is for the one it is intended. TK U MLJ LV NV
Thanks for sharing.
The thing that strikes me most is how unlikeable Dieter *should* be, and he just isn't. The ending is a perfect wrap-up that has just the right amount of uplift, without contrasting too sharply with the rest of the story.
Pilot, first time I've read one of your stories. I was pleasantly surprised. And, yes! I really did vote a 5 star. Nice job. Babs
working a cruise vessel for vassals. TK U MLJ LV NV
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A PRESENT GIVEN
is for the one it is intended. TK U MLJ LV NV
Good Read!!
Thanks for sharing.
Well done!
The thing that strikes me most is how unlikeable Dieter *should* be, and he just isn't. The ending is a perfect wrap-up that has just the right amount of uplift, without contrasting too sharply with the rest of the story.
Nice Read
Pilot, first time I've read one of your stories. I was pleasantly surprised.
And, yes! I really did vote a 5 star. Nice job. Babs
#2 A DANCING GIGALO AND A THIEF
working a cruise vessel for vassals. TK U MLJ LV NV
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