All Comments on 'On the Bus'

by Imsureryou

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice and romantic but...

Maybe it s just me, but in a Bus story I d expect some sexual behavior while riding the bus. This one is just about 2 people who met in the bus and then went home together

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

whoever this anonymous is... i dont know why u keep on analysing every story and being critical about it...just chill and enjoy the thrill...if u dont like it skip and go on to the next story...computers have the skip edge...

velcro_zippervelcro_zipperabout 10 years ago
Incredibly tense and erotic

Sometimes the best sex is anonymous and mysterious, and you captured it here.

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