All Comments on 'Whispered Foreplay'

Good work, Kitten. ;) Keep making more!

nicely done, another good example of less being more..

thank you ..

I can;t wait to read more...

Can be so erotic

like waves hitting the beach upon a high tide,

with such brute force

till totally satisfied

then gently recede,

leaving nothing but a faint mark on the sand.

'In-between my silky thighs

Moistness seeping

Running out and down

My wet lips'

In so few words, you capture the moment and the intensity. Delicious....

You captured foreplay perfectly

I LUV your style...

This captures for me the first time with someone new. Beautifully erotic.

Mistress. You make my imagination go into overdrive. I am aroused, my breathing has increased and I find I am thinking of you and how it will feel to please you.

silky thighs...best line ever

I really enjoyed this. I liked the use of descriptive s and the flow of the words. Not to mention the poem itself. Not my favorite of yours, that would be My Pet for obvious reasons, but this ranks second right behind it. To me though, while My Pet jumped out at me, this one shows your in a stronger light as a writer.

just a whisper alone can sometimes do it for me... it's a beautiful part of foreplay...

Like a caress.

Foreplay drives me nuts and reading this made me very aroused and moved.

Also, extend the foreplay to make the sex memorable for her

Such a tempting little tease of foreplay. Beautiful.

Very teasing, and sensuous!!

What could be better. It is filled with sensuality.

Foreplay is where the seduction begins!

The teasing of first the skin and then the mind.

The gentlest touches have the greatest effect.

Whispering adds the sense of hearing to the sense of touch, as well as, adding a sense of mystery.

Perfume for the sense of smell.

Sweat, the sensing of moisture and heat.

Gentle kissing all over adds another dimension yet.

The sounds of the moaning of your lover resonating in your head.

What could be more erotic.

Yes, I love foreplay!