also sounds gay a beating what is that I would have wrote a better story

Fuck this shit

Fuck this shit I will kill you

Cannot wait for more. Please continue this.

More please

I enjoyed it and would like to read more.

It wasn't erotic to me, but it was very well-written.

Damn...

This was really well written! It wasn't awfully erotic but I'm sure you could take it to deep, dark places. ;) Over all, I enjoyed it, maybe rape will be this abusive father's next step in the world of punishment.

Horrible story

I hope someone rapes the father in the next chapter. Abuse without consent is an act of rape. Shame on you for writing such a story.

Love it :)

I would like to read more, make this more taboo!!! I relate to this story and want to see where you take it :)

one of the best stories on abuse

wish he would have raped her. Then also had a few of his friends come over and abuse her. please write more.

diseased

Wishing for a rape, even in a story, is sick and unconscionable. This is sick,irredeemable, and shouldn't even be in I/T.

YOU A SICK FUCK

Never write another sentence, this is utter filth. Dark and totally repulsive.

Interesting

Good start, but missing the grand finale. [I'm hoping for a sequel with more oomph]
As for these other comments, "Abuse without consent is an act of rape"?

That doesn't even make sense. He abused her in this story, he did not rape her. They are not the same thing. I can't believe I even have to point that out.

Also, if you don't want to read something fucked up and potentially offensive what the HELL are you doing looking at stories in Incest/Taboo?

fathers like that rather real or fictional should be done away with and locked up no one should treat a child in that manner that is why they have laws in place. Now a story of love and sex is fine even incest as long as both party's are ok with it but this story was pure to put it plainly i would of given the story a minus mark if i could

Fucking Disgusting

Are you fucking serious with this shit?! This is utterly disgusting and cruel. Only a sick fuck would write about shit like this!

In the Wrong Place

You have a lot of potential as a writer, and I like how I felt just as scared as if I were Hilary myself. But this is a site for erotic literature. The reason people are so disgusted is because they were hoping to "get off" but they didn't. Good short story you just need a more mature audience.

Pure Garbage

This story is a twisted piece of pure crap. Sick ass people who write this shit needs help badly. To be able to even think of crap like this says so much about the author. GET HELP!!!

interesting but misplaced

I read this entire piece and I have to say... you have some interesting skills as a writer...your words had me from the beginning...I felt her fear And his anger...although I agree...this was probably not the place for something such as this...I can say you have true talent...never let the anger of others allow you to doubt yourself..keep strong in your talent

so frist off it words not happening in real life sec if people who right this it builds up and then they want to tire it in life ok and im nice person in life ok so think about every one as a dark side

Relatable

Honestly the people who write over and over that this is "disgusting" or "sick" or just plain "wrong", don't understand that this happens, and frankly it happened to me, countless times, and frankly as an adult this is the attention I crave from men because of my father, my father who now has a 1 year old daughter who I hope won't get the same treatment I did. Thank you for putting this out there, because while the story might be fiction, it's a reality for some many out there.

so this is all about child abuse?!

Is that all? Don't find it sexual at all....is this specifically written for sadist?!

hot

Its fantasy. It doesn't mean you condone it in reality. I was waiting for him to sodomize her. He wouldn't fuck her pussy because that would take her virginity or perhaps result in an incestuous pregnancy. But he could break her red welted ass.

Why?!

I have absolutely no idea as to why you would post something like this on a erotic site....

WHAT???

Where the hell is the sex!!!!!!