Love Lost, Then Found Ch. 06

Well.....

Rough transition, between #05 and #06. But the story was explained. Still.....it could have been written with a more smooth segue.

I've read all chapters so far and all seem rushed and not long enough, this one in particular, you also need an editor.

Elsie?????

Agree with the comments about the rough transition between Ch.5&6. Where was Amy's mom....she seemed more than capable of making sure her daughter wasn't forced into an unwanted marriage. Not really a believable turn of events.

Terry-bubble!

Good writing. Good grammar. Good story line, then it went to HELL in a handbasket. Too many questions to start to ask. So, I'll just stop here and start looking for one of your better stories.
de Jay

Take her back?

Poor little rich girl when given a choice beteen Daddy's money Hank, she went with the money. Stay away from her!