fucking hot as hell. good story.
Great attention getter, jumping right in with not alot of boring detailed buildup. great form, but the ending was a let down. Needed a bit more to it. Kinda like a fizzled orgasm. Overall, great story line. Keep it up!
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fucking hot as hell. good story.
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Great attention getter, jumping right in with not alot of boring detailed buildup. great form, but the ending was a let down. Needed a bit more to it. Kinda like a fizzled orgasm. Overall, great story line. Keep it up!
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