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Great
Simply great.
Wine?
I didn't like that part much. Emma seemed like the type to be more careful about that kind of thing. And even though David is an eye doctor, you'd think he'd still be against drinking while pregnant as any other doctor would be, especially when the fetus in question is his own. Otherwise really great chapter, I enjoy the writing style a lot and it's an overall excellent story.
how embarrassing!
Oops :( I honestly don't know what I was thinking with that part. Everybody makes mistakes I suppose! Sorry about that.
Actually, my wife was allowed to drink a small glass of wine everynight night when she was preggers.. As long as she doesn't go overboard, there shouldn't be a problem..
Love the story, definitely wouldn't complain about seeing another chapter though.. Great work. :)
Nice story
Nice story! Onwards to the next chapter! Don't let us wait too long!
Good work!
Beautiful story! This has the sound of being a final chapter, but it's been a great story, from #01.
Wine
ARRGGG! I know some women drink a glass of wine here or there while they're pregnant and nothing happens, but why risk it? You want a healthy baby ... no alcohol!
Other than that, good story!
Great story!
I love stories like this. Just a little of drama but not to much. Glad his mother came around. Looking forward to one about the brother.
More puppy love
Oh please please please write more on this couple i love them so much they are just starting to be a family and just please please please write more :)
PUPPY LOVE
I belive that there should be another chapter to this one. So that we all know how it all turn out for him and his brother. Seem like to mother has a turn around all ready but still need to know for sure. Hope that u can find it in ur heart for a follow up on this one.
More!
More!
That's all I have to say
Well Done
Your excellent story was wrapped up quite nicely.
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