by bosombuddies
i'm loving your stories already!! keep up the good work!
My only problem with it is that I have to wait for the next part. <wry grin> Keep up the good work. 5 stars.
Why didn't I ever have friends like this? Killer stories! On the edge of my seat!
Where were these girls when I was that young????
HA HA....great read. I really "enjoyed" it...and will again I'm sure..
Favorited this one...
The series is very good and moves along well. I cannot wait for the next installment.
I absolutely can not wait for Bosom Buddies Ch.03, but it looks like i'm at your mercy, so please don't make us wait too long! 5 Stars
MOOOAR!! Seriously. Just steer away from a 6 person orgy, as it would ruin it, in my opinion. These characters are written so well, that I find it easy to remember which is which, and the realistic, youthful anxiety just adds to the flavor. You are a good writer, don't ever stop the word-smithing, as you have talent.
Great series so far! Even though it's fiction, in my opinion it's still plausible--it hasn't crossed the point of no return as being something incredibly crazy made up, which is what I think is half of the appeal. I haven't really noticed any grammar errors, so there's probably not any, or the story was too hot to even notice! The pacing is just right, you give your audience just enough, then in the second chapter you heat things up a bit. Nothing seems rushed, it's more than just a "he had sex with five women"...it is becoming a journey about friendship. I want to read more quickly, but please don't sacrifice the beauty of your writing for getting another chapter out quickly! Keep up the good work!
Please tell me you are going to continue this series..it's too well written and amazing to stop there..encore
Dear BB,
First of all, many thanks for the good words about "Halloween Favor." And congratulations yourself on a couple of sexy, whimsical, and well-written stories. I look forward to more.
Take care,
Quince
Phenomenally written! Perfect pacing, a pure delight to read! And please, as others have written, stay away from a 6 person orgy :) Such depth in these characters! Truly a wonderful story! Looking forward to Chapter 3!
I completely resonate with fellow author WatchingCloud when he says: "I find that good grammar, realistic characters, and (mostly) believable situations make for the best erotic stories.
Based on your first two offerings I give you A's on all marks. You've got the strong foundation to a highly erotic series going here. The paced approach you take is great, slowly revealing the personalities of these characters, and I'm loving every moment of it. Despite the unlikelihood that a quintuplet of prodigious bosomed beauties would gravitate in the same social circle, you give plausibility to the friendship that exists between them, and Ian. Like many others, I am not rooting for a six-way MFFFFF orgy (Perhaps I should have my penis checked). Given the way you've carefully constructed the story thus far, I can't see that sort of thing happening soon, if ever. Keep up the great work and I am anxiously awaiting chapter three.
Alright, Already - You've got us hooked ~ Sooooo... WTF is Chapter 3 ???
PLEASE ?
You capture first sexual experiences in such a surprising way. The girls' unbelievable bodies are more believable because of the way all the characters handle each other, their friendships, and sex. It's why this story of masturbation and a handjob is miles hotter than so many stories on here about hardcore sex. I'm okay if this series never reaches penetration.
Great Story. Great Characters. Well Written. I am greatly enjoying this series.
Really great story!
The VCR under the bed...
Concerns over Stephanie...
The truth or dare with that awesome bra change and first sight of Corrine's awesome assets!
And major news for Talia!
Just great!
Thanks!
I'm only two stories in and I'm on double digits in orgasms! This is gonna be good!
Just enough, they are just friends and I feel like I played along. Although nothing happend here, truth or dare?
I can't imagine myself having been able
to balance my lust with these friendships! Whew!!!
It’s just sad to know that this series will end, and that you haven’t added new chapters or stories to Literotica in years. Here’s an idea. How about a twenty-five year high school reunion with the six best friends and their significant others? This story is leaning toward getting Ian and Elizabeth together. Talia could bring her wife, maybe Amy? That just leaves three more. One of them is divorced (or widowed), and horny. One of them has a cheating husband. And the last has a handsome, devoted husband who can join in on the on the eventual reunion orgy.
Enjoyed the easy progression of Ian with his Girls. The pace is just right, and the variety of experiences the Girls have had gives each of them an attractive character. Hope that Ian can continue to enjoy the unfolding of his Girls' sexuality. Thanx for the Read!
Don’t really want to know timing of events. Makes it more fun and easier to slip into the fantasy. You haven’t mentioned phones before so automatically we go with it as a time without phones. When you have a good story like this we can get drawn in and not fret of details. Details matter for bad stories. Stories where they have no substance or plausibility.
(12/4/2021) Another well-written, vivid, very erotic, and yes, romantic story. Does romance only work for a couple? Maybe not. I love all six characters. They are well developed and fit so neatly in this narrative. Certainly an enjoyable read. 5 stars.
Good progress from part 1, the temperature is clearly rising, I look forward to reading the next part.
Rgds AL
Such an erotic excellent story. It is incredibly rare that a group of teenage girls would accept a boy into their clique unless he was either a boyfriend of one which is still almost as rare since things discussed at certain ages are considered secret and sacred or if the boy was clearly gay or trans.
Nice going from the first chapter and i like that things are getting pretty much intense slowly as it is. Great job
Just one thing though, I am confused about the towel scene where Ian got in with Amy. Are they standing? Sitting? Standing front to front? Sitting side by side? Or whatever cause I cant figure that out haha
Yessir still a great story! Fun to reread it after a few years, still hot. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
This is my second read of this series...I am glad I came back...these girls are BEAUTIFUL, and their treatment of MC is Ssssoool 🔥 🔥 🔥 hot, hot, hot...
Another 5-star read and rating...and on to Chapter 3!
I like Ian but sometimes hes a bit femine and Im thinking did a woman write this but wrote it from a guys perspective.
I think this series portrays a perfect friend with benefits. Like he'd definitely make a good voupme with anyone but no one wants that as of yet so they just enjoy each other
I appreciate good writing. Whag makes a story "good?"
"Good" occurs when an author tells a tale in a way that makes me keep reading even when there is something else happening that is of pressing importance.
Thank you for writing a truly "GOOD" story!!!
Nice chapter. I enjoyed the progression of the story. My only issue was that you had multiple words misspelled.