Love in the Cross Hairs Ch. 03

Good story,but wish it was not so long between chapters.

Great story

But I also wish it was not so long between chapters...

Faster Please

This is such a great story and so well written I hate to ask you to rush it but the other commenter's are right the only thing that could be improved would be how long between chapters.

Too long a wait

It seemed to take forever for you to write the next chapter and then when you did not much happened. It was still enjoyable but it could've been condensed into 1 of maybe 2 pages.

Thank God!

At last, the third chapter is submitted but my hunger is still unsatisfied.

Please..... shorten the gaps between the chapters.

From the author

I hope someone reads this. It's a busy time of year professionally, and it takes time away from writing the story. I don't want to rush this. I really like Laurie and Peter, and I want to tell their story the best way I can. So please be patient.

This had better not be the end. Surely, you won't leave us hanging like this too long...

more plz?

Are you going to finish this?

It'll be nice...

...to read the next part of Peter and Laurie's story.

ITS USUALLY A TRAGEDY THE BRINGS FAMILIES CLOSER

the deeper the tragedy the closeness beguiles, TK U MLJ LV NV

Close The Deal?

"If on the other hand things started to shape up; then they'd step in at the propitious moment and help the Dawson boy close the deal on favorable terms for all."

Maybe my mind works differently, but to me "help the Dawson boy close the deal" means help him marry Laurie. This doesn't seem like something Aurora would approve of!

BTW, who is "Autumn" in the Ch 4 description? Was that supposed to be Aurora?

And given the families history, I think Peter is going to be VERY leery of Carroll as "benefactor"!