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Thank you
A wonderful story, I would like to see more about the life of Mark. 5*
Ending
I expected a happy ending, but nevertheless it's a very good read. Thank you.
Need more
A very interesting character who needs more development either in more chapters, or in sequel stories. I can't agree that the ending is not good, or even happy, because there was no future with Robin. She is going to have a very unfulfilled life and it would be fun to revisit her about fifteen years down the road.
Howewll = dysfunctional
It appears that the only one with the head screwed on straight is Rachel!
And yes, there is more story available, if you care to persue it.
THIS WAS A GOOD STORY
TOLD ABOUT LIFE AFTER THE "WAR" AND HOW SOME DEAL/DEALT WITH RELATIONSHIPS AND MOVING FORWARD. TK U MLJ LV NV IF THE "SAGE" CAN COME UP WITH AN EPILOG OR SEQUEL I AM SURE IT WILL BE WELL RECEIVED. mlj
sequel
Thank you all for the comments, good and bad. I have a sequel underway, "Full Court Press", and I will post it as soon as possible.
Great Series!!
Your characters are very well written, and believable. I am looking forward to the next installment. Thank you!!
Very Good Series!
I really liked this series and want to see a new story soon. Thanks for sharing, I really enjoy your work.
#2 ALL HE SAID TO HER
comes back with a vengance, pretty good sex for a tune-up. TK U MLJ LV NV
Much Better
You excel in this type of story!
Not a romance.
Romance involves love, this had none. Wrong catagory
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