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Quite morbid
It is like being at a party and getting stuck with this person who wants to tell you everything about the nasty operations they had to get.
Wow!?!
As usual, an excellently WRITTEN story. Problem is that the two main characters are awful! Thank God they remained married, rather than inflicting themselves on others. I see no love whatsoever through most of their marriage. Why they remained together is beyond me.
Thanks for sharing, but I hope I like the next group of characters better.
The cobbler
Best Installment Yet
Powerful, yet understated.
SURE, Carol would not fuck her husband, divorced him because she did not like sex.
Then she fucked her husband's best friend who was the husband of her best woman friend. I hope that her pussy grows shut and she has to piss through a straw. Not that I am vindictive but she was a fool and at the last she knew it. He was better off without her the way things were, at least he got laid a lot before he died. She should have had the cancer, not him, if one of them had to have it.
Sure hope Tom divorces the bitch
He cheated, she cheated. Then she broke his confidence and called Carol when he expressly told her not to. He should have realized who she cheated with and been done with her. And why would Bob leave Carol anything? She got her half and lied in getting it. No travel my ass. He should have left everything to his kids and grandchildren. And I've never heard of a man making his kids buy things from the house during an auction. Why wouldn't he just let them take things, then auction things? Too bad you had to give him cancer. Much better to give Carol cancer and let him live to a ripe old age and enjoy life. BAH!
Enjoyed it
What's the lesson he wanted young people to learn? Hoe not to screw up a marriage, or watch porn so that you can become a super stud.
story
what a greatly written story. but with a very sad ending.
so sad
A real tear jerked this one but very well written.
divorce
there's never a good time for a divorce but damn after 42 years! Actually he was better of without the bitch and she was a hypocrite playing the loving wife role at the funeral.
just when I thought it couldn't get any darker
you have him die of cancer.
happy days are here again
his best friend promises to not tell anyone, but tells his wife anyway, who tells the one person he least wanted to know, his ex wife. and oh yea, the loyal best friend also screwed the soon to be ex before the divorce was final.
Damn
What a dark tale. I think it was a bit hypocritical for the ex-wife to profess her love while he was on his death bed. I hope he didn't hear it. Both cheated while still married and both were happier after the divorce. This was a difficult tale to read but it was also quite remarkable. I saved my rating for the end and I can't see it as being less than five stars. Excellent
tears and heart filled with joy
Loved the whole story. I read every chapter. #5 brought tears to my eyes. Keep writing. Please. Your a great author.
No Winners
Sad, dark, depressing tale.
A quick review
Bob was a cheating asshole
Carol was a vengful bitch
Tom was a sleezy asshole
The group was the biggest waste of skin that I've seen in a long time.
My first comment
Really love this site and more specifically you and a few other authors. Sometimes I can't help but think of that old song "Singing My Life with His Song" in many of these.
Cant help but wonder, the one he took to the grave? It had to be Dawn, didn't it? Carol went home and told her sister about the best sex she had ever had, and Dawn just had to try it just like Cindy's daughter. I knew it!
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