All Comments on 'Ebony'

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DecadentdessertDecadentdessertover 12 years ago

Part two don't stop! Not often there's black love on this site. Incest isn't reeally my thing but black love is. I am looking forward to more of your submissions.

monroelovemonroeloveover 9 years ago
another

Please name another chapter to this story I want to knowwhat happens next .

Funtimefrank53Funtimefrank53almost 8 years ago
More Ebony Incest

I really liked the story & would like to hear more Ebony incest stories. I am into all incest stories but I haven't seen a lot of Ebony stories.

spoiler22mspoiler22mover 6 years ago
Good

I liked it a lot. There isn't enough incest stories involving black families. I just have to caution you to becarefull with switching back in forth from 1st to 3rd person. The story almost read as a flirtatious fantasy sent to your crush. Either way it was good. can't wait to read what you do next.

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOnealmost 6 years ago
Focus...

A good read. But you should try to focus on the story being either a 1st person or 3rd person. But overall, I would recommend someone else to read this. You should be commended for doing a black incest story. there just aren't enough of them. I hope that you continue to write more.

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